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 Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 8:01 pm
"My name is Nathan Thomas."
Nothing spectacular, but it gets right to the point. 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 8:44 pm
Haha, I like some of your starting sentences xD Mine is:
In the dark silence of the alleyway, he made his quick and precise movements.
...Nothing too special ^^ I like the second 'chapter' better.
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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 10:05 am
Mine is all silly and whatnot. xP I like it but you may not. In the gurgling masses there sprang forth an idea—but it couldn’t really be called an idea, for this thing that came was much too vague to be so eloquent and constructed as an idea.
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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 1:59 pm
Quote: With wary care she had run her hand across the tattered cover of the book.
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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 3:40 pm
So Cait is seeing dragons now.
is my first line.
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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 4:39 pm
Oh, there's a dare for the first line? I CAN SO WORK THAT! XD
But, my first line as of right now: 'I know some girls who can spend hour upon hour primping themselves for the first day of school.'
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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 6:28 pm
Mine, courtesy of the same dare. xd
"Where the hell are my pants?"
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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 7:23 pm
My novel is "Welcome to the End" and so far my first sentence is 'I welcome you, the reader, to the beginning of the end'
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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 8:45 pm
Oh well heres mine:
“The disappearances have continued to increase in Colusa, California."
It's part of almost like a news report but it was part of my characters dream. ::nods:: Why is it Colusa, California? I have no clue...I just liked the sound of Colusa...and I live in California so yeah haha XD
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 5:31 am
Mines:
"She floated somewhere between Robert’s consciousness and his dreams."
I wish I was writing a comedy too! emo
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 7:29 am
kagekiha_musoka So far mine is:
"In the March of 3016 a beautiful baby girl was born into the loving arms of well-off parents."
But I'm not sure if I'll change it later on or not.
"I laughed at the over-sized dog as he downed me with his monstrous weight."
And I do like this one a lot better. ^^
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 8:01 am
Quote: My first sentence I wrote was, "Every one has their stage." Last year my entire novel came together around my first sentence, and this year I can't stand my first sentence, or my entire intro at that. Which probably has something to do with the fact that I'm 3000 words behind....I'm thinking or finding a new plot and scrappy everything already. Ahhh! New first sentence: "It all began with an indecisive, insecure, inexperienced twenty-something year old at a college rugby game in Small Town, Connecticut."
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 12:11 pm
ummm. . . .
"Nina hid in the night shadows on the ally wall"
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 2:07 pm
Mine is:
The first rays of the pale golden sun broke reluctantly through the pre-dawn mist.
Nothing special, but it'll do.
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 2:21 pm
Mine is "Don't kill me!"
I'm writing about an assassin...
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