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 Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2006 8:18 am
.... gonna try and find something.. then post it
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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 12:35 pm
yay! i found htat pic i had lost, and now it's outdates because i changed one thing about Serina
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 7:36 pm
*excited* i just got my banner from Rebelli0n! <3 it's amazingly beautiful! <3 <3 <3
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 2:59 pm
changed my male design to a completely different female design that i'm starting to favor over everything o3o
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Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 6:31 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 9:25 am
You told me to critique, so I am. <3 This is meant as constructive criticism only, you haven’t got to actually pay attention to anything I’m about to say.
First off, you have numerous spelling and grammar mistakes. I suggest running your concepts through a spelling and grammar check. There are a lot of free ones here on the net, just go to any search engine and type in ‘spell checker’ or something like that.
Secondly, I’m not sure if you’re planning to do this or not so ignore this if you are, but you need to put something of their personalities up. All you have so far is how they look, which is nice and all, but I want to know what they’re going to be like! After all, image is definitely second to personality. Put their likes, dislikes, history, and information about the guardian, too, if you want.
Speaking of image, I think Serina’s look is fine, she sounds adorable. <3 However, I do have one quirk with Juli’s image…is her tattoo natural, or will she get it when she’s older? Because there is honestly no reason why the spirit of a Maine coon should be born with a tattoo, much less one that’s green and shaped like a heart.
Perhaps it would also be good to post some thoughts of what their abilities will be? That’s not absolutely necessary, of course, but it would be interesting to see what kind of ideas you have for them. <3
Um, that’s about it, I guess, but the picture of the wild dogs stretches the page and it’s just annoying. But I can deal. XD
Again, this is mostly just my personal opinion and you haven't got to change anything if you don't want, but you did ask. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 9:46 am
thanks wotcher, i usually don't put personality because i like to play it out as i go, but now that i htink about it, it might be better if i went ahead and gave them personalities, as for the tattoo, yes she would get it when she was older, but i had to include it, otherwise i'd forget :B
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 9:52 am
Oh, okay, that's great about the tattoo.
I understand the developing the personality thing. But it's always good to at least come up with a base personality. It could even be one sentence, just something for you to plan on. But like you said, you don't need to say every single aspect of their personality, because some of it will of course develop over roleplay. 8D
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 9:58 am
yes, i've added some stuff on personality and likes/dislikes, and all the pics in one section are now gone since they had no relevance anymore
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 3:25 pm
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Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 1:21 pm
Aw, why did you take away Serina? I liked her. D:
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Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 7:09 pm
cause she wasn't exactly me-ish ,i mostly thought of her for the colors.. if you want her you can have her <3
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Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 4:01 am
Ah, I understand. Then I guess it's good you went with a new concept. Heh, no thank you. I'll stick with my video game spirit. <3
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Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 11:50 am
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 12:02 pm
i'm horrible gonk *swears he won't switch concepts again* xp
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