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 Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 7:09 pm
Ahhh, Hanshou ne?
That story you say you're going to work on but never really doooo, hmm??
True you worked last night....
*pokes all the people of RMM*
Please review or Nii-san will never update @-x!!
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Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 8:02 am
*Wraps herself in the wallpaper and falls asleep dreaming of Roxas*
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Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 10:36 am
OMG I love this fanfiction!!!!!! 4laugh
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 10:05 pm
Then review for my poor Brother!! He's only gotten one new review!!
It makes me so sadded.....
(If one more person reviews you'll get a sneak peak!!)
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 11:18 pm
What if I review again?
D:
I wants mooooore!
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 11:30 pm
Go ahead, Solo just wants reviews. Leave a review for each of the chapters and Solo will love you, I'm sure of it.
And that'll be....30 lines O_O!!
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 11:59 pm
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Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 12:08 pm
[Inc.] You're amazing, you just about made me cry with your wonderful review, so as promised I'm going to post up a paragraph for chapter 4. I'm going to post it in the first post on page 1. Hope you like it x3!!
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Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 11:08 pm
Oh pshaw!
My wonderful reveiw, gah, you flatter me. I was a mess!
All I could think was, "Ehh.. Cloud... Vincent and Riku... nyaahhh *drool* Soo pretty *_* Squueeeeee.... Lovelovelove."
Yeah, that's pretty much exactly what my thoughts were, I was merely proud of the fact that I was able to string together complete sentences.
xD
YES! SNEAK PEEK! AHH.
SO GOOD.
It makes me all aflutter with anticipation and whatnot.
<3
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 12:15 pm
It's the total opposite from my style. I tend to focus on characters rather than scenery and description.
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 12:48 pm
@ Enk: I'd like to say I find a nice balance between Characters and description.
What makes a person a good writer is being able to paint a picture in the reader's head, thats what I believe anyway.
I get lazy alot...which is why it takes me so long to update....cause I get sick of writing so much....but it's what makes the story so good (yes, I'm hooting my own horn~~!) I think it's worth the wait.....
While my readers are just impatient....
(besides, if I wasn't good at descriptions I would never be able to write a good lemon)
[WHAAHAHA!! Yay for later chapters and flashbacks!! Can't wait to write some beautiful Kadaj/Riku action!!]
@ [Inc]
Don't cut yourself short!! Your review made me sooo happeh!!
I've got....10(?) pages of the 4th chapter done....
But...somehow the 4th chapter is now a Read only File...how the hell did that happen? Anyone know?
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 2:17 pm
Oooo~~~ I've been working on Hanshou for....2 hours now?
Why did I stop working on his?! I'm having so much fun!! I want to show you all!!!
OH!!! If anyone else is interrested in being a beta (Ravie is already one) just tell me. (You'll get to read everything before I post on Fanfiction.net!!) =3!!
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 5:11 pm
AHH!
HOLYCRAPPICKME!
Wait... this is what gets me into trouble... Signing myself up for things I don't know about... That's how I got sent to the Bayou that one time...
o_O
What does being a beta entail?
Chu~ Isn't it great? I'll have that happen sometimes, I get so frustrated over a project I'll just throw my notebook someplace, and then I'll be cleaning my room, find it, and instead of finishing my room I'll sit in my chair and write all day.
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 6:08 pm
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 6:45 pm
I'd love to help beta it for you, but mostly for grammer errors and incongruencies, not the actual plotline. There's a reason I'm not an author xP. I have beta'd loads of times before, so it shouldn't be too hard...
And who could say no to early updates?
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