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Sodashi-chan

PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 6:29 am


Wheewwwttt~ Best of luck Slann <33
PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 6:37 am


I saaaid dun post yet >__< Oh well thats okie cause I luff you >__>

Slanndalous

Dapper Codger


peachymint

PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 6:02 pm


hm.....i was going to say that you're Fel Essence sounds a lot like eternal ice, but it's reverse-ice....i get it!!

hm....i can't wait to see what kind of soul you pick!

i love your setup...it's so cool~~
PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 6:06 pm


Oh thanks ^^ Yeah, I was thinking that too O___o I might scrap the it can't melt part and focus on the it's florescentness since that's really the whole point

I really can't think of what would compliment the northern lights soul wise humm neutral A mystery

Slanndalous

Dapper Codger


cibarium

Noob

PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 7:55 am


*peeks in*

I read your description, and I'm really liking this fel essence. :3 I'm thinking from your horn description... how about an ibex soul? They're really pretty animals.


As seen here, and here.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 7:58 am


Ohhhh they are pretty o.o!! and I love goats!! Ohhh D: *Clings to Mousey* Such inspiration!!! I'll definitely keep them in mind thank you ;___;

Slanndalous

Dapper Codger


Slanndalous

Dapper Codger

PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 2:15 pm


Guardian concept started and the Alpine Ibex has been picked for the captured soul. What do you think?
PostPosted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 10:01 pm


Guardian concept becoming more fleshed out and Raevan concept (more or less completed)

Slanndalous

Dapper Codger


Slanndalous

Dapper Codger

PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 9:53 pm


Guardian history completed! Tell em what you think. Tell me about ANYTHING actually! I need critiques!
PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 12:30 pm


(( oh gawd I'll check this out in detail as soon as I can!!!

Issoooo coool crying
*luffs*

I've seen the pic in your sig already, just haven't gotten around to commenting do forgive meeee sweatdrop

expect some squeees from me in the near future Slann!))

Graficcha

Gracious Conversationalist


Slanndalous

Dapper Codger

PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 12:59 pm


Hurry hurry D: I need feedback XD *kisskiss*
PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 4:18 pm


Teeny guardian revision

Slanndalous

Dapper Codger


Cruzle

PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 8:56 pm


You asked for crit, so here's what I came up with... hope it's not too harsh!

I would ask why you picked an Alpine Ibex, but I know that my soul doesn't have a whole heck of lot to do with my fel essence. It's all about how you roleplay and bring out different characteristics, not likenesses, anyway! *lecturing herself* xd ;

Can I ask why out of curiousity anyway, though?

I think the Raevan's hair sounds really neat and pretty. Almost like it'd be opalescent, but more brilliant! I have a thing for rainbows, as you'll come to know... xd

Like Mouse mentioned, I think the fel essence concept might be a little two-tiered. Try to focus more on the fact that it radiates different colors. I mean, sure, a crystal can create a prism... but this rock creates a prism without lights!

Really nice owner history. It makes me realize that I should work on my own owner's history!

So will the ibex's mystical uses and the past legends of the aurora borealis play a role in We`rika's journey of self-rediscovery? That would be really neat to see roleplayed. >3

...everything here is a little separate, but it all applies to your concept. I hope this has been useful! I commend you quest-makers for being so detailed and creatve and dedicated. heart
PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 9:11 pm


;_____; Thank you for crits Cruzle. I was in a drought >__
Uhmm well Mouse gave me the idea since I was looking for soul ideas. She recommended them because of my Raevan's appearance and I thought they were really pretty. They are also considered mystical and very respected which I thought was neat! I also wanted something big and strong >__> and RAWR XD

Haha yeah I really like his hair as well :3

A lot of people have told me this too and I believe I will take off the ice, but I noticed that Kyou made a lava/ice rock as well which has two elements >__> So I think I'll ask her about it D: before I scrap it. But I'm not completely attached to having two elements so I can let it go if I need to :3

Thank you! I ehhh took a class in Cultural anthropology and learned about a lot of nomadic cultures and got really interested in the Huichol culture ^^ Though him being half rat o___o I have no idea where I pulled that from XD

And yes ^^ I expect Tau to rekindle We`rika's past though it's not very flesh out D: I may have to change a bit of Tau so he is more..... akin to nature rather than becoming a cursing druggie like We`rika XD

Slanndalous

Dapper Codger


Cruzle

PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 9:16 pm


Eee, okay (@ soul choice. xd ) Yeah, mystical creatures are definitely a WIN.

Kyou already mentioned that you don't need to ask her questions unless you actually GET the custom. Until then, you can come up with as many ideas and variants as you want!

Anthropology is really neat. I love learning about different cultures, too.

RP fleshes a lot of things out for you, and inspiration will come. :3 So no worries there!
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