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What should be the raevan's gender?
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`ShivA

PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2007 3:06 pm


heart Je suis fini for now~
PostPosted: Tue Dec 25, 2007 10:20 am


I think I'm going to edit this later today~ I have quite a bit of updating to do~~

`ShivA


`ShivA

PostPosted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 12:11 pm


The .hack games are extremely addicting. *attention span shot*
PostPosted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:22 pm


Super-update time!!!

With banners and new-custom-raevan form (since the previous one was lost x: ).

I think I'll be super updating throughout august until school starts, or even after, if school still allows me to be free.

Feedback would be appreciated a lot, as well as voting for the poll~

`ShivA


`ShivA

PostPosted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 1:50 pm


Made a tektek concept avvie of the possible Raevan:
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I should be able to draw out the concept after school settles down.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 3:27 pm


Just a friendly note...
God souls aren't allowed... ((ever)) The closest we have is Zul.
But he was created by Kyou plus Baphomet isn't considered a 'god' in the LAB setting, but has been changed into just a high powered demon.
You may well want to rethink. >:

If you'd like, I could try to suggest some non-deity souls with the same types of themes as you gods.

Vyn -- LAB305


`ShivA

PostPosted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 9:40 am


Vyn -- LAB305
Just a friendly note...
God souls aren't allowed... ((ever)) The closest we have is Zul.
But he was created by Kyou plus Baphomet isn't considered a 'god' in the LAB setting, but has been changed into just a high powered demon.
You may well want to rethink. >:

If you'd like, I could try to suggest some non-deity souls with the same types of themes as you gods.

That would be really nice. I was thinking about that, and having the soul just affect the Raevan it self, rather then it having it like cast illusions on everyone or something of that nature. That or having its limitations. I just really like the concept of Morpheus or Maya.
But, yeah- suggestions would be reallly nice.x3
PostPosted: Sat May 23, 2009 12:30 pm


I highly suggest you don't use the "Corruption" fel essence. It doesn't really fit the self-contradicting profile it should have, and since you went out on such a limb to justify why it should exist I just don't see it working. XD;

cibarium

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`ShivA

PostPosted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 1:05 pm


Mouse Pachinkorelli
I highly suggest you don't use the "Corruption" fel essence. It doesn't really fit the self-contradicting profile it should have, and since you went out on such a limb to justify why it should exist I just don't see it working. XD;

Oh, ok? Do you not see it working because I justified it, or you just don't see it working in general though? sweatdrop

I'll keep thinking of other things then, thanks. biggrin
PostPosted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 11:15 pm


Changed Fel and soul concepts.

Crit/comment please~

`ShivA


Snoofington

Merry Krampus

PostPosted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 8:42 am


If the Baku soul is a new addition, you'll have to drop it. It was used in a Raevan already, despite him being NPC'd. Nue? Anyway, once a soul is used in a Raevan that specific type can't/shouldn't be used again. I'm sure there's more dream oriented creatures if that's what you're specifically looking for.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 2:36 pm


ex o ex Snoof
If the Baku soul is a new addition, you'll have to drop it. It was used in a Raevan already, despite him being NPC'd. Nue? Anyway, once a soul is used in a Raevan that specific type can't/shouldn't be used again. I'm sure there's more dream oriented creatures if that's what you're specifically looking for.

I know that it was used by Nue; I put a note of acknowledgment under the soul concept. However, like I said, i saw rules on not doubling Fels, but not for souls; seeing as there is nothing that goes against that--I put it up.
Now if a rule comes out that forbids it, I will definitely change it since I'm seriously questing.

Thanks for the crit, though; I definitely should have run it by Kyou before putting it up.

`ShivA


Ravina Loki
Crew

Incredible Flatterer

PostPosted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 3:16 pm


Pretty much what it is, Shiva, is an unspoken rule.

Questing Tips and Guidelines
[.03] There are some soul choices that are not recommended. Just because there are too many of it's type already in the shop. Birds are one of them! This is not an absolute no-no however, if you are stubborn and insisted on sticking to your bird soul choice, I will not stop you. But at the same time I will not like it so much as well.


"There are some soul choices not recommended". Sure it doesn't say 'already taken souls' exactly, but this situation falls under that as well as politeness and etiquette. Nue may be NPC'd, but you never know if his owner will come back and start RPing him again. There can't be a second scorpion soul or a second black cat soul, as that would just be disrespecting the people who already own Raevans with those, so there can't be a second Baku soul either. I'm sure Kyou herself would just flat out tell you 'no' in any case, so it'd just be best to get rid of that entirely.

Also, I couldn't help but notice your other souls in your second Soul post are a set of gods and an angel of death. God souls are not allowed, they're just too powerful and there is a rule about taking the soul of something singular like a god. For the angel, Tariel has an angel soul already.

Sorry to say, but it'd just be best to get rid of those, no matter how seriously you might be questing them, and like Snoof said, there's plenty of other dream related creatures out there. You just have to look.
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