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Sluvotsky

PostPosted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 7:07 am


Name: Sluvotsky. Enjoyably enough a lot of people read it "Slutovsky". I AM DYSLEXOR D<

Age: 17
Likes: role playing (NERD), civil war reenactments (NERRRD), various languages, sleeping laaaate, people who don't let the political battle of left versus right ovveride their common sense, ball jointed dolls, the former Soviet Union, - And man, I like goats. Dogs too, but goats? Favorite animal right thar.

Dislikes: Neo-Conservatism, contradictions, aspartame, CNN, Fox News, C-SPAN, MSNBC.

DA: http://j-novotny.deviantart.com

Favourite Artists: Norman Rockwell is an artist. And old trippy Lisa Frank :B.

Favourite Medium to work in: Acrylic paint or pencil, or digital media.

Arts' Strengths: Very good sense of anatomy and posing, good execution of expressions, not at all afraid of color, generally nice sense of composition.
Arts' Weaknesses: Patience for detail, tendency to draw large noses, have to keep reminding myself where my lightsource is in shading/coloring, but most strong weakness is that I have a tendency to draw the similar, perfect-beauty faces (Kinda like Heise on DA). I generally have to work from photos if I want to draw people who look actually normal and aren't aesthetic wondars. Recently told my art is too harsh because it has too many lines in it (But the guy was looking at my design pieces so I have no idea).
PostPosted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 2:59 am


Name: blackmont
Age: 13
Likes: yaoi,shonen-ai mangas and Ishikawa Fumi's artworks,cakes,etc...
Dislikes: insects,animals,plums,watermelons,etc....
DA: -
Favourite Artists: Ishikawa Fumi,Shimizu Aki,Shiro Amano,etc....
Favourite Medium to work in: copic
Arts' Strengths: stupid chibis
Arts' Weaknesses: All.

blackmont


pretty cool witch

Fashionable Sleuth

PostPosted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 6:27 am


Name: Lauren
Age: 13
Likes: Pie, roleplaying, webcomics, music, art[durr.]
Dislikes: Hangnails, my brother, art block.
DA: http://discoes.deviantart.com[new] or http://kaekashi.deviantart.com[old!]
Favourite Artists: the sky is quite honestly the limit.
Favourite Medium to work in: Digital, pencils.
Arts' Strengths: Color, composition. I like to think my anatomy is improving.
Arts' Weaknesses: Anatomy still isn't good enough, execution of expressions needs work[I want to draw comics, so definitely something to work on], perspective, tendency to draw really lazy backgrounds, laziness in general, HANDS.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 12:27 pm


Name: Gummi [Ashley D':]
Age: 18
Likes: Things.... food, markers, clothes, funny stuff, books, movies, pretty things, unicorns.... >.>
Dislikes: Useless gore, movie remakes, extensive and pointless sequels, stupid people, mean people..... uhm.
DA: I don't have one.... But here's my Sheezy. ^^
Favourite Artists: Van Gogh, P. Craig Russell, Pablo Picasso, Rembrant, Leonardo Di Vinci, George Frederic Watts, I know it goes on..........
Crisscoula, Nathaniel Mea, Tuggerfub Drum, Evil Creampuff, super paper, Hasel, Gingew...
Favourite Medium to work in: Pencil, and markers.
Arts' Strengths: Colouring, and posing.
Arts' Weaknesses: Perspective, placement, and proportion. D:

Gummibear Pwns

Bashful Strawberry


Merrily_Minced

PostPosted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 7:00 pm


Name: Atsuno (or Zethias)
Age: 17
Likes: Chinese Food, Fish, Monsters, Reptiles, Video Games, Books, Drawing, Sleeping
Dislikes: Siblings, Children, Seafood....
DA/Art Website: http://www.zethias.deviantart.com/
Favourite Artists: M.C.Escher
Favourite Medium to work in: .5 mech pencil
Arts' Strengths: (Be fair to yourself.) rendering, texture, patience
Arts' Weaknesses: (Be fair to yourself.) poses, hands, clothing, inking
PostPosted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 7:03 pm


hello (:

Name: Jo
Age: 15
Likes: nmh
Dislikes: furries
DA/Art Website: http://sleepyballoons.deviantart.com
Favourite Artists:

painters: waterhouse, ingres, millais heart , picasso, vermeer, fragonard, murakami (to be honest, i absolutely hate van gogh's work)
fashion designers: kenzo takada, marc jacobs, coco!, issey miyake
photographers: arbus! who doesn't love her?
Favourite Medium to work in: watercolors

Arts' Strengths: expressions, proportion, coloring
Arts' Weaknesses: hair, color theory and mood, creativity, environment/background, detail

i wanna be a hippie


Rensing

PostPosted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 7:04 pm


Howdy all. :3

Name: Rensing
Age: 16
Likes: Drawing, reading, writing, video games, animals, music, anime, manga, webcomics, etc. :3
Dislikes: Ignorance, mean people, homophobes, unnecessary criticism, illiteracy.
DA/Art Website: Clicky. <3
Favourite Artists:
On Gaia: Lorii-chan, blizzardbunni, cherrysoda_z
On dA: Wen-M, zeiva, ramy, animetist

Favourite Medium to work in: Pencil. <3
Arts' Strengths: Sketching, the female form, clothing design.
Arts' Weaknesses: Natural poses, details, eyes, backgrounds, anything but pencil. >.>
PostPosted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 10:25 pm


Name: Laura
Age: 14
Likes: Drawing, MSN, Music, Video games, Friends, My Dog
Dislikes: rude people
DA/Art Website: Mintslice
Favourite Artists: My friend Anna, some people from DA
Favourite Medium to work in: Pencils
Arts' Strengths: Realistic portraits
Arts' Weaknesses: Bodies, hands, feet, ect.

Ladycookalot


User_1392934

PostPosted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 10:32 pm


Name: nicole
Age: 16
Likes: love
Dislikes: conservatives
DA/Art Website: http://likeshesaid.deviantart.com/
Favourite Artists: audrey kawasaki
Favourite Medium to work in: colored pencil, pencil, pen, photoshop
Arts' Strengths: people
Arts' Weaknesses: people.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 2:36 am


Name: Samantha
Age: 18
Likes: Games, RPing, web design, learning, and writing.
Dislikes: Spiders...
DA/Art Website: http://wotwot.deviantart.com
Favourite Artists: Too many to decide from!
Favourite Medium to work in: Tablet and Open Canvas 4.
Arts' Strengths: Faces.
Arts' Weaknesses: Couples, ADD, and laziness.

Nomeh


Nakuya-chan

Demonic Nymph

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 4:31 am


Name: Amanda/Nakuya or Naku
Age: 20
Likes: Anime, reading, writing, role-playing, music (my life blood) photography, shiney things (I've been called a crow before), the paranormal, drawing, coloring, anything remotely are related, Loveless... and a few (err scratch that MANY) other things. Oh and butterflies.
Dislikes: Spiders, Peas, stuff like that.
DA/Art Website: my devART My Website
Favourite Artists: Hyung Tae Kim
Favourite Medium to work in: My Red col-erase pencil and photoshop
Arts' Strengths: Uhh I'm best when it comes to quick gestural drawings, as well as faces, and hair ^_^
Arts' Weaknesses: Hands would be my bane, despite the fact that I draw them constantly I never get them to look how I want, and usually have photoshop up and running to help me fix that in the end. I just wish I had a better scanner.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 12:12 pm


Name: Aaaah I have quite a few names but I suppose my most acceptable is Chrissy (:
Age: 14 years young!
Likes: Well I like most things really, I suppose I don't find much to complain about. I do like childish things like climbing trees and making cakes - water fights, that kind of thing. I like hangin out in town with the 'crew'. Photography. Oooh and music, I do like a nice song.

Dislikes: Urrrr. Nasty people. :/ I hate it when people are anti-social. Why can't we all just get along? (:

DA: http://claokedinshadow.deviantart.com
OR
http://regardlesss.deviantart.com

Favourite Artists: I'm gonna go ahead and name someone from deviantart now ok? Lasaro. Because their artwork has such an amazing rythm - a beautiful natural talent.

Favourite Medium to work in: Biro! I love biros, preferrably black or blue. (:

Arts' Strengths: HAIR. I love drawing hair, and it's one of the few things about my artwork (if you can call rough sketches on lined paper artwork) that I've been complimented on!

Arts' Weaknesses: Oooh where do I start. I fail at anatomy. I can't shade to save my life. I can't put together interesting poses - my drawings normally consist of one or two people just standing still and looking striaght ahead. I CAN NOT draw action scenes. I can't draw bodies. I always only draw from the shoulers up. Noses and lips - I just can't seem to get the noses and mouths of ANYONE right. Somehow it always ends up looking out of place. And necks. Necks puzzle me! :S

cloakedinshadow



kerryfox


Tipsy Muse

PostPosted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 2:54 pm


Name: Kerry
Age:19
Likes:Anime, Manga, Cats, Theatre, Sewing, sleeping DnD, Cake
Dislikes:Mornings, Fire Alarms, spiders
DA/Art Website:http://guardianterra.deviantart.com/
Favourite Artists:Momo, Neal, and several others...
Favourite Medium to work in: Colored pencil and Open canvas
Arts' Strengths: Design of clothing, Coloring, Drawing OC's
Arts' Weaknesses razz erspective, Anatomy, Realism Shading(well I can do basic but any thing with more then one source looks odd...)
PostPosted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 8:22 am


Name: Chelsea
Age: 18
Likes: happiness, pretty things, ugly things, horror, gore, zombie movies, fairy tales, stripes, allegories/symbols, medical anomalies, jellyfish, squid, and other sea life, American cartoons, children's books, venus fly traps, new ways of seeing old ideas
Dislikes: rehashed, unoriginal stuff, most 3-D cartoons, most anime/manga (not to say it can't be good!! There's a lot of good stuff out there, it's just not my personal bag), awkward situations, saving for college D:
DA/Art Website: http://deadkitty.deviantart.com
Favourite Artists: alphonse mucha is my (dead) god!
Favourite Medium to work in: good ol' ebony and paper B: marker, bristol, chalk pastel, oil paint.
Arts' Strengths: the human form, organic shapes
Arts' Weaknesses: digital art. all of it. D: straight lines; geometric shapes. landscapes.

I aspire to be an illustrator, and I will be going to RISD in the fall to study illustration. This looks like a good, tight knit little group, and it's nice to meet you all biggrin heart

there was a

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Elle of Aquitaine

Dapper Fatcat

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 10:30 am



Name: Elle
Age: 19
Likes: coffee, art (duh), food, books (includes manga) and the internet
Dislikes: people who put themselves down,
DA/Art Website: http://homepage.mac.com/janicerowan/PhotoAlbum1.html
Favourite Artists: Renoir, Vincent Van Gogh, Tetsuya Nomura and Ai Yazawa.
Favourite Medium to work in: Pencil and Oil Paint.
Arts' Strengths: Overall facial features and expressions, pencil shading, oil painting.
Arts' Weaknesses: Difficulty with full body proportions, CG artwork (still working on that!)
A few words: What I really want to improve is my digital artwork, since I already feel confident with traditional mediums. I'll be starting foundation year at Parsons School of Design in the Fall! So I'm excited about that especially since I'll be doing my first two years in Paris! Oooh lala!
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