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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 9:08 pm
liek total awesomeness, I make poems too but none are this long BUT AWESOME... xd WHOOT! *applaude*
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Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 11:51 am
I could never write poems,you did good.
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 3:27 pm
Ooh, in a creepy sort of way, I like it But I hate that you had to write it
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2011 11:45 am
chuckee Ooh, in a creepy sort of way, I like it But I hate that you had to write it I'm glad I got to write it and that I had the courage to and that I had the courage to read it out loud. smile I still remember this, I remember feeling so honored.
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Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 2:26 pm
Oh sweet Jesus. I hardly comment on poetry for reasons other than giving them constructive criticism. Oh my word. I rarely give compliments. But you, my dear, deserve more than just the words I'm typing. From one writer to another, thank you for speaking your mind and sharing your heart. I absolutely loved it.
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Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 5:34 pm
Queen Hexagon Oh sweet Jesus. I hardly comment on poetry for reasons other than giving them constructive criticism. Oh my word. I rarely give compliments. But you, my dear, deserve more than just the words I'm typing. From one writer to another, thank you for speaking your mind and sharing your heart. I absolutely loved it. Awww, thank you. biggrin I really don't write anymore and it almost seems unfair to bring this back to the forefront, like I'm cheating by bringing up something I did in the past instead of giving new, better product. But I just don't have it in me anymore (or it's hiding and hasn't felt the need to come out). However, while it feels like cheating or fishing for compliments, I am really proud of this one. biggrin
Will you be sharing some of your writings in the future?
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Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2011 2:05 pm
PukeFacedFreak Queen Hexagon Oh sweet Jesus. I hardly comment on poetry for reasons other than giving them constructive criticism. Oh my word. I rarely give compliments. But you, my dear, deserve more than just the words I'm typing. From one writer to another, thank you for speaking your mind and sharing your heart. I absolutely loved it. Awww, thank you. biggrin I really don't write anymore and it almost seems unfair to bring this back to the forefront, like I'm cheating by bringing up something I did in the past instead of giving new, better product. But I just don't have it in me anymore (or it's hiding and hasn't felt the need to come out). However, while it feels like cheating or fishing for compliments, I am really proud of this one. biggrin
Will you be sharing some of your writings in the future?Awww no you're not cheating! :3 Yeah I had a dry season with writing but journaling keeps me going. Yes I will! I've been trying to pick a good one.. but idk which one D:
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Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2011 3:02 pm
Queen Hexagon Awww no you're not cheating! :3 Yeah I had a dry season with writing but journaling keeps me going. Yes I will! I've been trying to pick a good one.. but idk which one D: Journaling? What do you journal? I read in a book (that taught how to be a better writer) that you should set aside 30mins each day and write SOMETHING, anything, even what you're feeling or the boring things you did that day. It turned out to be just a 'bitching journal.' I found it recently and yikes. I have a feeling now that the intention was to make me try and write creatively, but that if I couldn't find anything creative to write about, than to just put my day in words but maybe use creative wording. Either way, I gave up on that after a while, but I think I did it for at least 2 weeks, maybe even a month.
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Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2011 4:29 pm
PukeFacedFreak Queen Hexagon Awww no you're not cheating! :3 Yeah I had a dry season with writing but journaling keeps me going. Yes I will! I've been trying to pick a good one.. but idk which one D: Journaling? What do you journal? I read in a book (that taught how to be a better writer) that you should set aside 30mins each day and write SOMETHING, anything, even what you're feeling or the boring things you did that day. It turned out to be just a 'bitching journal.' I found it recently and yikes. I have a feeling now that the intention was to make me try and write creatively, but that if I couldn't find anything creative to write about, than to just put my day in words but maybe use creative wording. Either way, I gave up on that after a while, but I think I did it for at least 2 weeks, maybe even a month.I just journal random thoughts. Sometimes I just get one-liners. Or a stanza. Yeah. Actually I journal around that amount of time each day. Sometimes more. So you don't write anymore?
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Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2011 5:28 pm
Queen Hexagon I just journal random thoughts. Sometimes I just get one-liners. Or a stanza. Yeah. Actually I journal around that amount of time each day. Sometimes more. So you don't write anymore? Nope. Work got in the way and then I stopped reading so I feel I've stopped learning (through example) how to write.
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Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 3:27 pm
Your poem made me cry!
I try to write that good, and don't even come close. That poem is amazing. You definitely deserved to be honored for that one. Congrats!
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Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2011 7:24 pm
PukeFacedFreak Queen Hexagon I just journal random thoughts. Sometimes I just get one-liners. Or a stanza. Yeah. Actually I journal around that amount of time each day. Sometimes more. So you don't write anymore? Nope. Work got in the way and then I stopped reading so I feel I've stopped learning (through example) how to write.Lame. What do you work as? I don't wanna pry, I'm just a curious cat. :3 you should pick it back up. I wanna get myself put there I justdont know how. I put my stuff on Gaia but it doesn't get attention.O:
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Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2011 7:39 pm
Lunar Lust Your poem made me cry! I try to write that good, and don't even come close. That poem is amazing. You definitely deserved to be honored for that one. Congrats! Awww, thanks eLeL (I wanna call you that now).
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Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2011 7:40 pm
Queen Hexagon PukeFacedFreak Queen Hexagon I just journal random thoughts. Sometimes I just get one-liners. Or a stanza. Yeah. Actually I journal around that amount of time each day. Sometimes more. So you don't write anymore? Nope. Work got in the way and then I stopped reading so I feel I've stopped learning (through example) how to write.Lame. What do you work as? I don't wanna pry, I'm just a curious cat. :3 you should pick it back up. I wanna get myself put there I justdont know how. I put my stuff on Gaia but it doesn't get attention.O: Oh, I don't work there anymore. Got laid off for the last time recently. I worked at a newspaper (not writing) for over 7 years.
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