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 Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 4:28 pm
Lord Drago [Joan De Arc] Neko-chan101 Lord Drago [Joan De Arc] Neko-chan101
Revenge is good. I'm actually a very spiteful person myself. And it would make the story interesting.A fellow spiteful person! Yea....a little jealousy would add a bit of spice.. You could call it Jealousy.
Perhaps not just Jealousy, depending on the length of the story. For a short story, I think such a short title would work. If it’s more than a few pages, however, I believe there should be a bit more to the title. But jealousy would definitely work in the title, I think. And, for the record, I'm not usually a jealous person. 3nodding Well, no offense, but the story is kind of... Well.. Not really all about jealousy.... True... I was having writer's block at the moment, so excuse me if I say something stupid. And for the record, Misery was a really long book with a one-word title. Too bad you couldn't choose misery, or even anything with misery in it. Like Misery and Happiness. As I said, its a personal preference. I prefer long titles.
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Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 1:33 pm
Neko-chan101 Lord Drago [Joan De Arc] Neko-chan101 Lord Drago You could call it Jealousy.
Perhaps not just Jealousy, depending on the length of the story. For a short story, I think such a short title would work. If it’s more than a few pages, however, I believe there should be a bit more to the title. But jealousy would definitely work in the title, I think. And, for the record, I'm not usually a jealous person. 3nodding Well, no offense, but the story is kind of... Well.. Not really all about jealousy.... True... I was having writer's block at the moment, so excuse me if I say something stupid. And for the record, Misery was a really long book with a one-word title. Too bad you couldn't choose misery, or even anything with misery in it. Like Misery and Happiness. As I said, its a personal preference. I prefer long titles. Argh.... I'm just going to daydream a bit more on it..
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Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 3:02 pm
[Joan De Arc] Neko-chan101 Lord Drago [Joan De Arc] Neko-chan101 Lord Drago You could call it Jealousy.
Perhaps not just Jealousy, depending on the length of the story. For a short story, I think such a short title would work. If it’s more than a few pages, however, I believe there should be a bit more to the title. But jealousy would definitely work in the title, I think. And, for the record, I'm not usually a jealous person. 3nodding Well, no offense, but the story is kind of... Well.. Not really all about jealousy.... True... I was having writer's block at the moment, so excuse me if I say something stupid. And for the record, Misery was a really long book with a one-word title. Too bad you couldn't choose misery, or even anything with misery in it. Like Misery and Happiness. As I said, its a personal preference. I prefer long titles. Argh.... I'm just going to daydream a bit more on it.. If her friends are going to be snobby, you could call it A Forbidden... something, I'm sure.
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Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 8:29 pm
Lord Drago [Joan De Arc] Neko-chan101 Lord Drago [Joan De Arc] Well, no offense, but the story is kind of... Well.. Not really all about jealousy.... True... I was having writer's block at the moment, so excuse me if I say something stupid. And for the record, Misery was a really long book with a one-word title. Too bad you couldn't choose misery, or even anything with misery in it. Like Misery and Happiness. As I said, its a personal preference. I prefer long titles. Argh.... I'm just going to daydream a bit more on it.. If her friends are going to be snobby, you could call it A Forbidden... something, I'm sure. Ehh... Maybe I should put on the events that I plan to be on it... Because... Well... The titles don't really match... It DOES match my really gothic, I-hate-getting-teased, tease-and-die story...
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Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 8:59 pm
So am I to assume you have another story?
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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 6:42 am
A Forbidden… sounds like a cheesy romance novel, or one of those old penny dreadfulls from the early part of the century.
Please do tell us some of the major events you have planned, that might help us help you!
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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 1:17 pm
merlinblackheart A Forbidden… sounds like a cheesy romance novel, or one of those old penny dreadfulls from the early part of the century. Please do tell us some of the major events you have planned, that might help us help you! Sure. Drago: Well, I have some other plots.... Oh yea, my main account, [Joan De Arc], has been hacked. EVENTSAt least the main parts...Meeting of Jiro and Emiko. Emiko crashes while she practices with her bike. One of Emiko's friends notice that the bully/dropout Jiro returned to summer school. She sets up a date. Jiro quits the gang. Jiro learns why Emiko wasn't at school during the year. (I'm deciding between AID's or tumor..) Emiko gets slightly better, but not fit enough to enter the contest. Jiro enters for her, and wins. Emiko goes shopping for their two-month anniversary. While Jiro waits at the train tracks, Emiko is involved in a fatal car accident. Yea, you can see where it's going to...
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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 1:22 pm
Wow... you lost me as far as names go. I can't help you there, but a good name feels right at the edge of my tongue.
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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 3:55 pm
Lord Drago Wow... you lost me as far as names go. I can't help you there, but a good name feels right at the edge of my tongue. Say the name on the tip of your tongue, please.
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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 5:46 pm
And I need help with this title.
I found out that the kids at my school PISS ME OFF.
So I'm venting my anger before I hurt anyone.
Emi Zhao sighed. Her life was in so much stress right now. Her grades were slightly suffering, her wardrobe was out of fashion, and her older brother, who was in college, never came to visit. She sat in her small, messy room. Articles of clothing and whatnot were scattered everywhere. The air had a musky scent, hinted slightly with the cheap perfume Emi wore. She had a book cracked open, dim light shining from her twice-broken lamp.
“Wouldn’t it be so cool if we were rich…?” Emi though dreamily. She could picture it perfectly. There would be movies on every weekend, eating out whenever they felt like it, and having clothes that weren’t at least three years old.
“Emi! Come down here for a moment! The computer is acting up again!” her mother shouted in Chinese. Emi got up, closing her book, and dutifully went into her mothers room.
“I tried turning it on, but it’s not working. Fix it,” complained her mother. They were the only ones living in the small condo that her mother rented. Her elder brother lived at the dorms at Georgia Tech, and her father…
Emi looked around after testing the computer. She soon saw the problem. The CPU cable dangled, un-plugged. After plugging it, she turned it on for her mother.
“Thank you, daughter. You can go back to your studies now.” Her mother intently stared at the computer, immediately getting unto her Charles Schwab online account.
Ever since her mother divorced with her drunken, anger-drunken father, life had been hard.
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Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 10:31 pm
Hey, how about… In Pursuit Of (something)
I dunno, it just came to me…
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