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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 7:19 pm
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 7:25 pm
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 7:37 pm
*tackles sky* finally I made it...wait i was already here. ninja ninja ninja
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 7:40 pm
lol. Okay, who do we want to put together? Your mare and one of mine, or your stallion and one of mine, to start this RPing lesson?
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 7:50 pm
My mare and one of your horses.
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 8:04 pm
Alright. We've now established characters. I'm throwing in Orion. And now to determine who will start. Though, for this round, I will start the Role playing.
Now, RPing is just like writing a story. Though, you have to people having the input into it. I will know the story going one way, and you have in your head that it will go another way. Sometimes, you can collaborate with one other and get it to go a direction you both like. Or, you can just go together and see what happens.
A lot of the time, you will see RPers go in one sentence.
Example:
Orion stood there on a hill and looked around.
Sometimes, when there is nothing else to say, this works. However, I wouldn't do it too many times, because you are missing a good peice of information. If you read a story that was like that, you wouldn't be reading it very long. You need to flesh it out.
For Example:
Orion stood on a hill, looking at the silvery specks in the sky above. His silver eyes reflected the ancient patterns of the stars above him; his own gaze the same color as the stars that were part of his namesake. A crisp breeze swirled around his ankles, and caused his mane to rise and fall gently from the side of his neck. The snow was unbroken up here, save for the steps that he had taken to get to this unbroken expanse. But he had put those to his back, so that there was nothing but a clean white field out before him. There were no imperfections that would draw his gaze to anything other then what he wanted to look at; the silvery stars in the heavens above.
See how that makes that much more interesting to read? And gives you information about what's around, the temp, wether it's night or day, and whatnot.
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 8:15 pm
Keiko looked around wondering why she was feeling the presence of another being in her area of the ranch. She knew that Rudy was off frolicking with Shasta, so what was this new presence? She decided to investigate. As she came to the base of the hill the presence was growing stronger. I wonder who or what is on top of my favorite hill. She decided that she had to make contact with this new being, so she started ascending the hill.
Does that work?
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 10:39 pm
Was she thinking about who was up on top of her favorite hill, or did she say it out loud?
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 10:44 pm
She was thinking out loud. She enjoys talking to herself and anyone else who is interested in listening.
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 10:53 pm
Ryona Salik Keiko looked around wondering why she was feeling the presence of another being in her area of the ranch. She knew that Rudy was off frolicking with Shasta, so what was this new presence? She decided to investigate. As she came to the base of the hill the presence was growing stronger. I wonder who or what is on top of my favorite hill. she mused aloud as she she decided that she had to make contact with this new being, so she started ascending the hill. Try this. It's really good.
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 11:00 pm
okay so you have to explain what the horse is doing as far as actions. thinking speaking running...etc.
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 11:02 pm
Yeah, because you don't want the other person to be confused. it's like explaining to someone online what you're doing. It's like; I'm playing on the computer.
Or, yo ucould say:
I'm talking to my friend on the phone, eating a pizza with one hand, and typing with the other. So, what you doing? xD
it lets people create a visual image to go by.
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 11:08 pm
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 11:13 pm
Orion felt someone approaching from behind, and turned to face the one that came his direction. Though his eyes were removed from the heavens, his coat still sparkled like the stars they represented as though they had come from the sky and settled onto him in their own pattern. Steam came from the end of his muzzle as he let out a breath into the chilly night. And since his coat blended with the sky, it looked as though he faded into the heavens that were behind him; giving him an odd look of being half on earth, and half in the heavens.
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 11:22 pm
As she approached the top of the hill Keiko looked around but saw no one. She could feel another presence, but could not see what made it. Is there anyone else here? she asked into the darkness. All she could make out was a blanket of stars before her.
okay I'm finally starting to get the hang of this I think.
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