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 Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 9:05 pm
7.5/10 somethings missing : and yeah im not done with avi
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 8:04 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 9:18 pm
Perhaps using something a duller, more rusty red if you want red would be better (the mask thing is too vivid). As for the winged anklets and flame sword...well, they just strike me as really out of place...the wings especially. I could see you keeping the flame sword and whatnot if you're cosplaying as Zoro or something, but yeah...
5/10
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 9:49 pm
xsparklersx Perhaps using something a duller, more rusty red if you want red would be better (the mask thing is too vivid). As for the winged anklets and flame sword...well, they just strike me as really out of place...the wings especially. I could see you keeping the flame sword and whatnot if you're cosplaying as Zoro or something, but yeah... 5/10 *whacks off too your avi* lol smile 10/10
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 3:50 am
Wow, this place can get pretty mean...
Krauser... um... how can I put this lightly,
its random
cluttered
no center of focus, its just all over the place
I suggest a redo 0/10
I could have been worse.
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 7:38 am
nice though the leggings over the angelic shows looks rediculus, and all the things on your head kind of looks to cloutored. 6/10
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 10:09 am
This love is killing me!Hm....
Yours is just...
Well I don't much like the rose and stuff.
It just..
It's out of place.
And with the fox tail
you need more orange/red if you're gonna use that.
4/10.But you're the only one!
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 10:45 am
A black/white avi. Almost as common as a black/red avi. Still, you managed more originality than most, and for that, you get props. You might want to add a color. Hmmm...well, your orly hat's eyes are that browning gold, so maybe a buckle or some anklets or something could add gold or brown to the mix? That would spice it up a bit. That, and the reason why people say it looks a bit off is because you have more white than black. The white side of your collar adds more white to only once side of your body, throwing off the balance. Perhaps exchanging that for something brown or gold?
6.5/10
Because the effort is there, but it could use some work.
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 10:47 am
This love is killing me!Hm...
7/10.
I don't think it's matched very much
but it's pretty good. But you're the only one!
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 10:53 am
9/10
It looks great but something is off alittle bit...Maybe it's the hat sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 10:56 am
This love is killing me!6/10.
It's kinda plain.... But you're the only one!
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 10:58 am
CratedPockySex This love is killing me!Hm...
7/10.
I don't think it's matched very much
but it's pretty good. But you're the only one! How so? (I've already rated yours, so I'll only rate it again if it changes)
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 11:00 am
This love is killing me![I did change it.
Tie instead of collar.]
Well the whites look different
and the blue..
Well I dunno. But you're the only one!
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 11:05 am
CratedPockySex This love is killing me![I did change it.
Tie instead of collar.]
Well the whites look different
and the blue..
Well I dunno. But you're the only one! The white in the wings are blue tinted. The fox minks are the same blue tinted white. So is the carnation thing. Which white do you suggest I change? And what to? Just wondering... I like for people to give specific suggestions for improvement when they rate. I mean, if people just posted their numerical ratings, we wouldn't really get better at making avis.
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 11:47 am
This love is killing me!I dunno what exactly.
Sorry. >.o But you're the only one!
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