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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 12:56 pm


Very good beginning, though I do agree that the dialogue could use a bit of work. My favorite part was the prologue! heart I'm hooked already, so you better write more! scream blaugh heart
PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 9:40 pm


Chapter 3 neat ^.^ Not much happened...but, oh well ...Please, dear GOD, don't let her become like Harry Potter! crying gonk Keep Anya as Anya...

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