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*Pulls out the red Grammar Nazi pen*

Ok I have such a slow computer that it lags when I'm typing and takes literally about a minute to click on a setence to edit it........Second of all the amount of periods I use is ment to convey emotion and how I speak. Third of all you have mistakes in your typing as well, think about it, a person never starts a a sentence with and.......And lastly I put much more care into my role playing then I do in occ talking. Literate role playing is about more than punctation and spelling its about grammer and creativity as well as a solid understanding of the subject your talking about. I really believe that your bassis on rejecting me is rather weak,presumptious and unfair. Not to mention if you have a problem with my spelling, spellcheck was invented for a reason so just ask me and I'll use it.

Whoa Whoa Whoa!

Everybody just calm down and chill out okay?

Tony, why don't I take you on as a sort of apprentice alright? You can learn how to RP and get a few pointers in your grammer. Can we do that?

Then, after learning a bit you can re-apply to become a member of the White Lotus alright? Baby steps.

I hate people like you, that why I'm mean.

If you don't think that Literate think this!


Name: Shinji Hirako
Race: Shinigami
Age: 16
Height: 5,9
Weight: 185
Rank: 12th Division Captain
Physical Description: Shinji hair is White and Yellowish short hair and White and Black eyes. He keeps his Zanpakutou on his left side belt strap. He wears a standard Shihakushō and his white haori is a long sleeve
Personality: Shinji can be serious all the time, The only time hes not serious is when he helping someone out.. He really doesn't like to talk to much and show what he is doing. He likes to be hidden more than be showed. Also he like to improve his skills in Arcane Science and Technologies.
Zanpakutou:

Zanpakutou Spirit:Karl

Sealed Form:Double-Katana

Shikai Name/Release Phrase: Utsushi dasu, Karl

Shikai Powers/Attacks: The hilt of Shinji's zanpakuto takes on a white hue, similar to his hair, and the handle becomes wrapped in fine chain. Although it lengthens noticeably to a size comfortable for two hands, the hilt is otherwise unremarkable.

The blade of Kenil lengthens and the width increases to the size of Shinji's open palm. The blade, though strong, is spread quite thin. Despite the size of the hilt, the blade is still of a size easily handled by one hand.

One side of Shinji's blade is completely transparent. The other side is a perfect mirror. The blade is, therefore, difficult to see under normal conditions, especially in motion.

Spirit: Moving between shadows, the zanpakuto spirit is often revealed only by the silver glow of his predatory eyes. Taking the form of a large black demon with halo above his head, Karil is one for stalking his prey. He speaks gruffly, but displays wisdom and intelligence.

Combining wits with skill helps in earning the spirit's respect. Planning and timing are just as important as improvisation and ferocity to the dark feline.

The black-demon respects his enemies and rarely rushes blindly into any combat. Once battle is joined, however, Karil resents the idea of falling back. The patience during the hunt must be matched with viciousness during battle, so the demon believes, and so the demon expects of its wielder.

Zenhansha: If Shinji can bring the blade of his sword to bear, the mirrored side has the ability to reflect kidou and kidou-like abilities that strike it, by paying half the reiatsu cost of each attack. This is an angled deflection, however, so Shinji's must be wary of where the reflected attack will end up.

The ability is of no use against indirect attacks, and of limited use against kidou-like abilities. If Shinji does not recognize the spell, he can attempt to guess at the reiatsu cost, but if he uses less than half of the cost, it will not be affected at all.

Kanzenhansha: While looking through the clear side of the blade, Shinji can attempt to learn more about a target. Karil can roam freely within the image held in the blade and can ascertain information about targets seen there, which is immediately relayed to his wielder. The longer Shinji can keep the target in sight within the boundaries of the blade, the more useful information Karil can obtain. If line of sight or concentration is broken at any time, the process starts over.


Bankai Name/Release Phrase:Fushou Karil

Bankai Description: Shinji's eyes take on the same silver sheen that Karil's have.

The ground beneath Shinji illuminates in an immense circular pattern with a teal eight-pointed spinning star spreading out from the center. There are nine circles, each with a different color and symbol -- these denote the nine spheres of kidou as Shinji sees them, with one in the center and the rest at the tips of the star. The remainder of the circle is a dark orange with large, silvered kanji spread throughout.

The blade of Shinji shikai explodes outward into millions of tiny glass fragments. This glass dust fills the air around Shinji in a thirty-yard radius. Mostly invisible, the glass winks and flashes into sight periodically, giving the air within Fushou Karil's influence an unsettling sparkling quality. Those within the area immediately feel as if they're being watched, and will at times see a pair of silver eyes or the shadowy form of a Dark Demon prowling around them.

Shinji's hilt widens and forms a bright silver semi-circular guard from top to bottom. Its metal is etched with runes and kanji around the edges. An insubstantial blur in the air, the blade expands outward to five feet in length and sixteen inches in width. Despite its size, being immaterial it is still easily wielded in one hand -- the only weight is in the hilt. This blade immediately takes on the effects of Kidou Tsurugi.

Bankai Powers/Attacks:

Kidou Tsurugi: Shinji can imbue his sword with any equipped kidou of up to four slots. This grants the sword the properties of the kidou -- such as shocking or burning -- and gives the blade a distinctive appearance. Shinji can unleash the imbued kidou at the normal reiatsu cost either when striking the enemy or by launching the kidou from the blade itself.
Ōkasen (黄火閃, Yellow Fire Flash), and Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Fire, Crash Down),Tsuzuri Raiden (製本電, Bound Lightning)


Zenhansha Kigou: Drawing on his zanjutsu stat, Shinji is capable of condensing the glass powder surrounding him into the kanji for Zenhansha Kigou (全反射記号) in order to block kidou and kidou-like effects such as Cero. Shinji can reflect the energy back as if he had cast it himself (for better or worse).

Jumon Kousei: Shinji may condense the glass powder surrounding him into writing to form the incantation of any kidou spell he has equipped -- these glass symbols are as durable as his zanpakuto blade. These solid incantations empower the kidou greatly, significantly boosting its damage or strength, whether by ensnaring a bound opponent or by enhancing the efficacy of an attack.

Bankai Special Ability:

Kanzenhansha Ittai: Targets that fall within Fushou Karil's area are automatically under the effect of Kanzenhansha Ittai. Each round that they are within the glass field, Shinji garners more information about them. This will begin with simple things, such as names, but the ability digs deeper with every turn. Those with higher reiatsu may resist revealing personal information, but cannot prevent it. Weaker targets do not even realize how much of themselves is being displayed. With each sparkle in the air or glimpse of feral eyes, more of their inner selves are laid bare.

The longer a battle goes on, the more Shinji will understand his opponents... both as people and as combatants. He can choose to focus on techniques/feats, or kidou each round.


Skills:

Kidō Master: As the Captain of the Twelfth Division, Shinji is known for his mastery of Kidō. He is capable of releasing a destructive form of Kidō silently from the palm of his hands, blasting holes through walls.

Flash Steps Expert: Shinji was shown easily outrunning Uryū's Hirenkyaku technique after the latter stated it to be faster than Shunpo. He could not, however, keep up with the Quincy.

Great Spiritual Power: As the Captain of the 12th Division, Shinji boasts a great amount of spiritual energy. He is noted to having amazing spiritual pressure that comes in waves.

Abilities:

Garganta: The technique used by Hollows to move to and from Hueco Mundo. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway. Mayuri recently learned how to use this ability after researching within Las Noches. While Shinji researched it on Mayuri.

Zanpakutō Reassignment: In an Arrancar arc Shinigami Cup Golden, Kurotsuchi is shown as having the ability to change a Zanpakutō's race and gender, and presents a catalogue to Hisagi and Renji, resulting in Renji's immediate desire to have Zabimaru's form altered to that of a busty red-haired woman.

Biography/History: Do Later.

I know, I'm just playing around !

First, you can't be Powerful. And please give me RP Sample!

ooooooook im new. ((duuuur)) lol. ok i will try to be at least close to literate. i can't make promises on good spelling or caps, but i'll try.

here's my RP example::


when chris left rose appeared at his side. "chris dont." when she got him 2 calm down she looked at kloud and got pissed, and no1 liked her when she was pissed b/c she didn't look at all like herself. "WAT THE HELL IS UR PROBLEM?!?!?!? do u realize how freakin stupid u r? doing that in front of her. u dumb a**. if u weren't holding char I'd kick u so hard your gonna wish u were dead. o and one more thing." she made char duck real quick and she punched him square across the face breaking his nose. "DON'T EVER FREAK CHAR OUT LIKE TAT AGAIN!!!!!"

seeeeee.

ill be on 2morro.