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 Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 7:00 pm
Wow. About an hour after I type that, I get another customer.
Fer srs.
I'll start working on them after I'm done with that, then.
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Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 8:30 pm
I don't know if it goes here, but I just submitted a poem to a random haiku contest on Gaia. Focus is on nature or something.
A stroll in the park
And I come across a log
People, crap elsewhere
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Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 9:30 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2009 1:03 am
My Wandering Haiku:
The Wandering Clan,
The bestest clan on Gaia.
Where pervs abound.
xd Couldn't think of anything else to say...
My inspiration,
Is here one awesome moment,
And gone the next.
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Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2009 6:17 am
@moon: Haha, I like the first one, and I love the last one biggrin
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Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2009 11:52 am
Your second haiku
Is awesome, but the last line
Lacks a syllable
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Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2009 11:53 am
I don't mind, youth shall be filled with rebel acts heart
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Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2009 2:20 pm
I have decided
That I shall write a haiku
But I've no good ideas
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Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2009 8:31 pm
The last syllable,
missing in my last haiku,
can go f*** itself.
To Jade Guardian,
inspiration comes,
to all in good time.
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Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2009 8:43 pm
Wow, your really good with haikus. lol I recently put a haiku on my profile. xd
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Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2009 9:01 pm
ummmmmmmm
ehhhhhhh
My mind is paper,
Dull in its pure blank whiteness.
Colors, where are you?
5, 7, 5 syllables, right?
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Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2009 10:39 pm
I patiently wait
For inspiration, too, but
Got constipation
My tongue is sharp and
My style is edgy so I
Cut yo sheet in half
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Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2009 11:34 pm
Suzuka-dono,
Yes, haikus are 5, 7, 5,
Good luck when writing!
OneWithDunamis,
Your haikus are most funny,
But mine are better mrgreen jk
I liked (liked is so one syllable xd ) your haiku,
Person who was once named Gou,
Will you write again?
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Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2009 7:40 am
Something I actually finished about a week ago, but only scanning it now >.>
Aly is crazy
Keeps listening to the song
'Homeostasis'
(Don't bother looking for it on YouTUBE, it's only on Nico)
Nevermind, it is.
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Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2009 8:07 am
That was amazing
I really like your artwork
I can't write haikus
Yes, I can write in swedish ^^
Detta är mitt språk
Det är fett tufft så ni vet
Men även rätt trist
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