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 Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 7:42 pm
loslover Wow I really like your new ones and I'd have to say that Freefall through Dreamland was the better of the two. Also you actually forgot to put it's name in bold. (Just in case you did that accidentally since you bold all your other ones.) Yeah, I noticed. I was tired as hell last night and I was just too lazy to fix it at first >.< Thanks for the comment.
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Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 2:23 pm
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Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 4:28 pm
Deadside Dreams loslover Wow I really like your new ones and I'd have to say that Freefall through Dreamland was the better of the two. Also you actually forgot to put it's name in bold. (Just in case you did that accidentally since you bold all your other ones.) Yeah, I noticed. I was tired as hell last night and I was just too lazy to fix it at first >.< Thanks for the comment. It's no problem and I'd have to say that I liked Cross of Flies more.
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Posted: Fri Dec 22, 2006 9:36 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:21 pm
Added another two more. Been a while.
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:24 pm
Severed Ties, Logic is Dead is just fantastic. Perhaps it has something to do with my bias on the matter, but I don't care about the bias...I care that what you wrote rocks.
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:35 pm
Wow. I absolutely love how your works flow. Your rhyme scheme works so well with the words. I'm probably going to have to reread all that you've posted because I feel I missed something and I can't remember all of them. But I can't do that tonight with my mind not focusing. I really, really like Severed Ties, Logic is Dead, but I also love My World and Shredded Wings. But, as Kharne did, I have to admit that I'm also biased on the matter, well, at least the theme that lies in both of those. Maybe that's why I like them so much. How I can relate, in addition to the rhyme and flow and your choice of words. Above all, really awesome writing, there. Keep it up, cause I'd love to read more!
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 11:21 pm
Update: Added another three!
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Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 4:20 pm
Wow I read some of the last couple that you added and I have to say that they were great. I felt that they fit very well. Hope to read more of you work, loslover.
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 8:31 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 7:33 pm
I like Puppet Reanimated. can't say why specifically but it's awesome possum dude!
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 9:48 pm
willowbyrd I like Puppet Reanimated. can't say why specifically but it's awesome possum dude! Thank you! smile Just added the three newest ones from my DA
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 12:13 pm
Just...wow. It's quite easy to fall in love with your simple, consistent form. The use of four line stanzas, usually in odd lines rhyming, really works for you. The rhyme scheme keeps the flow throughout each poem rather nicely. The comparisons and descriptions are colorful, fit very well, and are mesmerizing in some of the imagery. You're definitely a person that is not hindered by rhyme at all. I can't possibly comment on each poem separately, but a few of my favorites are Fall, Dare to Dream, and Love is a Drug. Very nice writing. I hope you add more soon!
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 2:10 pm
Isis375 Just...wow. It's quite easy to fall in love with your simple, consistent form. The use of four line stanzas, usually in odd lines rhyming, really works for you. The rhyme scheme keeps the flow throughout each poem rather nicely. The comparisons and descriptions are colorful, fit very well, and are mesmerizing in some of the imagery. You're definitely a person that is not hindered by rhyme at all. I can't possibly comment on each poem separately, but a few of my favorites are Fall, Dare to Dream, and Love is a Drug. Very nice writing. I hope you add more soon! Thank you so much! And no worries there, I'm always writing. And right now I'm adding poems in groups of three or four at a time to get all my pieces that I have on my DeviantART up. I don't want to put one huge flood of new pieces up, so I'm doing it in stages. I've also been meaning to go through all my old poetry books, composition books, and notebooks and cull out the good from the bad ones smile Just added four more. "Absinthe Laced Goodbyes" is actually my newest poem.
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 11:20 pm
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