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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 10:58 am
K r e e [@Noa] Hah! Here comes my mentor heart You have nothing to apologize for n_n Actually, this is my first furry art EVER x_X Also kind of my first SD style too. with the whole body thing and proportions.
1st. Yeah, both arms were supposed to be of the same length, since they are both backwards. @_@ 2nd. Correct. Gonna try fix that xD 3rd. Oie. So.. I think overall, I need to re-sketch it lol while keeping in mind everything that's been corrected ._. THANK YOU AGAIN!!! <333 :3
A loooooot of work ahead of me xD And again. I hope you can give me some time till Thursday. Since I have tests all day both Tuesday and Wednesday, same with the hands assignment sweatdrop
[@pach_work] Hehe, she's my first anthro piece lol. ever x_X Oh yeah, it looks good like that, they way you sketched it and I know I DON'T HAVE TO. But, I was kinda curious if I COULD do it thicker. Sort of like a Skunk's tail or something similar. Maybe I should try both and then show you n_n
totally good for first anthro ^__^ careful , they become addicting , i was known for a LONG time as an anthro artist , although ...i really draw..anything lol. yah yah fo'sho biggrin you can make it wider , as long as you add some fluff where it curves - fluffs for the tail where it curves is like ..adding elbows and knee marks almost XD , ye 'know ? so go ahead and make it like a wide skunks tail (refrence biggrin biggrin )^_^ I gotta go to school but i'll check back later! have fun
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 11:04 am
Wow, really? lol Man.. I remember when I looked at anthro art and I was like.. "I don't like those..." And now look at me, just starting to draw those lol
Good to know then, gonna try it. Ok, good luck!!! Hope to see you on thursday, or sometime soon x_X
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Oh yeah, if anyone wants to keep replying or commenting, be my guest. n_n But I'll be back around THURSDAY!!! C ya for now blaugh =goes to study for all her tests x_X= whee
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 11:09 am
^^ Ahh okay, glad I can be of help! Whoa your first try? That's really amazing. *3* And you don't need to resketch the whole thing, it looks fabulous! It's just something to keep in mind from now on 3nodding . Also, I understand about the time issue. sweatdrop I'll probably have days where I may not be online the whole day, but I'll try my best to stop by in school and such.
X3 Good luck with your test!
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 1:00 pm
FREEZE! YOU'VE REACHED POST 4! lol.[@Noa] Yup. x_X Well, I've done like one hybrid before, only, but not really like anthro. So yeah. Aww thanks n_n
Oh, I see. Yeah, me too n_n And thank you!!!
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Ok, I know I'm supposed to be studying but I'm taking a little break.
Sooooooooooooooo, here's the second sketch after all the constructive inputs from awesome artists and my mentor n_n
Please, feel free to give me more and point out the mistakes if it still has any, before I color it <3
Oh! And HER RIGHT foot is above her left one, not on the ground xD
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 1:03 pm
I'll be around. somewhat.. lol. n_n
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 1:22 pm
She's looking so very cute. I have a nitpicky detail, maybe adding some definition to the wrists? Just a hint at the joints there? But like I said, its a nitpick. Can't wait to see it coloured!
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 1:26 pm
Glad you like it n_n Ah yeah, I'll keep that in mind. lol.
Thank you so much for pointing that out xD
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 1:48 pm
ARG ! wicked job biggrin biggrin i am in LOVE with her face, great attitude WOOT there are just some things that you can do to give it an extra lil UMF, - its ALLL in the small details smile for the shorts - if her leg is up , it would change the shape of the shorts , so just move it up a little bit , and maybe define a bit of the knee ,but thats just like..lil things ^_^ great improvement !
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 2:02 pm
Hey pach!!! <3
Aawwm thank you very much! n_n Ah, oki! I'll fix her shorts now lol. xD
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 2:06 pm
cant wait to see it when its done ! biggrin
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 2:11 pm
So that means it can go through the inking process now, after fixing her shorts thingie? xD
EDIT By the way, do you think it's easier to ink by hand or with Photoshop (I use mouse though)
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 2:15 pm
UMM..i use by hand , because thast just me , and then i clean it up on photoshop , you could probably get more control with your hand then useing a mouse
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 2:22 pm
Yeah, that's why I'm getting a tablet since you're supposed to have more control over it. But I guess, even for tablets, the traditional way still works better, unless you mess up pretty bad (when you want to keep the original because you can fix almost anything on photoshop x_X)
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 4:29 pm
hiya cree.
I can't offer much anatomically since it's more of an anthro style ^^
if one thiing does bug me is the near eye is almost twice the size of the far eye. I used to have this problem in my earlier days trying to get perspective right, but it was still way too exaggerated. unless you're looking at her via fish eye perspective, there really would not be much difference in the size of her eyes as we're looking at her head on with a 3/4 turned head. keep your eyes' bottom and top aligned smile
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