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*pops in* Hello there Fwee-kin! Just thought I'd drop by for a bit, I shall critique once I get out of my lazy streak.

*claps* O-Oh! I like b-both the fel essence idea a-and the soul! A-And while the guardian isn't a-as important as the Raeven at this s-stage, it also m-makes me happy that you s-s-seem to have a g-good idea of who it w-will be.

Wow, this idea is ridiculously cute. And really unique when compared to the mystique you get from other concepts. XD Good luck with it. I can't help but picture the wings looking like fans of ferret-patterned bubble wands...

I might read over it again when I'm more awake, but right now the only real problem I see is the alignment, since there's already quite a few Chaotic Neutral Raevans and concepts. x:

I don't post ideas I wouldn't let people use. 8U Go right ahead. XD

Theives are tricky since they can be a few different alignments depending on their reasons for being a thief. owo;

Developing Balados is surprisingly easy compared to my other Raevan concept from before...

I used to have to think very hard and come up with barely anything but everything about Balados just flowed into my head o.o

Edit: Changed his alignment to 'Chaotic Good' since it's a rebel alignment, hopefully close to what Balados is.

I really like the ferret/bubble combination of your concept, as well--I think it'd make for a really fun mix~

That said, the one thing I'd like to see more of, as you get inspiration for it, is to what sort've 'thief' he is. He likes to hoarde things, but does he feel guilty, for example, if he's taken something and later finds out that it's particularly special to the person he stole it from? Is he like a little kid, who to a certain extent, might be stealing things because they don't quite understand the difference between right and wrong, as opposed to not just caring? I think it'd give a lot more of an indication as to his alignment if you delved a bit into what motivates the thievery, and to what degree/extent he'd go to pilfer something he finds particularly appealing. =3.

*might be making no sense, as she's getting ready for work/semi-braindead this morning* XD;;;

That said, keep it up! *likes what you have down so far, and is looking forward to seeing moooooore* :3.

Included a small section of that into the decieving part, will continue to work on it over time.