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 Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 3:59 pm
Sasuke to Sakura--A poem by Allora
Original piece:
Portez-moi dans cet endroit,
Là où la seule lumière
est celle de vos yeux.
Là,
Nous mourons sans douleur.
Translation (I think):
Carry me into that place,
Where the only light
Is that of your eyes.
There,
We die without sorrow.
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 11:50 pm
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 12:14 am
I'm no poet, but I still enjoyed reading through this thread. Very beautiful poetry. Neat thread idea. :3
Tenshi, Fading, Peace, & Allora Lang- ;___; heart
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 3:37 am
Writing poetry about SasuSaku is easy for me, mostly because I'm kinda like Sakura. Only I've never loved anyone other then my family, and friends of course. :3
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 2:02 pm
PeacefulLight I liiiiiiike it. :3 Untitled
Like a fire in winter,
I can be smothered in coldness.
Like a candle in darkness,
I can be covered by darkness.
But remember this:
As a fire warms the winter,
and a candle leads through darkness,
I will always be there to lead the way. Weird poem I know, and I can't think of a sutible title. I really like this one, you an excellent poet. n.n Hm...For some reason I want to call your poem Leading, but y'know I could name anything if I was allowed. xD
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 3:35 pm
I have a few poems.Hope you like them,and if you don't please be kind!
Sakura's Haikus
Rock Lee
At first,you were just
a big,bushy,eyebrow freak.
Really...a weirdo!
But you promised me
that you would take care of me
and die for my love.
Apprechiating
you,I will do from this day.
This I promise you.
Naruto
You are annoying.
always getting in my way;
at least you did then.
Now your my friend
and you'l alwaysl be there for
me when I need you.
I would like to thank
you and let you know that I
will be there for you.
Kakashi
Sensei,you may be
a pervert,but your teachings
are endless to us.
Even if we don't
see the man behind the mask
you are still sensei.
You teachings are wise,
your intentions are the best
and you are as well.
Sasuke
Oh Sasuke,my love.
That midnight black hair and those
eyes that change colour.
You are as beautiful
as they come and I love you
so much it hurts me.
Will you ever love
me as much as I love you?
I dream that you will.
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 5:26 pm
~[Fading Light]~ PeacefulLight I liiiiiiike it. :3 Untitled
Like a fire in winter,
I can be smothered in coldness.
Like a candle in darkness,
I can be covered by darkness.
But remember this:
As a fire warms the winter,
and a candle leads through darkness,
I will always be there to lead the way. Weird poem I know, and I can't think of a sutible title. I really like this one, you an excellent poet. n.n Hm...For some reason I want to call your poem Leading, but y'know I could name anything if I was allowed. xD Hmm.. I think I'll call it that. :3 @Ayumugirl: Nice poems. EDIT: I found a really sweet poem in a book, so I'll put it here. Remember, it's not by me. Butterfly You took my love Gently in your hands Like a butterfly; Then you plucked off One of the wings And laughed as it flopped Upon the ground
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 6:09 pm
Very nice poems. And this thread is a really good idea.
Oh Yeah! Here's one of mine!
Searching
Two separate spirits
Yearning to be completed
As day turns to night.
One hides behind foolish laughter
And hazy fantasies
Standing ever faithful
Searching the horizon.
The other wanders alone
Darkened by desire
An image of deathly beauty
Searching for a purpose.
Both wander far
One in mind, one on Earth
Waiting for their destinies
And searching for one another
Strange it was free verse since I usually have a rhyme scheme.
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 4:58 am
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:44 pm
Here is another one by me. >.< (It sucks.) Blooming
Giving you my heart and soul
My essance, my whole.
Curious about what you'll do.
If you'll love me
Hate me
Toss me in the trash.
I'm still a bud to many,
But you can help me bloom.
With your love, your care
Acting like the water and Sun
I know I truely need, but
If you choose to hate me
I will be no more
Your hate and ignoring me
Will be the furrious winds and hail
That slowly end me. -.- Sad....Too Sad.
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 1:24 pm
*sniffles* It shows a dark side pf all the SasuSakuness... And I can SO see Sakura preforming some of these poems at a club..
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 2:16 pm
PeacefulLight *sniffles* It shows a dark side pf all the SasuSakuness... And I can SO see Sakura preforming some of these poems at a club.. You're absolutly right. T.T I like how a lot of these express Sakura, but what about are little whipped boy, Sasu-Chan? I should go write one from his perspective.
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 5:23 pm
~[Fading Light]~ PeacefulLight *sniffles* It shows a dark side pf all the SasuSakuness... And I can SO see Sakura preforming some of these poems at a club.. You're absolutly right. T.T I like how a lot of these express Sakura, but what about are little whipped boy, Sasu-Chan? I should go write one from his perspective. I've tried and failed. We can UNDERSTAND Sakura's feelings. We don't know if Sasuke would write poetry.. Maybe when he was a kid, but definatily not now.. :/ ....................... Orochimaru: Whatcha doing Sasuke? *peeks over shoulder* Sasuke: *stuffs a paper down his shirt* Nothing. Oro: Hmm... Later that day... Oro: Kabuto! Kaaaaabuuuutoooooooo! Read this writing to me! I've placed me reading glasses somewhere. Kabuto: *quirk* Kay. *reads it aloud* Little Things. By... Sasuke Uchiha? Seeming so little
Things that come by.
But when they do
It's hard to leave them behind.
Regretful that I left
And yet I need to follow my dream.
Please forgive me,
My friends.
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 12:23 pm
O.O I liked it, you could see in Sasuke's eyes before he left that he really didn't want to and that one fits it. 3nodding Untitled
I love you still.
I always will.
I loved you then.
I love you now.
Trusting my heart.
Over my soul.
Crying for you.
Needing of me.
Because I still love you.
I always will.
I loved you then.
I love you now.
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 1:42 pm
Thanks, I think I'll add my poem of Sasuness to my collection of poems.
Hm.. Your poem should be named.. Missing You... Or Everlasting Love! YES! The latter!
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