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 Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2005 10:11 pm
holyredccphysicist Briskfire As I look to the past, I see much pain. Yet when I look at the present it begins again. In the past armies ransacked, piliged, and burned, And still in the present, what have we learned? Families are homeless, out on the street, While dictators conspire, steal, and cheat. Yet the world goes on, ignoring their transgression. Even with the appearance of violence and aggression. Why haven't we listened, why haven't we learned? Why haven't we stopped them, had the tide of history turned? Is this a cycle that we are doomed to repeat? Endless, moving, impossible to beat? Or is this a time for all of us to go, Take a stand for our beliefs, change history's flow. that was great, brisk... do you have an encoure piece? Several...but I was trying to figure out if I should spread them out a little.
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 12:36 am
Briskfire holyredccphysicist Briskfire As I look to the past, I see much pain. Yet when I look at the present it begins again. In the past armies ransacked, piliged, and burned, And still in the present, what have we learned? Families are homeless, out on the street, While dictators conspire, steal, and cheat. Yet the world goes on, ignoring their transgression. Even with the appearance of violence and aggression. Why haven't we listened, why haven't we learned? Why haven't we stopped them, had the tide of history turned? Is this a cycle that we are doomed to repeat? Endless, moving, impossible to beat? Or is this a time for all of us to go, Take a stand for our beliefs, change history's flow. that was great, brisk... do you have an encoure piece? Several...but I was trying to figure out if I should spread them out a little. yes, please do.
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 12:40 am
neutral stare stressed scream stare
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 2:26 am
please no smileys without an actual post... with text...
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 9:47 am
No war is just!
The people cried,
No fight is worth the cost!
Paid for by those men that died,
No battle worth those lost.
To late to stay,
The damage done,
The war was underway.
Set to go until 'twas won.
Till death had won the day.
The soldiers fought,
The nations clashed,
Success was dearly bought.
People cried, their souls agast
At losses war had brought.
And war does grow,
And soldiers fell,
Both those of friend and foe.
And the war began to tell
On those who were at home.
The war did end,
The violence stopped,
The wounds began to mend.
Once more people did adopt
Their lives to which they tend.
And talk does cease,
And memories fade,
But don't forget the least
Of those who went and paid,
Paid their lives to give us peace.
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 9:51 am
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 9:53 am
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:07 am
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:17 am
Why?
Why must people go on without love?
Why must losts souls never be found?
Why did I leave her?Why did she leave me?
Why did my heart shatter into peices?
Why couldn't I put it back together?
Why did my blood spill along the floor?
Why did it have to happen so fast?
Why...?
I now will be posting my crappy poems
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:20 am
The only thing I have of you is your beautiful picture
Our moments together ligurie me in the day
Forever You will be in my Heart
Once I close my eyes I only dream of you
Your addicting,a parasite eating away at my heart
Forever you'll be mine
I stand here wishing,hoping you'd be here in my arms
I wonder where you are?If you thinking of me?
Forever I will love you
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:23 am
By: Alain Foxtrot
(i do have permission to use it.)
I carved your name into the bullet, so
You were the last thing through my mind
I thought I could just end it then
Leave all my woes behind
I wanted to just leave it all
My troubles and my strife
It was the largest mistake I ever made
And the last one of my life
I didn't think I could live without your smile
Your laughter and your cheer
Even if just for a while,
I needed to hold you near
The rest of my life mattered not,
As I was blinded by desire
Inside me there was a flame
And it was my heart that was on fire
Your eyes were an ocean of beautiful brown
As deep as the deepest sea
And I would drown in your love
When that sea seemed to wash over me
I would do anything to change what I did
For you and your heart of ice
Don't take away your own life
That is my final advice
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:23 am
I long for her arms around me
I havent seen her in a while
About two months and counting
Everynight i dream of her
Shes in my thoughts in class
Every second we are apart... I fear I wont see her beauty again...
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:25 am
By: me whee
The bitter cold nips at my nose
As i trudge through the deepest snow
waiting for your return
I see the sign just for me
Happiness flows through me
As the sun comes out to play
You joyful warmth revives me once more
I wish not to take for granted of what I have
But i pray that you shall never leave
Thus i have no choice and there you go again
Swallowed by the gray and gloomy clouds
And i have died once more waiting for you to return.
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:26 am
Acid Rain
Watch the rain.
Watch your clothes.
Watch your hair come out.
Watch your skin burn.
Watch your tears fall.
Watch the ground collaspe under you.
Watch yourself fall.
Watch the blood fly.
Watch your soul scream.
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:27 am
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