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 Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 8:30 pm
nice.
But it's really, really confusing.
I shoulda mentioned before; the punctuation is a little off. Like, there is a conspicuous absence of semicolons, commas, dashes. Et cetera, et cetera. But that's okay. I really like this story.
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 6:29 pm
KirbyVictorious nice. But it's really, really confusing. I shoulda mentioned before; the punctuation is a little off. Like, there is a conspicuous absence of semicolons, commas, dashes. Et cetera, et cetera. But that's okay. I really like this story. Thanks. I either use way too much punctuation, or not enough. There's no middle ground with me. I'm glad someone is reading and liking it. No one else is commenting it crying .
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:17 am
cause it's flippin' long. And we're all jealous of your huge head start, >.<
Now you comment on mine domokun
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 12:42 pm
KirbyVictorious cause it's flippin' long. And we're all jealous of your huge head start, >.< Now you comment on mine domokun It's only 14,000 words long... I'm really behind actually. My huge head start... whee I thought I did comment, and if I didn't, then I will.
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 1:40 pm
well guess what: you have twice as much as I do.
not kidding.
And I have writer's block...*whine*
But it doesn't matter.
And silly, I keep updating it...more to read heart
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 3:28 pm
KirbyVictorious well guess what: you have twice as much as I do. not kidding. And I have writer's block...*whine* But it doesn't matter. And silly, I keep updating it...more to read heart Your widget says you have 2k more words than me... how does that work out if I have twice as much as you? *es muy confused* But, I don't check this subforum but about once a day.
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:19 pm
I don't get widgets. *sigh*
word count: 8326.
gonna be about 9000 if I get my way to-night. But first, this effing project *mutters*
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:33 pm
KirbyVictorious I don't get widgets. *sigh* word count: 8326. gonna be about 9000 if I get my way to-night. But first, this effing project *mutters* That's crazy. I'm at 14.5 and I would love to hit 15k tonight... Maybe I'll get lucky and pull something outta my butt and finish everything I've got to get done. I want to have this chapter done tonight.
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:57 pm
wellll...this is one thing you and I must agree to disagree on.
I write because I am absolutely, wholly, totally in love with my characters, my storyline, my every intimate detail. I don't care if I have 20,000 words if they're all senseless crap. If I don't do this Kirby style, it won't work.
You know, something interesting about your story is that it's all together and organized...that's your style. My style is acting like I was there, like I'm watching the movie...like I care about it. In tuuune~
Thank you, paradisiticism.
/Kirby's weird sensible stage. Where am I???
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 8:15 pm
KirbyVictorious wellll...this is one thing you and I must agree to disagree on. I write because I am absolutely, wholly, totally in love with my characters, my storyline, my every intimate detail. I don't care if I have 20,000 words if they're all senseless crap. If I don't do this Kirby style, it won't work. You know, something interesting about your story is that it's all together and organized...that's your style. My style is acting like I was there, like I'm watching the movie...like I care about it. In tuuune~ Thank you, paradisiticism. /Kirby's weird sensible stage. Where am I??? As it turns out, most of the things I do I attempt to be as professional as possible. My story is told as if I was the main character because it's one of my many secret wishes, combining my love for the norse mythos and heroic adventures. I've always wished that I could be the hero, and writing my novel this is my chance. My character thus has certain characteristics that I have, and the story is one that if you knew me in real life, you'd understand it completely. I'm into the darker, more morbid things in life, and my story reflects that. I'm only worried about word count so that I can get this finished, I've never attempted anything longer than maybe 2k words. It means the world to me if I could finish this, and maybe seek employment as a full time writer. Maybe I take my professionalism a bit too seriously, but hopefully one day it'll let me take over the world... as a writer.
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 8:41 pm
it's funny and klind of sad...what used to make a great writer was the story, not the organization...that was for editors to do.
I'm screwed. But I still don't give up...issuuuuuuues~that I mus take care of before college...
doesn't everyone wish they could be the hero of their story? Well, nto everyone. Some people just like to have an innocent victim to torture when they're mad, and that's fine, too. But I see your point...I AM my characters--quite literally. your hero has to be like you, or else your story is cold and impersonal.
By the way, where's chapter.........(doesn't know Roman numerals)
imma slutty gunner midget hooker...woopee...*dances*
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Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 12:45 pm
I need to do chapter VIII but my ex girlfriend overdosed last night and I was too worried about her to work on anything else... Now my head is throbbing, I haven't slept for more than 4 hours in the past 3 days, and I have to clean house...
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Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 2:24 pm
At the risk of being rude, your girlfriend has no sense.
I speak my mind. Too bad my mind hates me...
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Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 3:23 pm
Ex girlfriend, and I completely agree that it was a senseless thing to do. But I've taken a short nap, gotten my prescription medicine, and I'm ready to take on Chapter VIII and IX tonight. Hopefully.
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Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 3:39 pm
oh, missed the ex...
good for you.
and I am on a roll with chapter five...woot! It's not boring, so it should go much much faster. And I'm a fifth of the way done with my nano.
But of course, only abuot a twentieth done with my novella. >.< Thisis gonna be fun...
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