I'm afraid I can't stamp this just yet.

You still have more work to do before this can be considered more than half-done. Please provide more details on the guardian, the region of Japan she grew up in as well as her life so far growing up. Also, please strongly consider redoing your profile sections and the like, so that it's in paragraphs of prose, not the awkward and short Question/Answer format.

You seem a little determined to make your character beautiful and ensure that everyone else thinks she's beautiful. Realistically, there aren't many people who meet someone else for the first time and only think "oh, she's beautiful" - they're far more likely to have an opinion on her personality or her actions. Don't worry, Anya's art makes all the fa'e beautiful - just be aware that in a community of beautiful people, your fa'e is going to be normal/average.

More importantly, more info on how and why Yuki-Onna died. Especially if she lived in the mountains, villages there are still few and far between, since it's hard to cover the entire mountain-side.


Good work so far, though. It's a good start, you just still have a lot more work to do.