Island of Moreau
harleykay
Official Critique Request
Gaia Username: harleykay
Character Name: Katherine Harley (yeah, i know....)
Serum Animal(s): possible lion/swan combo to make a sphinx, but also up for badger or otter
Quest Thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=3530069


Thanks infinitely for doing this. Like a mother, I'm kind of blind towards the faults in my history/character/ideas in general, so the help is GREATLY appreciated.

Once more, thank you!!!!


I don't think that it's a bad idea to keep a couple of different animal choices for your character. I think that the sphinx concept is really neat, but, obviously not every opportunity is going to allow for a mythical combination serum. So it's good to have backups if you are able to get onto the island through a different opportunity, or if one of your ideas gets taken.

The character's personality sounds well-rounded and believable.

Her family's reaction is also very believable in regards to her father's disappearence (trying to find him, sending her to therapy).

*laughs at the irony of the sphinx reference pic you found* Sabin's flattered you liked it, and says that it was one of his earliest CG works, and he's sure he'd be able to do a much better job on a sphinx now ^_~

I'm usually one to advise against spontaneous developments of psychoses after the transformation (as usually it doesn't make sense without the potential being there) though admittedly with all of the physical changes going on, synthesia seems mor elikely of a side-effect. ALTHOUGH, if you do go with Sphinx, there would't be a lot of morphological changes in her head, and thus making it less likely?

Anywho, aside from that part, She looks good to go smile
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