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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 9:20 pm
That's messed up, Q.
I already did my senior paper. It was 10 pages (the max amount they would allow, something I have never accomplished before in my life) and argued how video games do not cause people to become more aggressive. Of course, had I chosen not to do it, I would've failed and not graduated, but still, it's a bunch of work. xD;;
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 9:20 pm
IIRC The Exorcist used a lot of subliminal cuts. Subliminal cuts are.. pictures of stuff flashed by really fast, put really simply.
But, I haven't seen the Exorcist. XD For a film student I haven't seen many movies, and it's part of why my grades aren't what they could be. They start talking about Apocolypse please and I'm Like. WUT? WUT?
I've only seen like 3 movies on the nobel prize for cinematography list. It's kind of sad. >_>
Edit:
Druki: I would've liked writing that paper. I REALLY LOVE writing persuasive essays. Research papers I dislike simply because we have to rely on other people to get out points across. And of course, Works Cited. D:
BUT THIS AIN'T ABOUT ME.
SYSMAL NEEDS INTRO CRITIQUE YOZ.
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 9:28 pm
Sublimal messages are funny. I believe www.nuklearpower.com has an ad up advertising their t-shirts and stuff. Funny.
INDEED. WE MUST USE OUR SENIORITY TO HIS ADVANTAGE.
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 9:33 pm
 xD <3
Want to critique my second paragraph then? rofl
One of the major things Commedia offered was a more in-depth description of what the afterlife could really look like. Contrary to the idea that Hell was just an eternal pit of fire, Dante imagines an complex cavernous place that led to the frozen center of the Earth, which encased Satan and the highest sinners. He imagined every layer of Hell had it’s own unique layout and offered a punishment according to the sinners deeds. For example, the Suicides of the seventh terrace have their souls encased in thorny trees and their leaves are fed upon by harpies. They bleed through the wounds the harpies leave, and can only speak through this blood. This symbolizes that their statement in life was destroying it, because now in the afterlife they can only speak through destruction. Along with giving specifics on the punishments of Hell, Dante also offered detailed physical descriptions of the place, and even offered rough measurements of one terrace. He also went into much detail for Purgatory, which he changed from a sort of Limbo to a mountain that one who didn’t belong in The Vestibule or Limbo, yet still didn’t meet the standards to enter Heaven, could climb to be redeemed for his or her sins. The mountain offered punishments on every terrace, similar to Hell, but they were for the purpose of redeeming sin rather than punishing the sinners. The imagery of Purgatory was a mountain which had both a night and a day (though those on it were allowed to move only during daylight), and was in every other way an ordinary mountain. This made it seem more worldly, perhaps to symbolize the fact that the sinners were not et able to part from the Earth and enter “God’s light”. Dante’s Heaven, however, is an entirely different story. In the first canto of Paradiso, Dante admits that the Heaven he sees is only what his eyes permit him to see. Basically, it is suggesting that every person will have their own personal Heaven, or maybe share the same Heaven but view it differently. This greatly differs from the traditional view of the cloudy Kingdom of Heaven.
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 9:34 pm
Druki:
ROFL.
I thought you were joking in the age thread when you said what your age was. I've always viewed you as like 23 or something.
But I just went to your profile and looked at your birthdate.
SO LYK DRUKI WUT SENORITY YOU GOT??
But srsly I need to work on this paper, I've put it off a week already. o.o;
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 9:49 pm
Quote: Since Before the ancient Egyptians even conceived the concept of a life after death, Man(?) has tried to imagine what could be waiting for them when the y die. For the Christians, it was the vague idea of a “good place” and a “bad place” ; a Heaven where the righteous would be rewarded and a Hell where the sinners would be punished. Unfortunately, not even the Bible revealed many clues on the specifics of these places, and until a Florentine poet by the name of Dante Aligheri wrote his epic poem [you use poet and then poem. Maybe reference it instead of saying Poem?], many Christians would be left to wonder. Dante’s Divine Comedy provided a detailed (though fictional) description of the Christian afterlife, and evolved the endless plane(?) of fire and stretch of clouds into living, breathing, believable places, forever changing the way Christians viewed Heaven and Hell. One of the major things Commedia offered was a more in-depth description of what the afterlife could really look like. Contrary to the idea that Hell was just an eternal pit of fire, Dante imagines a n(?) complex cavernous place [use "which led" or "leading". Try to stay away from "that"]that led to the frozen center of the Earth, which encased Satan and the highest sinners. He imagined [use a synonym, you already used 'imagines'. Speaking of that, pick a tense, too.] every layer of Hell had it’s own unique layout and offered a punishment according to the sinners '(?) deeds. For example, the Suicides of the seventh terrace have their souls encased in thorny trees and their leaves are fed upon by harpies. They bleed through the wounds the harpies leave, and can only speak through this blood. [this statement makes no sense. 0.o]This symbolizes that their statement in life was destroying it, because now in the afterlife they can only speak through destruction. Along with giving specifics on the punishments of Hell, Dante also offered detailed physical descriptions of the place, and even offered rough measurements of one terrace. [this also does not make sense]He also went into much detail for Purgatory, which he changed from a sort of Limbo to a mountain that one who didn’t belong in The Vestibule or Limbo, yet still didn’t meet the standards to enter Heaven, could climb to be redeemed for his or her sins. The mountain offered punishments on every terrace ,(?) similar to Hell, but they were for the purpose of redeeming sin rather than punishing the sinners. The imagery of Purgatory was a mountain which held(?) both a night and a day (though those on it were allowed to move only during daylight), and was in every other way an ordinary mountain. This made it seem more worldly, perhaps to symbolize the fact that the sinners were not yet able to part from the Earth and enter “God’s light”. Dante’s Heaven, however, is an entirely different story. (?)In the first canto of Paradiso, Dante admits that the Heaven he sees is only what his eyes permit him to see. Basically, it is suggesting that every person will have their own personal Heaven, or maybe share the same Heaven but view it differently. This greatly differs from the traditional view of the cloudy Kingdom of Heaven. question marks depict if I'm unsure the correction is viable or not. wink
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 9:51 pm
Second paragraph looks good, however, if you want any strategy to your paper, plan it out. If that is your strongest point, make it the last one.
Q: Only on the intarwebz do I act this mature. In real life, I'm quite...spontaneous and impulsive. And, as a result, can make people laugh. It's quite funny. Should I ever obtain a microphone, I'll be recording something so people can have a god laugh.
I GOTZ SENORITY OVAR UR MOM LOL!!7!twohunderandfortyfive!!(
Edit: I'll let Q do the grammatical stuff, since he has that down. If it isn't due tomorrow, I'll add more advice and such tomorrow then. Waking up at 5:00 is never a fun thing.
Good night people.
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 9:52 pm
Should you ever get a microphone, you will get Skype. And then you will Skype with me.
This is all.
Edit: NO! DRUKI! I NEED YOU FOR HELP WITH MYYYY PAPERRR... D: D:
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 9:55 pm
I already have Skype. I got it when my brother borrowed a mic from a friend a few months back. But then he returned it and I joined the GCDSG and came to this moment in history.
You people need to learn how to do things ahead in time. Srsly, why do you people hate sleep so much?
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 9:56 pm
 Crap, I didn't even notice I was changing tenses. You're a life svaer gonk heart
And I meant to put the Suicides could only speak though the wounds the herpies created, not the blood. Thanks for catching that <33333
@Druki: I was supposed to plan it out a month ago, so I'm a little late. xD Besides, I usually work much batter just writing straight through with out a plan, as long as I have a few baisic points lined up xP
And goodnight rofl heart
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 9:57 pm
Druki I already have Skype. I got it when my brother borrowed a mic from a friend a few months back. But then he returned it and I joined the GCDSG and came to this moment in history. You people need to learn how to do things ahead in time. Srsly, why do you people hate sleep so much? My roommates did it.
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 10:02 pm
Bah.
Well I'm going to bed. Good luck on the papers.
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 10:03 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 10:07 pm
YOU DO NOT POST ENOUGH SYSMAL.
I DEMAND YOU POST MOAR TO KEEP ME ENTERTAINED WHILST I WRITE MY ESSAY.
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 10:11 pm
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