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Who would suck the most at writing poetry?
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tehpharmacist

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PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2007 7:32 pm


Ishbalan11
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I'm so glad... >__>

Hahaha. At least my random thoughts aren't as pervy as some! *finger jab every which way*

Ughh~ Algebra? D: I never did Brit Lit as a section by itself, but we did a bunch of studies over high school... lol. Do you like it?

I'm sooo glad my finals were over in April... Though, unfortunately it is probably not as hot here as it is there. Wherever there is. Not that it matters since the WHOLE WORLD IS WARMER THAN HERE.

*cry*

[By the way, am I the only one who thinks Ran Fan would not be so fine at writing poetry? Poetry sample:










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PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2007 2:31 pm


rofl

True. Then again, when picking the worst poet, you must question: Which is better, really bad poetry or no poetry at all? ninja

Roy:
I am the flame alchemist
I am very hot
I can alchemize you toast
And that's not all I've got!

...

Where did that come from?

Oh well, I guess bad poetry can at least be slightly amusing. xd

I think Al would be the best poet. I don't know why, but I do. I should try and write a poem Al would write.

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Rekki Elric
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PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2007 2:47 pm


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I'm just a man, I'm not a hero
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Just a boy, who's meant to sing this song


Roy's poem sounds more like a bad rapper then a poet.


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PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2007 2:49 pm


His theme song sounds that way too. I was merely imitating it. xd

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PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2007 2:50 pm


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Srsly? rofl


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PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2007 3:03 pm


Yeah... someone should post it in here. I can't find it.

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PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2007 3:10 pm


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Wait that was in one of the omakes right?


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PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2007 3:14 pm


Yeah. Hey, I found it!

"I'm the Flame Alchemist"
By Roy Mustang

snap snap snap snap my fingers
snap snap snap snap my fingers

who's the man that's gonna be the president of the land? the flame alchemist
my dream is to have a miniskirt harem
who's that hot dude, standing in front of the mirror, snapping his fingers striking a pose?
uh huh. that's me. the flame alchemist

i'm gonna light your heart on fire, baby (sizzle!)
my heart is a raging inferno, oh yeah (disco inferno!)
and tonight, baby, it's burning hotter than ever (like a flamethrower!)
snap, crackle, and pop, baby. it's my burning love (oh yeah!)
my love's gone and burned up all the oxygen in the room (thermodynamics!)
this one goes out to you, the girl in the mirage (an illusion, baby!)

you know who i am. i'm roy mustang! (then that's all right.)
i'm a colonel, baby. and this colonel's about to pop! (you mean "kernel"?)

line a: "you like breasts, huh? well i'm a thigh man!"
line b: "well forget about it!"

(repeat)

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PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2007 3:23 pm


Thermodynamics!!! xd blaugh
PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2007 4:58 pm


Letishia
rofl

True. Then again, when picking the worst poet, you must question: Which is better, really bad poetry or no poetry at all? ninja


Very true. I have to say that Roy's little "song" was HILARIOUS, but really not all that poetic. xD

I suppose no poetry at all is better. Okay, you win.

Nice poem, by the way. I think it capitalizes on the essence of Roy's personality, especially in your use of the metaphor "alchemize you toast," because it is fairly obvious from the outset of the poem that you are not describing toast at all. All in all, good use of a wide range of descriptors (like "very hot"). xDDDD Your statement at the end makes me wonder what else he's got. Or is it that I already know?

YAY THERMODYNAMICS! Seriously, that is probably the greatest thing ever. It's too bad they don't say "Sung to the tune of ____". Or maybe it's a good thing. Wouldn't want too many fangirls shouting that one...

tehpharmacist

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PostPosted: Wed May 30, 2007 7:39 am


I'm in the process of making up a tune for it. It's pretty hard though. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Wed May 30, 2007 7:26 pm


Yea, I've been thinking up regular tunes (Jungle Bells, Twinkle Twinkle Little Star, etc., etc.) but none seem to quite fit.

Then it occured to me that if it's based on any kind of a real song, it'd probably be something in Japanese. BESIDES, it was originally in Japanese! So the tune would be completely off anyway!

Noooo. *vows to learn to sing it in Japanese*

tehpharmacist

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PostPosted: Thu May 31, 2007 7:02 pm


I'd just like to make it in English. Perhaps I can find some synonyms so I can modify it for better flow...?

(Totally keeping the "thermodynamics" and "disco inferno" parts though.)

xd
PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 12:25 pm


Letishia
I'd just like to make it in English. Perhaps I can find some synonyms so I can modify it for better flow...?

(Totally keeping the "thermodynamics" and "disco inferno" parts though.)

xd


Yea, I'd totally keep it in English. If you randomly sang it in Japanese, the effect would be somewhat lost. xD Hmmm, maybe, but I think the utter lack of flow somewhat reminds me of Roy anyway. xD

(OMG, you have to. There's no other way.)

tehpharmacist

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Ishbalan11

PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 1:59 pm


Nandayo~
Ishbalan11
It's ok, we still love you 3nodding


I'm so glad... >__>

Hahaha. At least my random thoughts aren't as pervy as some! *finger jab every which way*

Ughh~ Algebra? D: I never did Brit Lit as a section by itself, but we did a bunch of studies over high school... lol. Do you like it?

I'm sooo glad my finals were over in April... Though, unfortunately it is probably not as hot here as it is there. Wherever there is. Not that it matters since the WHOLE WORLD IS WARMER THAN HERE.

*cry*

[By the way, am I the only one who thinks Ran Fan would not be so fine at writing poetry? Poetry sample:










...]
it's better than here! it's not suppose to reach 90-something in the middle of may! it's so bloody hot! and i'm on the coast! the water is suppose to cool us down! GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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