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hehehe.

Poetry is sometimes steriotyped as emo.

mine could pass for it.

But it really isn't.

I'm too fluffy and pink to be emo.

NBut there IS an emo Kirby in SSBm.....O.o

Not really. Your poem follows the timeline I posted, and as to what you added... well you added a poetic perspective obviously, you wrote it as if you were fighting the communists, or part of the White army. As for what else... well I'm lost there, maybe you could clear that up for me and I can try and take it from a new angle?

You are being too fixated on Russia. And although I have now had three people point out that I am talking about Bush in there... I'm not. Until someone mentioned it I didn't even notice that.

First Authority and still around
Survive the strong, law of fist,
Eat the dead, you get the gist
When we still lived beneath the ground.
Today hid from them that is stronger
For fear of death from the war monger
No hold stronger for those fear bound.


This is speaking of something that existed everywhere at one point in the distant past, and now exists in pockets. The war monger IS actually a reference to America, but it COULD have been a reference to Great Britain at the height of it's powers, and CAN refer to China once China is once again the World SuperPower. It has nothing to do with Communism.

Democracy is one of the D's... someone mentioned it... but it's not the D we've shunned as it is still very much in use all across the world to different extents (yes, including not at all but still).

Let's see where you take that... try to think broader than just Russia. As much as I love my Northern Neighbor, I don't know nearly enough to write about it in a pem like this.

Before Religion... before we even discovered fire... the thing in that stanza that I'm talking about exsisted.


As a further hint, that stanza is only referring to ONE thing. And it is one of the keys... not one of the D's

life?

No... Not slavery.