hey allright just in time for valentines day
smile oh and i need help mine is not coming out right
sad first attempt was before i read the tute.
second attempt was after and i think it looks fine except that it looks like the first guy is forcing the second guy. any advice .. other than it fails and quit drawing.(heard that one too many times allready it doesnt help )

first attempt is on the bottom second attempt is on the top.
edit:
avvy on the right is artemismeow (me)
avvy on the left is chibi_sai
i am thinking that maybe changing the expression would help but uhm
what do i change it to.
if i have the eyes open it looks weird. unless i try a surprised look on chibi_sai but i wanted something romantic.
.. also the drawing is very sketchy i left the outlines in to see if maybe i was doing something wrong from the outline stage.
edit again:
also there is nothing wrong with the tutorial ... it helped alot as you can see from my first attempt to my second attempt its just that now i need even more help to take it to the next level if you will
smile edit yet again. well i got some advice from the main guild forums and this is what my 3rd attempt looks like.
personally i like it so i will now go and finish my drawing. still any additional advice is allways welcome
smile