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 Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 9:29 pm
I've PMed her, hope she gets it.
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Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 1:02 am
Haha! Shadow15 has made her return!...Sorry guys..I had to leave somewhere for a few days and well..things aren't going great right now so..yeah.
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Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 3:11 pm
Quote: Shadow15 Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 1:02 am Haha! Shadow15 has made her return!...Sorry guys..I had to leave somewhere for a few days and well..things aren't going great right now so..yeah.
But you will continue the fanfic? *puppy-eyes*
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Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 3:41 pm
This is such a great thread! I love it!
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Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 3:10 pm
*going back a few posts and being a critic* (stupid me being a critic) WingMirror I don't think this was one of your best. It confused me at some points. (possibly because of bad grammer who knows) But you still get a cookie. I would give it 3 out of 5 cookies.
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Posted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 1:24 pm
Quote: RinoaKitty Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 3:10 pm *going back a few posts and being a critic* (stupid me being a critic) WingMirror I don't think this was one of your best. It confused me at some points. (possibly because of bad grammer who knows) But you still get a cookie. I would give it 3 out of 5 cookies.
I see. I can't argue though I did put alot in my last Chappy. Sorry if there was bad grammer. I kinda write and check quickly.
So..hmm.....who's after Luna-chan?
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Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 3:30 pm
Alright, so is Shadow next or am I next?
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 11:07 am
Shadow is, but....I think she's having problems in life so....
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Posted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 11:34 am
I went ahead and did a Chappie, if Shadow has something she wants to go between the last chapter and this one I'll chage this one so it fits. This may be a bit short, if so I appologize.
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Axel sat at the nobleman's table, enjoying the feast of bread and roast meat and fine wine. He had been invited for a lavish evening of entertainment and social intregue in honor of the return of his Lord's son, Prince Riku, who had gone as far as Hallow Bastion to win the heart of the fairest creature in all the realm. Axel found that he could not keep his eyes off the heavenly vision that sat at the center of the table, the prize of the Prince himself. Axel had heard that his name was Sora, and that he was of good blood and high standing in the courts of his far away land. It was clear that the young man was far out of the reach of one so lowly as Sir Axel of The Land that Never Was.
Axel sighed, discontented. Beside him sat his best friend, Duke Demyx, who was very finely dressed in expensive purple velvet robes and gold jewelry. He was fairly successfully ignoring Demyx's bragging voice retelling the story of a recent romantic conquest, when suddenly, Prince Riku was standing before him, looking angry and dangerous. He shouted something, and before Axel knew what was going on exactly, he was in the stable preparing his faithful steed for a joust for the hand of fair maiden. Saddling Donald, his attention came to Roxas, Sora's brother. Roxas begged Axel not to go, crying that he would be killed, and that he could not live without his lover, but Axel knew that-
Beeeeep, Beeeeep, Beeeep.
The microwave brought Axel out of his daydream. “Oh, man, Demyx, is this the last hot pocket?”
“I just told you,” Demyx said, annoyed, “There's a list on the refridgerator of things to pick up while you're at work. You're really out of it lately.”
“Oh, sorry. I was just thinking about what Sora's mother told me yesterday,” Axel lied, unconvincingly, “Why would she want me to do something like that? I mean, I know Sora doesn't like Roxas, but why would his mother want me to hurt him?”
Demyx gave Axel a skeptical look. “What has Sora got anything to do with it? Don't tell me you're still carying a torch for that whiney little girl.”
“Don't,” Axel hissed, “call Sora a girl.”
“You never change, you know that?” Demyx speculated. “Why are you letting Sora, let alone his mother, tell you how to live your life? You seem pretty happy with what you've got, why are you still looking at what you don't have?”
Axel shook his head, “I just think it's weird she'd call at all, I mean, I'm dating someone who's not her son, and to my knowledge, Roxas hasn't talked to Sora since the day he came. How could he possibly be hurting him?”
“You mean you haven't noticed?” Demyx raised an eyebrow, “Man you're dense. Sora's been looking at you like a little lost puppy ever sense you decided to take Roxas to the dance.”
“I know that, but it's not Roxas's fault I like him. He can't help it he's gorgeous and funny and sassy and adorable and-”
“I get it, you like blondie-bear a lot. And guess what! You get to go to work and oggle him in less than an hour, so I suggest you eat your hot pocket and get ready like a good little Axel.”
“Yes, Ma'am.”
“Damn straight.” The phone rang. “Reno again.” Demyx picked the phone up long enough to hang up.
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“Whaddya mean you're into Mr. Leon?!?!” Zack asked, shocked.
“I mean he got all flirty with me and I liked it. He thinks I'm a teacher,” Cloud giggled.
Zack blanched. “You can't be giggling. Tell me you're not giggling.”
Cloud made a stern face, which quickly cracked back into giggles, then he bounced his silly little blond spikey self back into his house.
“This is so not happening to me,” Zack ran a hand through his meticulasly messy hair. “What to do, what to do...” He thought about his options. “He touches Cloud and I break his arm, and if he makes Cloud so much as sniffle I'll kill him. Better than that, I'll kill him anyway.”
Zack sighed. Then a light bulb went off in his head. “I could always ask my other best buddy what to do.” And then he made his way back to school. To Sephiroth.
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Roxas was annoyed. He'd already received eight calls, and he'd just arrived home. Hayner had just called to ask him if what he'd heard from Ollette (who had heard from Pence) was true.
“Snugglebunnies?” Hayner had asked, dismayed, “I thought you liked me?”
Roxas snorted at the concept. He wasn't the sort that dwelled on those sorts of feelings. Or he wasn't normally. There was something about Axel that changed that, something that made him more willing to accept ideas like “Snugglebunny” and “boyfriend.”
Roxas wondered why Axel had that sort of power over him. He supposed it was his warmth, his charm, his ability to make Roxas smile no matter how bad he felt.
Roxas had finally come to the realization, that yes, he loved Axel. Loved him loved him. Not just liked. There was a difference. The feeling he had now was like nothing he'd ever experienced, it was true happiness. Sure, some of the little annoyances that had come with it were disconcerting, but he felt that all the stress that had been invested into the situation was worth it.
“I have my guy,” Roxas sighed to himself, “and he's more than enough to make up for everything.”
He went through his closet, looking for just the right dazzling outfit to wear to the dance. The sorts of things he'd worn to dances before were just not going to cut it. Before, he'd focused on looking alluring, on attracting strangers like flies, but no more. He wanted to look perfect for Axel. It wasn't about looking sexy anymore. He'd already ruled out the cyber punk look, fishnets, and clingy tube tops. He wanted to look classy, like the kind of person who was good enough for his date. More than that, he wanted to look better than Sora.
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Kairi smiled widely, proud to tell Tifa and Aerith the good news. It was like some kind of dream, nothing this good ever happened to someone like her.
Riku sighed. The deed was done, and he knew that Kairi was probably off somewhere telling the fairytale story to all her friends. He felt dirty, not because he felt Kairi was unworthy or unpleasant, but because it seemed like a jerk thing to do with her, playing with her emotions like that. Come to think of it, maybe this wasn't such a great idea anyway.
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Sora remembered what Aerith had told him, that he could call anytime he felt like he needed advice. Now felt like a good time to start. He dialed her number and let the phone ring three times before she picked up.
“Hello?”
“Hi, Aerith,” Sora twirled the phone chord around his finger. “This is Sora.”
“Oh, hi Sora! Are you feeling any better, you seemed not to be feeling great at school?”
“Well, I've got this problem,” Sora paused, collecting himself, “See, there are these two guys that I like. They both like me and everything, but it's complicated. One of them I've known for a really long time, and things have kinda developed between us, and... Well, we're technically dating now, I think. We're at the kissing and going places stage now. But the other guy really wanted to go out with me and I kept saying no and now I feel bad because I really like him too and now he's with someone else and I know I can't have him anymore and it's driving me crazy and-”
“Wow, run on sentence!” Aerith's sweet voice teased, “I can tell you're really upset Sora. Um, I know you're not telling me their names on purpose, but I think I already know who you're talking about. Riku and Axel, right?”
Sora affirmed this.
“Look...” Aerith said, “I think I should tell you something. I don't normally spread stuff around, but if you're going out with Riku, I think you should know... He's seeing Kairi.”
“He's what?” Sora asked, surprised.
“Kairi told me they were going out today. I was a little surprised, as much as Tifa talks about you and Riku.”
Sora felt like he was going to cry for a few seconds. 'Could I really be this replacable?' he thought, before steeling his resolve. “That jerk!”
“Well, it could be a misunderstanding,” Aerith said, trying to help Sora stay optimistic. “I mean, maybe he just wanted to hang out with her and she took it to be more than it was.”
“No.” Sora said, slowly, “People don't make those kids of mistakes. I can't believe that philandering pig would have me going like that! Gosh! I trusted him!”
“Philandering pig?” Aerith asked, amazed at Sora's conviction.
“I gotta go, Aerith, thanks.”
Click.
“What have I done?” Aerith asked, hoping that she hadn't set something scary in motion.
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Roxas adjusted his name tag (which read 'Brian' because the owner hadn't thought 'Roxas' sounded very clean cut) and entered his place of work.
“Hey baby!” He turned, ready to shout something mean at whoever had cat called him, only to find it was Axel. He smiled, and then quickly frowned.
“I hate it when you call me pet names,” Roxas lied, accepting an embrace.
“Just for that, you get to restock the bacon.”
“Office romances. Damned from the start,” Roxas winked.
“We sure are, which is why we'll be together forever.”
Roxas liked that idea so much it frightened him. “Yeah, whatever.”
“What was that I said about bacon?”
“I love it when you give orders.”
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“RIKU!”
Riku turned around, only to see Sora in his room, glaring murderously.
“Don't think I don't know about your triffling ways, you philanderer!
“What?”
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 2:37 pm
LaLunaLupe I enjoyed that!!!!
Very good. ^ ^ It's getting better!! Huzzah!!
*claps for Luna-chan* Well done.
Okaie I will continue then!!! I promise even if it takes a while. Of course posting comments or so inspires me , butt hat's your choice. ^ ^
Wing Chappy next!!
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 3:37 pm
ooo i love it!!!!!! This story is getting so good! I can't wait to see what happens next!
bring on the leonXcloud mwahahahah
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 5:08 pm
Kingdom_Hearts_II ooo i love it!!!!!! This story is getting so good! I can't wait to see what happens next! bring on the leonXcloud mwahahahah!RAWR! me too
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Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 12:41 pm
Damn, this is getting really good.
Can't wait to see the confrontation between Riku and Sora! >w<
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 1:36 pm
Thanks for the reviews. I really enjoyed making Sora say the word "Philandering."
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 7:01 pm
i'm so sorry everyone! Someone has been hacking in my account and well I haven't been on much to write. I will write though! I promise! Give me time though..sorry again!
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