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 Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 1:58 pm
Ryn caught the dummy's sword on his own, twirling it aside, and glancing at the hilt, spotting that the button on his was not on its. With a laugh he swung from five feet away, and a second before his sword would go swishing by he flicked the switch, spearing the dummy through the chest with his blade, false scales shattering as the blade blew through the dummy's back. He grinned, but the choked in horror, as the dummy's wings swept around hitting him back, leaving his sword in its chest.
"This ain't good!", He shouted, rolling away, as the dummy pursued him, its sword now able to change lengths, and his own sword lying on the ground several feet from where he was.
Roaring in rage, he ducked the things swing, catching it by the neck, and slamming it to the ground with enough force to sever the head.
Ryn stood there, panting, blood trickling from his shoulder, where the thing had nicked him, and glanced at the others, wondering if they beat theres as quickly as he had.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 1:59 pm
(( We aren't iin the city anymore.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 2:04 pm
((That's not what I meant. "Close in" doesn't neccesarily mean directly within the city.
Doesn't matter that much, anyhow; I was just trying to say I got there.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 2:11 pm
Quote: He skidded to a stop, wondering if they had seen him, flattening himself on the road to observe as something climbed out of the trunk to attack them. ((I don't think I read that incorrectly O.o
You didn't say anything about following us, and when you saw us you were in the city and then bam your just in the country, you mentioned nothing of following. 3nodding
Theres no road.
They are in the country side.
And are you actually going to interact with us or just sit and watch?
If you do, please don't just try to blast our dummies with a cannon or w/e it is please. I'm trying to set up a subplot (Which already got ruined once sweatdrop
But feel free to interact with us in another way heart ))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 2:20 pm
In the time the dummie took to get close enough to actualy fight, Izzy had assesed the possibilitys of what could happen, and wich would be most likely. 'most likely, if this dummie's almost exactly like me, it will fumble with the weapons more than not.. so it should attack with kicks and punches. my best bet, would be to block it's attacks, until I can pull my knife.' wich was exactly what she did. She blocked, and doged the dummies attacks, she was wearing out and she knew she had to pull some move that would give her an advantage. Something that she would never normaly do, something that might risk her well-being. She remembered something that Logan had told her once, long ago, she smiled knowing what she'd do. The dummie kept up the repetitive attaks, and as quickly as she could Izzy drew back, creating space between them. As expected, the dummie chrged. Izzy took a deep breath, and when the dummie got close enough she pushed herself off the dummies shoulder, flipping over it. She landed, but not as gracefully as she hoped. her ankle twisted beneath her, and Izzy stiffled back a cry of pain. She pulled out her knife, and pushed herself up (using her un-injured ankle/leg) and just as the dummie turned, stabbing it in the chest. As it fell to the groud "dead" Izzy's good leg gave way under her weight and exastion, and she sat there, trying to control her breathing. "god damn Nendir, if your gonna pull something like this again, give us a fair warning!" she shouted over the clamour of metal against metal.
((wow, that took for ever.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 2:20 pm
((Sorry, man. I think I read something wrong. It sounded to me like you were on a road. I see now... RayneTree It took no time at all to get to the place where he liked to practice his combat skills, considering the fact that there seemed to be no one on the road. Right there. I misread that. Sorry. It sounded to me like you actually stayed on the road. Uhhh... I'll make a little edit to my post and fix things. I won't destroy your subplot, worry not. At least, I'll try not to.)) ((EDIT: Again, sorry 'bout that. I'll let one more person post so I can post anew and then actually get up and move. Sorry again.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 2:34 pm
Nendir was bracing himself with each attack the dummy seemed to throw at him, he blocked and kicked, dodging and taking hits here and there. He was not a perfect warrior, no one was, but he wasn't an amateur either. And then he got an idea. He threw his katana blade first toward the dummy, and in an instant uttered the words that induced enhanced speed to course through his limbs.
As the dummy tried to block the katana, Nendir ran to it's right, hitting it in the side with a tight and accurate closed fist. He caught the dummy in the side, and when it lurched he hit it with a combination of swift punches and a well placed kick to the back of it's legs. He was moving so quickly, that to any onlooker his movements would seem a blur, and when the dummy began to fall forward he took it's head in his hands and gave a quick twisting jerk, and in an instant the dummy slumped forward with a gurgle, before turning into it's normal form and laying docile in the foliage of the countryside.
It took Nendir a minute to notice that Izzy was sitting on the ground not to far from his battle zone. He walked over to her slowly and assessed her small frame. "You'll be fine, I'm sure." From the pockets within his robes he removed a rolled up piece of gauze. Her ankle looked swollen under its dressing, but that would be soothed in time. "Here, give me your foot, I'll take care of you." Love, companionship, what was it that seemed to poor from Nendirs body, he could not say.
He stripped her injured ankle of it's confines and wrapped her ankle in a gauze like material. It wouldn't immobilize the foot completely, but wouldn't allow for over exertion of it either. "You'll be able to walk just fine, running might be a pain for a little while but, for target practice you shouldn't have to run much." He patted her bow and stood up, something was wrong.
Ryn was still fighting in the background, but from the sound of things he was doing fine. But someone else was here. Aside form the consciousness she felt from the three and the dummy, there was another, something he had never felt before.
((Yeah you read it wrong. There was no one on the road while they were driving so it took no time for them to get to the countryside. No one on the roads because the president had been killed and most people were probably in hiding assuming they could be targeted next.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 2:40 pm
OOC:OK, back in this
BiC:Thanks to a tip from the waiter at Al's (who only gave a very tiny bit of advice, not wanting to beleive anything had happened) Edger was able to figure out the general direction of who entered the place. As he neared a feild he saw three figures, one on the ground....praying. Anyway he decided the best coarse of action would be to try and go unnoticed, and he needed a good spell for that. He stopped and pulled out his staff, clutching the cold bone tightly. He closed his eyes and bagan the chant, "Ego Spira Psue-ouch!"
In the middle of his chant, some moron had hit a baseball that hit him perfectly on the head. Before he cussed, the ground opened up in a shadowy purple form beneath his feet. He stared for a split second then screamed as he fell throught the open rift. A tunells of energy was all around him. dger stopped screaming and became utterly fasinated. As he was hurtling at some ungoly speed throught the rift, he could see transparent human shaped forms going both directions past him: spirits.
Then, he saw it. In th middle of the tunnel was a flying skeleton garbed in dark robes with glowing red eyes. Edger starred and quickly use his staff to propell himself to the left of the demon. That thing did not belong in this tunnel. All Edger could do pray, "Please, someone help me defeat this thing!" In that instance he was shoved to a hard right and suddently felt cold. He opened his eyes and was surprised to see himself falling through the sky again. He then cringed, directly below him was a car hood.
A mighty THUD sounded as Edger fell sideways into the car, leaving a dent and setting a car alarm off. Edger groaned, he felt like he had probably dislocated his sholuder. When he stopped wincing fron the pain, he looked up to see a slim faceless doll uppercuting him. Edger flew up onto the hood the car with another thud. He got back up slightly quicker, staring at this thing. His eyes flashed angerly and he yelled, "DAMN IT CAN'T I GET A BREAK?" He pulled his staff to vertical position and yelled. "ARAZMARROW!"
To the left of him, a skeketon, armed with a bone sword, erupted out the ground in and exspolsion of dirt. The doll saw this and lept at the new combatent. Edger heaved; he had exausted too much energy to fast. He let out one last groan before he blacked out on the car hood and slipped of the top onto the ground below.
OOC: In case you can't notice, I'm joining Izzy, Ryn, and Nedir in their little training session. If ayone has a problem let me know.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 2:46 pm
Slowly Mark stood up, becoming distinctly aware that the others were carrying weapons. The unexpected arrival of a man who dropped onto the hood of the vehicular and did some unknown amount of damage, although his guess was that it was mostly superficial.
That didn't satisfy his curiosity as to the dragon who, for all effects and purposes, appeared to be fighting himself. Mentally, Mark had heard of this, and even done it once or twice (absolute control over his mind like the scientists promised, feh. It didn't make a difference. He could think about what he wanted to, but that most definately didn't stop him from fighting himself), but he hadn't seen it physically, and it disturbed him to some degree.
He also was aware of the fact that he had revealed his position, perhaps not the smartest move, but since the bogeys appeared to be wielding melee weapons, he wasn't altogether too concerned for his welfare if they made to attack him. He didn't say anything, though, just waited for them to say something and see if he recognized it.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 2:47 pm
((I don't have a problem with anyone joining in. But it's not my turn to pos. Im waiting on Sauron and Izzy.
So now we have to change the posting order.
Izzy. Me. Sauron. Bayer. Booksage.
It just gets really confusing if we post out of turn.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 2:54 pm
((so who's turn is it now?))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 2:55 pm
Masaru continued to walk, grumbling to herself in low angry spurts. She had walked for a very, very long time, and now had very little idea where she was. Not that she really cared of course. She had been injured by two humans in as many days. She was getting much, much too careless.
[[...Yup, I've finished cleaning the house ^-^ !!! So I decided to put this ultra-short filler, until I see somewhere to put her]]
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 2:55 pm
((Oh yah... Its getting REALLY confusing *-* And incase any of you didn't notice, I smashed the head of off my dummy... I gotta get off the comp for a bit, be back some time tonight (like 5 hours from now probably)))
Ryn caught sight of another humanoid crash onto Nendir's car, and laughed to himself, saying,"And he told me not to scratch it?" He heard another being, this one much less obvious and turned towards it, bringing his sword up, his lilting wings hidden, as he walked towards it, calling out,"What are you doing here?"
He slowly advanced, his nearly impenetrable scales glinting as he walked, his stance wide, and defensive. He was confused as to why two more beings would suddenly appear out of no where, and trusted neither.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 2:58 pm
((Pen just go now. The order was screwed up.
And I'm follwing Sauron.
Im going to finish working on the RP I'm making.
I'll be back in a while. Pen, if you and the other two guys left want to RP go for it.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 3:28 pm
((I have to go to an audition soon, but I'll try to write some thing in a second.))
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