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 Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 1:05 pm
Heikki Oh! I defenitely want to join. Do we just submit it here or email it to you? just submit it...
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Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 9:56 am
ultramarine here is my poem If you wait for me Then I'll come for you. Although I've travelled far, I always hold a place for you In my heart. If you think of me, If you miss me once in a while, Then I'll return to you. I'll return and fill that space in your heart It's sweet and simple. I like it.
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Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 10:14 am
Tear of Death ultramarine here is my poem If you wait for me Then I'll come for you. Although I've travelled far, I always hold a place for you In my heart. If you think of me, If you miss me once in a while, Then I'll return to you. I'll return and fill that space in your heart It's sweet and simple. I like it. I do to.I like that you didn't try to rhyme and just let it come to you. heart
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 8:43 am
njnah dont like writing shoort stories or poetry if i write a story it will be atleast 1000 pages
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 12:32 pm
Don't really know how to write poetry.
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2005 12:22 pm
Thunderboltx Don't really know how to write poetry. It's cool just let it come from you.I promise you'll love it once you start.
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2005 12:25 pm
gffhgfththtrutrhj Thunderboltx Don't really know how to write poetry. It's cool just let it come from you.I promise you'll love it once you start. Not really. I'm not good even if I tried. I would mess up and make a fool of myself.
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2005 1:01 pm
Thunderboltx gffhgfththtrutrhj Thunderboltx Don't really know how to write poetry. It's cool just let it come from you.I promise you'll love it once you start. Not really. I'm not good even if I tried. I would mess up and make a fool of myself. That's alright! You should get a second opinion on your work. I usually think my work is BAD, but others seem to like it...
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2005 1:20 pm
Tear of Death Thunderboltx gffhgfththtrutrhj Thunderboltx Don't really know how to write poetry. It's cool just let it come from you.I promise you'll love it once you start. Not really. I'm not good even if I tried. I would mess up and make a fool of myself. That's alright! You should get a second opinion on your work. I usually think my work is BAD, but others seem to like it... No I had more than three opinions and they all said bad poetry. So I'm not good.
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2005 8:44 am
Thunderboltx Tear of Death Thunderboltx gffhgfththtrutrhj Thunderboltx Don't really know how to write poetry. It's cool just let it come from you.I promise you'll love it once you start. Not really. I'm not good even if I tried. I would mess up and make a fool of myself. That's alright! You should get a second opinion on your work. I usually think my work is BAD, but others seem to like it... No I had more than three opinions and they all said bad poetry. So I'm not good. No listein when I first started I thought my poetry sucked to no return but alot of people said it rocked out loud so why don't you post a poem you think is your best.
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2005 11:05 am
gffhgfththtrutrhj Thunderboltx Tear of Death Thunderboltx gffhgfththtrutrhj Thunderboltx Don't really know how to write poetry. It's cool just let it come from you.I promise you'll love it once you start. Not really. I'm not good even if I tried. I would mess up and make a fool of myself. That's alright! You should get a second opinion on your work. I usually think my work is BAD, but others seem to like it... No I had more than three opinions and they all said bad poetry. So I'm not good. No listein when I first started I thought my poetry sucked to no return but alot of people said it rocked out loud so why don't you post a poem you think is your best. Sorry, but I think I lost my poetic way of writting good things. I don't think I can. I"m sorry, I'm just useless here.
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2005 12:09 pm
Thunderboltx gffhgfththtrutrhj Thunderboltx Tear of Death Thunderboltx gffhgfththtrutrhj Thunderboltx Don't really know how to write poetry. It's cool just let it come from you.I promise you'll love it once you start. Not really. I'm not good even if I tried. I would mess up and make a fool of myself. That's alright! You should get a second opinion on your work. I usually think my work is BAD, but others seem to like it... No I had more than three opinions and they all said bad poetry. So I'm not good. No listein when I first started I thought my poetry sucked to no return but alot of people said it rocked out loud so why don't you post a poem you think is your best. Sorry, but I think I lost my poetic way of writting good things. I don't think I can. I"m sorry, I'm just useless here. Usually those who suck at oetry are amazing with stories or art...I'll let you submit art...
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2005 12:24 pm
I'd like to join ^_^
Bestow My Heart
Bestow my heart
Given to you a piece
To hold and keep forever
Protecting it with all your might
Place it upon your fragile heart
And let the rhythm of the hearts beat
In perfect harmony found nowhere else
Take my hand and hold me close
Beneath the stars of a cloudless sky
With the music of the night we shall dance
Tearing apart from this reality
Into the universe so quiet
Let no distraction lead us astray
Only us, our beating hearts, and the music
Swirl me around, take hold the beauty
We have found ourselves enter
Together, now and forever
Harmony at its peak
Perfection in every way
Let me hold you tight
So you may never fall away
And keep you here forever
So close to my quivering heart
Today you gave me a piece of your heart
And it is very well protected against my own
The music of their rhythmic beats
Sooth me from the inside out
Bestow my heart
That longs for you
For you are always near
I will never let you go
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2005 12:40 pm
you went over the limit, but because you only did it by one line i'll let it slide...It is pretty good...
DEADLINE IS NOT FAR AWAY; JULY 16TH! HURRY AND GET YOUR ENTRIES IN!!!
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2005 1:23 pm
Hello this is Lacey I would like to add a rule for Scarlet that she has approved.
The rateings are like this 1-20 20 being the lowest and 1 being the best.
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