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 Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 10:08 pm
Jessica:
Very Original use of the Sharingan! I'm sure you know how it works, just make sure you read the Sharingan Kekkai genkai post to make sure you understand how the tomoe work.YOU ARE APPROVED!
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Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 10:08 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 1:47 pm
Name:
Princess Sana-Chan
RPC's Name:
Sana Raine
Bloodline Applying for:
Kamisama Clan
Why do you want it:
I want it because it's a new Kekkei Genkai, and it's more challenging to rank up in it. I like it because it has two sides, meaning two kinds of people can come from it.
What will you do with it:
I will try to uphold a strong name in the meaning of good, meaning... The holy people shall prevail!
What you know about it:
I know that it originated somewhere off the land of Thunder, and they can create angelic or demonic-looking wings. As a Genin it takes handseals to create their wings, and they are very clumsy when they first start flying. They can only fly for 2 posts, and as they rank up, their wings get longer and can fly longer. Users of this clan have a smaller reserve of chakra, and Genin can only learn 1 C-Rank jutsu.
RP Sample:
Sana wandered through the streets in the broad daylight, the sun had always given her a more sense of her powers. Light, it was her passion, the darkness and being alone scared her. She looked around still, looking at all the happy people in her village she lived in, she wondered if there were others like her. She hummed softly, her favorite melody. Eternal Snow By: Myco, it was a sad song, but it told what she felt in a song of simple words. She stopped singing and looked into a dark alley, to see a small boy being beat up by some thiefs, she blinked her eyes and ran into the darkness, even though it scared her. She made a single handseal, and her white angelic wings sprouted from her back. She performed her handseals and whispered a soft melody, it was angelic, her voice..Heavenly Feather Clone She sang out softly, then one clone formed beside her. Her clone ran at the boys and started to kick one of them in a the face as she jumped up, the boy got impact and fell to the ground. The real her performed more handseals and whispered once again..Holy Feather Storm Many sharpened feathers sprang from her wings and flew at the boys, it started to cut through the boys' clothes and skin. When they retreated, she ran to the boys' side and offered him a hand, a warm smile on her face..Need help? She whispered softly, her took her hand and she disappeared.
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Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 1:55 pm
Sana-chan:YOU ARE APPROVED!
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Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 2:42 pm
Name: I_Eats_Spammers
RPC's name: Umi Kamisama
Bloodline Applying for: Kamisama
Why do you want it: The light affinity fits well with my RPC's personality, and its rather new and exciting looking unlike the Hoshigaki clan my Mizukage is apart of, and Tuanji was beginning to bore me
What will you do with it: I will do my best to help any other Kamisama Clan members stride towards the light instead of darkness, this being more of my RPC's personally beliefs then anything
What you know about it: The users can have black or white wings depending on a light or dark affinity, light users being pure and dark users being that of horrible intentions, I also know the clans divided and fought against eachother resulting in a almost total annihilation of the Kamisama Clan
RP Sample:
Umi ran as fast as he could his sister mother and father close behind him all carrying large chunks of the meteor fragment which gave the Star Village its power of the Mysterious Peacock, closely followed by a rather strong looking Kamisama with dark crow like feathers. Umi and his family reached a large forest,beyond it the borders of Kumogakure awaited them, they split up to avoid being caught by the dark feathered man although this plan was foiled quickly afterwards, a few minutes of being in the forest the screams of Umi's mother was heard, followed by the yelling of his father, he did not stop, running towards a small clearing he tripped only to look up at the large black feathered figure who had his mother and father slung on his shoulder covered in blood, dropping the meteor fragments beside Umi along with his parents he attempted to attack the boy, Umi jumping away quickly preformed the seals which aloud his wings to sprout showing a luminous white, that shone even more brightly with the effect of the moonlight. The man dashed at Umi again this time with complete seriousness, Umi seen through the mans attack easily and used the Holy Feather Storm clan technique sending three feathers which hardened enough to slice through skin easily, upon hitting the Crow-like man he disappeared into many black feathers, Umi instantly knowing it was a clone turned to his rear using instinct to block the real attack, the impact still sending Umi flying a few feet back. Umi quickly preformed his next clan technique the Angelic Swords of Light, which sent five swords at the black feathered Kamisama two of them impaling him internally, causing damage to his left shoulder and left thigh, Umi knew this by the way the man clutched the area afterwards and Umi saw this as an opening to finish this. Umi was beginning his next attack while the man recovered and came at him with full speed Umi would finish this with the Shining Beam of The Heavens, the holy light began flickering at his fingertip as the man came towards him, and right when the attack was going to be fired Umi was tackled by the man both of them flying towards the ground, but Umi not letting up, his finger pointing at the mans left lung as he fired off the shot of light most likely piercing the lung do to the mans grip lightened and Umi broke free as the man hit the ground, Umi presumed he was dead, or atleast would be soon as he went and collected the meteor fragments, leaving his parents bodies behind, unknowing of his sisters location.
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Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 6:12 pm
Spammers:
Kamisama techniques require hand seals. Please remember this when RPing with them. other then that however... Very nice job here with the RP!YOU ARE APPROVED!
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Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 7:33 am
Name:Evil Ninja Leo
RPC's name:Jake Akazuki
Bloodline Applying for:Hyouton Clan
Why do you want it:The clan is one of my favorite clans in the guild and it would really help my RPC in battles protecting himself
What will you do with it:I will learn it to help my teammates and friends on missions or in danger also to help myself from getting hurt in battle
What you know about it:I know that the Clan combined Water and Wind style to create Ice style and that It is very known for there killer ice Jutsu to beat there foes in battle
RP Sample:Jake was in a mission trying to save a person. Jake was running place after place looking for the person also trying to survive. After a while Jake found a house seeing Two rouge Chunin ninjas.Without any warning the Ninjas threw a stream of shurikens at Jake. Jake was ready and counters by quickly forming hand signs using his chakra instantly making a 4 foot long water shield appear in front of Jake creating the water from the moisture in the air catching the Shurikens in the water. Jake then focused chakra in his hands then slams both of his hands on the water releasing the Shurikens back at the Ninjas with great speed. The Ninjas wouldn't have anytime to doge because of the great speed the Shurikens was going. The Shurikens struck all on the Ninjas head , chest and leg areas critically injurying them. Jake saw the ninjas trying to get up so cancels his chakra control on the water making it splash on the ground on the Ninjas. Jake does hand signs using his Clans Jutsu Ice Stlye:Ice Prison Jutsu making the water that was on the Ninjas freeze the their bodies in pure ice so they can die from the cold. Jake rushes in the house searching the inter house. Once he was done searing he found a door and he grabs the door nob. It appeared locked. Jake then creates a ice sharp spike in his hand cutting tiny hole in the door. Jake then looked threw the hole seeing a big ninja standing at the tied person with a massive blade pointing at the person. Jake then focused a small but useful amount of chakra in the ice spike lunching it at the big ninja. The ninja quickly noticed the spike coming. He attempted to doge the spike but it manage to slash threw his chest. Jake then kicks down the door quickly going after the person tied up in the chair. The ninja tackles Jake with his large body causing Jake to fall next to the person grunting. Jake quickly took out a Kunai from his coat pocket and slashed a few lines of the rope making it release its grip around the person. Soon as the Ninja saw he swung his massive blade down at the person. Jake quickly used his kunai to clash with the massive blade. Jake quickly acts back focusing ice around the blade of his kunai creating a shield of ice over his kunai to try and prevent the blade from cutting deeper into his kunai. Unfortunately the blade slashes threw his ice but Jake's hands was forced down getting him off guard. The ninja kicks Jake in the face with all of his strength trying to force him our of a window that was behind them. At the last second Jake grabs the person puts both of his hands causing them both to be forced out of the window falling on the ground but Jake created ice on his back to shield himself from the impact but he took the fall not that mach damaged but was ok to still move. Jake then endures the pain getting up grabbing the person running off to the village gate. Instantly Ninjas appeared at the Gate with weapons ready to fight. While running head on to the gate seeing the Ninjas with the person in one hand Jake quickly gathers some water from the air and surrounding environment into one thousand long needles up under the guards. Jake yells Secret Ice Jutsu: A Thousand Needles of Death!! releasing the ice long needles down at the Ninjas trying to stabbed the them in there head ,neck and shoulders. The guards react by slashing the some needles away with there weapons but most of them got killed from the needles stabbing them in their head to shoulder areas. Jake with chakra focused in his feet and with his lower body strength he front flips high in the air going over the guards and the gate landing on the other side running away to the Hidden leaf to take the body to the hospital so he can recover with the mission being completed
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Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 11:13 am
Leo:
Before I go too far into everything, this needs to be said. You need a A LOT of work with your RPing. This is not a bad thing. In fact, it's quite normal, but you have to understand that this is a literate RP and that a lot of people are going to dislike your posts since you are just starting out. However, there's no other way to learn then immersing yourself into things to get better.
As this is a bloodline approval thread, and I'm really only asking for an RP sample to make sure you know how to use bloodline, you are approved. HOWEVER, I'm making the following notes for you, so you know where you need to improve.
1. Spell Check - Do it... every time... every post.
2. Paragraphs - Long posts like this need to be broken up into spaced paragraph. No one, and I literally mean no one likes to read a single block of text.
3. Spacing - After every period or comma, there needs to be a space. You have no spaces after your periods and it makes everything harder to read.
4. Grammar - Learn, use it, love it. You have none... NONE! No commas, no nothing. I don't know how old you are, or what your native language is, but commas are practically obligatory for good clean sentence structure.
5. Always Read over your posts. You'll catch things you never saw beforehand, and it will reduce the level of annoyance people have when reading your post, only to discover you've left words out and things don't make sense.YOU ARE APPROVED!
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Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 12:28 pm
Cobra_X Leo:
Before I go too far into everything, this needs to be said. You need a A LOT of work with your RPing. This is not a bad thing. In fact, it's quite normal, but you have to understand that this is a literate RP and that a lot of people are going to dislike your posts since you are just starting out. However, there's no other way to learn then immersing yourself into things to get better.
As this is a bloodline approval thread, and I'm really only asking for an RP sample to make sure you know how to use bloodline, you are approved. HOWEVER, I'm making the following notes for you, so you know where you need to improve.
1. Spell Check - Do it... every time... every post.
2. Paragraphs - Long posts like this need to be broken up into spaced paragraph. No one, and I literally mean no one likes to read a single block of text.
3. Spacing - After every period or comma, there needs to be a space. You have no spaces after your periods and it makes everything harder to read.
4. Grammar - Learn, use it, love it. You have none... NONE! No commas, no nothing. I don't know how old you are, or what your native language is, but commas are practically obligatory for good clean sentence structure.
5. Always Read over your posts. You'll catch things you never saw beforehand, and it will reduce the level of annoyance people have when reading your post, only to discover you've left words out and things don't make sense.YOU ARE APPROVED! Thank you for the approval but i was just trying the best that i could to just Rp after all. Thank you for the find words to help me in my RP skills ^-^ i really needed it
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Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 10:21 pm
Name: Mints_Angel
RPC's name:
Seras Victoria
Bloodline Applying for:
Suigestu Clan
Why do you want it:
I think it's a awesome clan and would like to try it out and it would match my rpc since she is kinda like Suigestu and loves the smell of blood.
What will you do with it:
I will learn to become the best assassin in Mist.
What you know about it:
Not much............just that you can change any part or your whole body or limb into water, and the clan will let you re attach the limb if in water form and not dead.
RP Sample:
Vitctoria walked on the streets of the Mist village as it was a rather sunny day which was rare. There was puddles on the sidewalk. She heard a soft russle or noise in a ally behind her but kept walking thinking it was nothing of interest. Seras was a bit worried the Jounin(higher then chuunin) had caught up with her for killing a thief who had tried to steal from her. Her suspicions were correct there were two Jounin following her. One was on the roofs above the other followed disguised as a kid. Seras Victoria was planning on hiding till the Jounin would stop looking for her since the thief was one of thier's student and a younger brother to the other. When she got to the gates she kept pretending she didn't know the Jounin were following her but just before she was about to get on the boat a tag exploded on the end of the dock as she disappeared within the water that rised from below and was able to 'disperse' into water or change her form into liguid. She formed together and did hand seals after using the justu 'Suika no Jutsu (Hydration Technique)' she focused on hand sealing the next justu forming back into water near the docks and Jounin as she used the justu 'Jutsu Name: Suiton: Teichi Mizu Ryokou (Water Release: Spying Water Travel)' to travel to a puddle on the docks behind the two Jounin as they inspected the area to see if Seras Victoria was still alive. She slowely came out of the water behind one of them with her katana drawn out holding the hilt of the katana and stabbing it from back to front of the first Jounin in the middle of his chest braking through his spine and chestplate. She grined as blood splatted a bit on her face and more on the ground and she put her foot on his lower back and kicked him off her blade. The other Jounin noticed what had happened and took out a kunai channeling lightnen chakra into the kunai and throwing it at her as she ducked back into the puddle knowing she could be either shocked unconsciouse or peralized maybe death if the shock was strong anough. The Jounin ran towards the puddle trying to shock her as she skipped to another puddle as quickly as he came at her. She finally came out of the puddle not able to go back in for awhile. Victoria or Kitten hand sealed ready for her third justu. "Suiton: Gōesuiwan no Jutsu (Water Release: Great Water Arm)!" She said transforming and reforming her arm and thier muscles to become stronger as she attempted to punch him or hit him with hand to hand combat. Her body moved and twisted as she got punched in the gut she slid back a bit then fell over pretending to be dead and trick him to come close. When he did she grabbed his ankle flipped him on his back and jumped up onto her toes half standing and sitting then jumped up into the air and thrusted her arm down with as much force as she could allow before straining her body thrusting her hand to the poor shinobi's neck blocking off his airway and breathing and probaly broke a neck bone as he was motionless. Victoria stopped the justu and sighed closing the eyes of both dead bodies.Thirsty as hell she was now grabbing a water bottle form her shoulder bag and drinking it then getting up and running off to not be caught again when the guards nearby would hear someone scream of seeing the dead bodies.
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 9:08 pm
Leo:
I didn't really see that much use of the hyouton bloodline in the way of jutsu and techniques used. maybe you could put a few more of the clan jutsu in there and utilize them in the fight?
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 11:30 pm
what about mine? confused
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 4:38 am
Cobra_X Leo:
I didn't really see that much use of the hyouton bloodline in the way of jutsu and techniques used. maybe you could put a few more of the clan jutsu in there and utilize them in the fight? Ok i edited to have some Ice Jutsu in it but i tried to show my RP fighting style in the RP sample
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