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 Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 1:32 pm
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 1:43 pm
Hee hee ^^ You better start pumping the story out now young lady. Everyone is getting excited about it now blaugh
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 1:47 pm
kitty-kungfu Awe **pats love on the head**. Lady Tora 4laugh rofl I wanna thank you! My character has changed for the better! She's not so "perfect" any more. *hugs* =^w^= *blushes* Awe ^^ cute little jester. **pokes his side**
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 1:56 pm
kitty-kungfu Hee hee ^^ You better start pumping the story out now young lady. Everyone is getting excited about it now blaugh ^_^ I've got the first chapter done, but I'm probably going to add more. It's pretty short. ^^' (little over three pages)
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 1:57 pm
hallowed love kitty-kungfu Awe **pats love on the head**. Lady Tora 4laugh rofl I wanna thank you! My character has changed for the better! She's not so "perfect" any more. *hugs* =^w^= *blushes*
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 1:57 pm
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 1:58 pm
::EDIT::
>.> Two pages. XD lol...
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 2:02 pm
Oo! You better to get work! **cracks whip** WRITE MORE! scream
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 2:09 pm
kitty-kungfu Oo! You better to get work! **cracks whip** WRITE MORE! scream Yes master! xd LOL!!
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 2:13 pm
o_o You have one my older sister's names there, Annette and the name I thought about naming my first child, Brianna. Too spooky o_o
It flows a little too quickly I think.
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 2:16 pm
kitty-kungfu o_o You have one my older sister's names there, Annette and the name I thought about naming my first child, Brianna. Too spooky o_o It flows a little too quickly I think. ^^;; Yeah... I'll go add more detail and stuff later. I just want to get a "skeleten" of each chapter out before I forget major details I want to add. XD heehee
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 2:17 pm
I was about to say . . . it looks more like an outline more than anything xD. Good writing though.
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 3:09 pm
Ah! Very good plot. And, yes, please, add more! heart
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 3:19 pm
kitty-kungfu I was about to say . . . it looks more like an outline more than anything xD. Good writing though. Foxxy Fox Demon Ah! Very good plot. And, yes, please, add more! heart Thanks, and, I will!
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Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 12:56 pm
Chapter one has been updated and chapter two has been posted. Enjoy! heart
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