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 Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 10:29 pm
It's interesting.
In a good way.
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 10:57 pm
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 12:27 am
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 5:25 am
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 7:17 am
I think the story is awesome. You use good vocabulary that make muh brain hurts... xd
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 5:18 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 6:49 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 6:55 pm
Oh, so you go and copy me, huh? Tch! [/horrible joke]
Good chapter. I suggest a new paragraph with each new speaker, however. Other than that it is pretty good.
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 6:58 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 6:59 pm
Kidding, 'cuz I just released a new chapter.
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 7:00 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 7:01 pm
Hence the "[/horrible joke]" thing.
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 7:02 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 7:03 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 7:10 pm
It's the Majora's Mask Kid! =O
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