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 Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2007 9:17 am
That was really nice!!!
Thank You!!!
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Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2007 10:21 am
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Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2007 11:12 am
If you love someone, put their name in a circle, not a heart.
A heart can be broken but a circle goes on forever. <3 Aww...thats so touching.
Really nice of Yoochun.
Ah, so sweet.
Lol. I want more.
But please dont stress over it.
Lol. Its just me being greedy about it. xd
But yeah, dont stress.
No ones pushing you,
Everybodys looking forward to the next chapter.
Can you send me a PM if you finish ch. 4?
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Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2007 1:53 pm
Such a sweet chapter!
Yoochun's so nice. (:
Please update soon! And don't stress yourself!
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Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 3:40 pm
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Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 3:41 pm
this is really good
cant wait till the next chapter
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 4:56 am
wow this is really good! heart i think i'm addicted...Yoochun is so sweet!
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 7:07 pm
this is amazing
keep up the excellent work
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Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 7:57 am
Thank you guys >w<
I'll be updating the fourth chapter before I leave to korea
since My mom won't lket me have internet access there I'll write hapter five...somehow. :333
I can't promise that Chapter 4 will be long.
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 4:49 pm
so nice. and its so cute. i hope to see more. 4laugh
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 9:22 am
My last chapter for a month. I'm going away for a month to korea
I'll try to write there with some time in myhands
Its just that my mom won't let me go on the computer in korea >.>;;
I don't want to lose meh readers
Its short but enjoy the chapter :333
Chapter 4.
I was unpacking everything that YooChun had bought for the children. Why was he being so nice? InHae also helped, “JiHyun-Ah…” she said quietly.
“Hmm?” I asked as I stared at her for a moment then continued to unpack.
She bit her bottom lip and said, “I think I like YooChun…again. I never knew he was caring…kind…and hot.” She said smiling.
“And…you want me to?” I asked as I stared at her.
“I’m not asking you anything. I just wanted to tell you.” InHae said hugging me tight.
Then YooChun came into the apartment, “You guys done?” he asked bringing in a samsung box.
“What’s that?” I asked.
“A Flat screen tv.” He said grinning.
“…Wh--” then I was interrupted.
“IT’S A TV, A TV!” children yelled running over to the big box.
“You shouldn’t have…your already giving us a apartment…and paid for it…it’s not even a rent!” I yelled.
“Well…what can you do Dae-Ji?” he asked.
“..I can pay it back! That’s what!” I yelled.
“Chi…How?” he asked.
“…..Umm…I’ll work!” I answered yelling.
“She can’t work YooChun.” Inhae said grabbing my head and hugging it.
“I didn’t say she should. She did.” YooChun said with a small pout.
The two looked so...perfect. Both were beautiful and handsome. And well…I was always the girl. ‘She’s with InHae. She’s a friend of Inhae.’
I hated it. No one really remembered my name.
I was actually feeling jeal-...NO WAY. Jealous of InHae looking perfect with YOOCHUN? NO WAY!
I mentally slapped myself.
“Oh yeah…InHae-yah….Someone stole my song and gave it to their company!” I yelled pointing at YooChun.
InHae looked at me, “Your song? Who could’ve?...Who would…Why….how?” she asked making no sense at all.
“I don’t know.” I said staring at the children looking around the big apartment.
“We’ll find him or her.” Inhae said with a smile.
“Thanks.” I said smiling.
InHae was my best friend since…forever I trusted her with everything. Like when I had a crush on a girl once. I almost became a lesbian. >>;;
……
I woke up slowly hoping to get my breakfast from the Ajum…That’s right…none of them survived. I walked out and saw little kids sitting on the table. “Unni…we’re hungry.” A girl said placing her hand on her stomach.
I smiled and told them to wait a bit more and they could have their breakfast. They nodded happily and waited in the living watching the TV.
Wait…did I even have ingredients? I looked inside the fridge and it was filled. “YooChun-Ah…” I just knew it was his doing…how? He left a small note on the eggs. I took the sticky note.
It wrote:
Park JiHyun. I bought everything for you.
I’m also giving you a job at the SM Company.
If you want the job come at 10am sharp.
Don’t be late.
Ah…DaeJi-Yah.
I’m making you take this job
Then you can find your little thief.
I looked up to see the time. “….9?!” she yelled. I needed to make the children something to eat then shower and everything. I started to cook. I whisked the eggs with the fork and chopped up some ham and green pepper. I took some mozzarella and just plain cheese and ripped it in pieces.
After cooking the orphans food, I went to go shower, brush my teeth, and change. I did all that in 20 minutes. I brushed her hair with her fingers in front of the hallway mirror, “Okay guys, and don’t open the door until I get back. Keep them locked and DON’T go out unless an emergency okay?”
“OKAY!” they all yelled.
I smiled, “Wish me luck guys.”
“Good Luck JiHyun-Unnie/Nuna!” they all yelled as I waved my hand and closed the door behind me. I took the elevator down to the first floor.
YooChun’s POV
“Hyung, she’ll be here.” I told them as I flipped the page of my book.
“She be--” Manager was interrupted when YunHo came in.
“So where’s our new assistant manager?” he asked.
I took of my glasses, “She’s coming.” I told him staring up from my book.
JiHyun’s POV
I took the taxi towards the SM Company. I sat there breathing slowly.
In about…10 minutes I arrived. I paid the driver, “Keep the change please.” Then got out, I walked into the company slowly and took the stairs to the next floor. I quickly looked for the room. “If you tell me a job, don’t you think giving me a room number would help?” I muttered underneath my breath. Then I bumped into someone and fell down, “Ah...I’m sorry!” I yelled.
“JiHyun?” a familiar voice rung through my head, I looked up and saw InHae, “Inhae?” I took my time getting up slowly, “You work here too?” InHae asked. “…Um…Well…I’m the assistant manager one.” She said smiling.
“Can you tell me where YooChun might be? He said he would give me a job.”
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 10:04 am
Oh..
So awesome. xD
I want to know more!!!
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 12:28 pm
its really good
have fun in korea!!
and write another chapter when you get back!!!
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 6:34 pm
Thank you for the PM!
Awwww he brought everything for them ^_^
I wonder who stole her song... >.<
Have fun in Korea!
Please update when you return ^_^
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Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 8:46 pm
-NEW READER!!!-
i haven't been in this guild for so looong!!!! i miss it so much!!!!
great story! and yoochun is the main character! nice!
did you have fun in korea? did you buy anything?
you're so lucky you went to korea, i really want to go there....
update soon when you get back!
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