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 Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 5:47 pm
I will write a story for it! I'd be happy to. I might even do it tonight! Sounds like fun!
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 9:42 pm
Characters:
Girl: Krystal
Blonde Hair Boy: Robbie
Brown Hair Boy: Tyler
This is going to be a two part story, Part one will be most of the leading up to the picture, and part two will be the picture.
Part 1: The Past
Robbie, Tyler, and Krystal were very good friends. They played games together all the time. One day there were playing video games in Robbie's basement.
"Ha! I won!" Krystal exclaimed.
"No way!" Robbie yelled in dissapointment. "I am so sick of you always beating us!"
"Hey, remember those wooden things where you put your feet in, from your Holloween party?" Tyler whispered to Robbie.
"The stocks you mean?" Robbie whispered back.
"Yeah, we can trick Krystal and lock her up in that, and tickle her! Get her back for beating us all the time!"
"Ok, lets do it!"
"What are you guys whispering about?" Krystal intervened.
"Nothing!" Tyler replied. "Lets go do something else."
The kids went into the storage part of the basement.
"Why are we in here?" Krystal asked.
"I want to show you something." Tyler responded diligently.
They walked over to where the wooden stocks were sitting. They were connected to a comphy purple chair. "Krystal, can you sit in there for a second? I want to see if the chair is broken or not."
"Sure, I guess."
Krystal hops up in the chair. She stretches her legs into the half holes of the stocks, as the stock was open.
"Now, Robbie!" Tyler yelled.
Robbie closed the stocks and locked them.
"Whats going on!?" Krystal asked, concerned.
"Well, we are sick of you always beating us at video games, so we found a way to get you back!" Tyler said to her, menacingly.
"So, Krystal," Robbie said. "Are your feet ticklish?"
"NO!!! NO!!! ANYTHING BUT THAT!! PLEASE!!!" Krystal begged as Robbie and Tyler were slowing removing her purple socks.
Tyler slowly rubbed his fingernails down the soles of her feet. Krystal had very soft, smooth feet. She wiggled and screached in laughter, her toes curled, creating little wrinkles on her small soles.
"Awww.... Poor ticklish Krystal!" Tyler teased.
Tyler and Robbie started going crazy, tickling her feet all over! They were scratching at her heels, brushing her soles with their fingertips and nails, teasing her little toesies with their fingers, scratching the VERY sensitive sides of her feet, digging their fingers where her scrunched toes connect to her foot. All over! She was laughing uncontrollably and screaming!
"STOP!!! HAHAHAHAH!!! PLEASE!!!!" She screamed.
Tyler stopped.
"Hold on Robbie," Tyler said. Robbie stopped tickling. "I want to do something."
"Thank you so much for stopping!" Krystal said.
"Oh, its not over, I noticed that your little toes are EXTREMELY TICKLISH!" Tyler said, as he grabbed a feather that was attached to a fake bird on the dresser. "Lets see how you react to this!"
Tyler put part of the handle of the feather inbetween two of her toes. Then he slowly pulled the feather towards him, it was like he was flossing in between her scrunched toes!
"OH MY GOD!!! HAHAHAHAH!!! PLEASE!!!! HAHAHAHA!!! STOOOOP!!!" Krystal screamed, as she started to cry.
He went on to the next spot.
"Hey Robbie, grab a feather, we have some toe-flossing to do!"
-TO BE CONTINUED-
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 10:13 pm
Part 2: The Revenge
Days have passed since Krystals horrific tickle torture. Krystal was too scared to ever go back to Robbies house, or even play with them.
Robbie and Tyler were playing video games at Tylers house, eating chips. They missed Krystal, and felt bad for tickling her so extreme.
"I'm gonna call Krystal, to end this dispute." Tyler said to Robbie.
Tyler picked up the phone and dialed '555-4687'.
Krystals picked up the phone,
"Hello?"
"Hey, Krystal, this is Tyler."
"What to you want?"
"We feel bad for tickling you like that."
"I'm not going to forgive you that easy."
"How about you get us back, come over to my house."
"Ok, I guess that will work."
"Bye!"
"Bye!"
Krystal hung up the phone and rushed accross the street and ran into their house, she loved to tickle people, but didn't like benig tickled. She walked into the play-room, where the boys were playing video games.
"Hey!" Robbie and Tyler said to her.
"Hey!" She replied.
"Can we get this over with?" Robbie asked.
"Sure, take off your socks and shoes..."
The boys took of their socks and shoes and set them by the coffee table.
"I'll take mu shoes off, its kind of hot in here."
Krystal took her shoes off.
"Come on, sit on the floor and prop those footsies up here!"
The boys hesitated, but sat on the floor, and put their bare heels up onto the coffee table. The table felt cold.
"Ok, now you guys have to sit there, don't remove your feet from this table!"
"Oh God!" Robbie said, he flinched, along with Tyler.
Krystal took a feather out of her pocket.
"Now let me show you what toe-flossing feels like!" She said as she put the feather inbetween two of Robbies toes. She slowly fed the feather to the other side.
Robbie was screaming and laughing! He couldn't contain himself, his other foot was banging up and down.
She continued this between all ten of his tickish toes. Then she went on to Tyler.
"Now your turn!" She said as she put feather inbetween his toes.
She started to "floss his toes" he was SCREAMING and laughing like a little girl. His toes were VERY SENSITIVE!
"Look at poor Tyler's toesies! They don't like being flossed do they?" She said as she went on to floss the next two toes.
After the flossing was done the boys faces were ruby red!
She gave them some time to catch their breath.
"Is that all?" Tyler asked, hopeing it was all of the torture, he could not endure any more.
"Oh heavens no!" She replied as she started using her fingers to tickle the soles of their feet. "I get to use my fingers!"
She had nice sized fingernails, and they played a good part in this torture! She dug them in the most sensitive spots of the boys adolescent feet. They were laughing and screaming. When she rubbed her fingernail up the top part of Robbies sole she noticed heavier laughing and screaming.
"Found a very ticklish spot!" She said as she continued to tickle that spot continuously.
"Now, poor tyler, I noticed your toesies are super ticklish!" She taunted him, "But I noticed the sides of your feet seem to give a better reaction!" She kept brushing one nail rapidly back and forth on the side of Tylers ticklish foot.
"Oh boys, isn't this fun?" She teased them. "Oh, and I brought an unused toothbrush, so we can try brushing your toes, as well as flossing!"
-THE END-
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 9:10 pm
Thank you Frozen Squirrel, that was an excellent submission! You're now in the running for the 20,000 gold prize!
I'm a little disappointed that only three people showed up to write stories for this contest, I was hoping there would be a lot more. And as far as I know, we're still waiting for Skykece to write the continuation he promised. But at least it's a real contest now. On June 30 the contest will close and the guild will vote on which story should win!
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Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 4:00 pm
CallieCatsMeow Thank you Frozen Squirrel, that was an excellent submission! You're welcome! razz
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Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 7:44 pm
Nice story smile I know I lost. I stink at storie writing. I'm better at poetry razz
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Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 7:48 pm
x_Chelsea_x Nice story smile I know I lost. I stink at storie writing. I'm better at poetry razz Thank you! And you weren't that bad!
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Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 7:49 pm
Welcome. *blush* Not....-that- bad...(for mine)
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Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 12:09 pm
It's the 30th of June and the contest is over, I was just curious, when does the voting start?
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Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 12:13 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 12:49 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 5:00 pm
Oh.... right.... I didn't submit my 'sequel' on time (work started immediately after school). Ah well. I can still write it anyway when I'm not too lazy xp
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Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 7:09 pm
Quote: It's the 30th of June and the contest is over, I was just curious, when does the voting start? Me tooo. I can't wait
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 3:30 pm
Ok everybody, the contest is closed and voting starts now! So post the name of whoever's story you liked best. Voting will last for one week, and then we'll tally up the results.
If you submitted a story, you can't vote. I won't vote unless there is a tie at the end, in which case I'll have the tie-breaking vote.
Good luck everyone!
Voting ends June 7 at 12:00 AM.
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 4:41 pm
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