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 Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 12:12 pm
Betman Masamune 5.0 Betman Dear god, Masamune, this is great. MUCH better than your last story already. That's not saying much. xd My last story was horrendous.
But this one really is good.Thanks.
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 12:20 pm
Great story masamune this is way better than your first...no offense
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 12:31 pm
This looks intriguing, when I get a chance I'll be sure to read this.
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 12:33 pm
Okay I am going to be honest as well I truly didn’t like your first story. It was just to boring to me. But this one is much better so far, I enjoyed it quite a bit. Nice amount of characters, good beginning, and a nice length. Congrats on doing a good job!
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 12:34 pm
Not to be an a**, but hey masamune this story is so good when can we expect the next chapter?
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 12:43 pm
Perfect, Masamune you've made this one by far superior to your previous story and even though it's only one chapter it seems more on par with Seaphron's.
The Well Done cow salutes you.
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 12:58 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 1:04 pm
Sauvie Not to be an a**, but hey masamune this story is so good when can we expect the next chapter? Soon. Though you also have to check older chapters. I sometimes edit them. @ Draken: xd
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 2:18 pm
nice, I liked it. can't wait for more.
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 3:59 pm
Already twice as better as your old story. Not just because of the Culties, either. It's off to a good start, and I hope it goes off to a good beginning, too.
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 4:44 pm
Woah.
That was amazing. I really liked it.
Looking forward to the new ones.
And I like what you did with me in it, too. The Lifeless Fox. Has a good ring too it.
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 6:30 pm
Lifeless-Fox Woah.
That was amazing. I really liked it.
Looking forward to the new ones.
And I like what you did with me in it, too. The Lifeless Fox. Has a good ring too it. I thought you might like that.
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 6:35 pm
You guys do know my favorite colour is Orange right?
Awesome story though. I like how you added me.
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 7:53 pm
Very nice, Masamune. I like it.
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Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 11:35 am
Chapter Two is written/edited slightly. Suggestions are appreciated.
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