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Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 6:48 am
((Thank you guys so much for your crits! I'm hoping to get a few more now that I changed the story of Sin Ting's past life. ))
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 8:01 pm
Okay. I'm sorry I took so long to get this posted. I had to re-read the quest several times. I loved everything, very descriptive and very informative. I'm not really 100% on the complete details of how to make a Fa'e perfect so I am just going to ask the only question that came to mind.
Would it make a difference to just have him be androgynous instead of a hermphrodite?
It seemed like he was worshipped for a very short time as a female even though his body changed his mind didn't and he never produced off-spring so it seems to me you could just make him fully male or androgynous.
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