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 Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 8:28 am
- Iron Boxes -
Enclose in this little box
Of iron and steel
Blood overslept and hardens
My heart lays dead
With chains at the core
and blood covered walls
Freezing in the darkness
Ink covered and black
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 8:29 am
- Subside to the Wolves Envy -
To all their own piece
Like the embers of the truth
We fall apart
Decay and Death
As the children sleep
We dream of the happiness
As the plague silently creeps
To slowly invade their fragile bodies
Mind-control
Seduction
Their Dreams gone
Their lives once full of life Now despair and grief
Slaves to their own higher
Higher their beliefs
Higher their minds
Nothing goes by
Without the touch of their mind
The touch of their control
Unable to compete To their rank
Alone
Together We will over run them
As the sheep in the meadow
We are there
Wolves in Sheep skin
Hidden from their eyes
We grow anxious
Eyes glowing against the night
Saliva drips from our mouths
Ears sensitive to each movement
Each sound of their bodies
Their sweet movement and grace
such is the life of a sheep
Followers
Unable to think for themselves
Unable to move without the other to follow
You don't think
you never question
all you know is to follow
your higher
With corruption and dishonest lies
Silently we creep
They are sleeping
But off not far
Alone
The higher wonders
To become the best
His greed and selfishness
Over-power him
Ambush
Ravaging
We will not hold back
Hunger strikes
Our Will thrives
As we come upon him
defenseless
He will know
How it feels to be at the bottom
As our teeth sink into the soft flesh
Blood pours from the newly ripped wounds
So alluring but never finished
We tear upon his body
Blood Pours
Fangs tear
Flesh falls
And the body soon lies limp
Upon the sweet grass
The air is calm
The wind soft
No noise
No sounds to the kill
He lays dead upon the grass
And now they will see
They can think for themselves.
Each as their own
Their eyes glow
Their ears p***k
And as they once where
Each to his own
The wolves crawl from under the sheep
Revealing the truth
We are the higher
With honest and truth
We will rise Against the corruption and death
Defeat this plague
One by One
We must realize our inner strength
And call our wolves
Call them out and defeat this mind control
We are under
Like the embers of truth
We will band together
First you and me
And they will realize
Others are not alone
So tear the flesh
And hurt defenseless
They are sheep
And so deserve to die
Subside to the wolves envy
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undesirable_sacrifice Crew
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undesirable_sacrifice Crew
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 8:30 am
- Glass Prison -
Without this feeling inside of me
I feel as if an empty void
As if the glass will never rise or fall
But completely still in the edge of its prison
A glass echoing
Pain escaped
Love intrusted
But stuck inside this prison
Unable to let go of it all
If trusted my life becomes foggy
My mind lost to you now
My heart slowly dying
If loved i gain
Gaining the hurt
Gaining the pain
Gainnig the misunderstanding
The misleading
The weakness
The saftey
The warmth
Still incomplete
Without you here
But you are never here
So should this feel any different than before
Years and Years of lonliness
Years and Years of self disgust
Yet when i look at you
I feel the warmth
And everything seems to fade
The fog seems to clear
Until you disappear again
And the cycle of my glass prison starts over
The cycle of my glass prison
To which i have no escape..
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 9:22 pm
A Gothic Poet I see. Very nice, your poems carry a nice theme to them, and the mood and tone essentially remains constant. I'd say that these are well thought out and put together.
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undesirable_sacrifice Crew
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 2:50 pm
One Poet A Gothic Poet I see. Very nice, your poems carry a nice theme to them, and the mood and tone essentially remains constant. I'd say that these are well thought out and put together.
Thank you. I Don't like to put my writings together without knowing how I know the ending will be. Most are all thought of before hand, But I don't randomly input verses and phrases together without a good connection or idea.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 2:55 pm
Makes a perfect amount of sense. Me on the other hand, when I write poetry, it is spontaneous. I rarely think out a poem more then a few minutes.
If you read my poetry on here, you'll find out as well.
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undesirable_sacrifice Crew
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 3:50 pm
Magnificent. Truly brilliant. I read your work and it amazed me as to how well they were. It was a true pleasure reading them. So when you write, it comes spontaniously? Or do you have them from feelings or thoughts to begin with?
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 3:53 pm
I start with a feeling. Or rather an emotion. I take that emotion, study it, "why do I feel this?" I come up with a thought, from that thought spawns words, I take those words, and create lines, from there, I am led to the world of poetry and the marvelous creation of wonder. That is how I write.
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undesirable_sacrifice Crew
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 3:56 pm
We start in similar ways. I start with a thought. If it be emotion, feelings, past experiences, or dreams. Then i work my way down in lines. I usually don't write spontanious or quickly unless there is something I need to get out of my thoughts or mind. Though I rarely show people my work in that category.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 3:58 pm
I see, I've wrote some things that I do not want anyone to see, but I think I might make an exception and post some in this guild, since I'm getting nothing but positive feedback, rather then people continuously telling me to get a life.
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undesirable_sacrifice Crew
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:17 pm
True. That makes sense. I'm more afraid that people will judge me according to my writing. Though a lot of it is dark and gore so to speak. I am still unsure if i am willing to post it public first.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:20 pm
Well, I don't really care what people have to say about me through my work. I've been called a "40-Year-Old Love-Sick Poet." I've been called a "Emo" "Goth" and many, many other things. But the reason why I don't post in public is because people like to just discourage writers if they don't like one single thing. So I prefer to post my work in controlled environments such as this guild. But of course that is me.
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undesirable_sacrifice Crew
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:27 pm
No, it seems very reasonable. I am new to the guild and I trust my work to post it such as this guild. Though fear still stricks me to not post any yet.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:30 pm
Well I just joined recently as well, just last night really. So technically you've been here longer then I.
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undesirable_sacrifice Crew
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:33 pm
Well that is truth spoken. I myself really enjoy this guild. Just so I can expereince and write freely without harsh judgement and ignorant ranting.
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