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[Judeo/Christian - Tzohar] Shai Adi ~ by Aki Goto Page: [] [<] 1 2 3 4 [>] [»|]

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Aki Ana

PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 5:31 pm


I think that's it for now! Whew. <3 If anyone would like to post, comment, or critique, you're welcome to! Please read the Notes section before crits, thanks!  
PostPosted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 12:22 am


I should have left myself another post.... heart

Aki Ana


Aki Ana

PostPosted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 12:55 pm


Even though it isn't imperative to his character, I've always imagined the binds leading to the shards to be somewhat flexible. This is mainly to allow more artistic freedom, rather than always having them raised in a perfectly fanned collar. Shai could allow them to relax, and hang straight down....or sweep to the side. Again, not an important detail, but good for 'flavor text.' They certainly wouldn't be able to be independantly controlled, or wrap around things, or anything like that!
PostPosted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 11:32 pm


More info added.

Aki Ana


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PostPosted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 11:51 pm


The whole neck/shard thing is really cool, and the personality is really different from anything i've seen. Subservient. Cool.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 12:20 am


I appreciate the comments!

Aki Ana


Aki Ana

PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 10:12 am


Sections I may still need to work on:

Guardian info should be somewhere
World/history after rebirth needs fleshed out
A 'what if' section, what if one of the shards is damaged/removed, etc....
PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 10:19 am


Biblicly, males are not to have long hair. I don't know the way you will want to take this, but I thought it might be a bit more important that the culture at the time. This is because, it seems to me, that the stone was contious of events and would have learned that. I don't know if you have something to counter that. At the moment I have only taken a short look at your concept, and don't want to forget to post this latter, so I'm posting it now.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 10:34 am


Rogue Dragon
Biblicly, males are not to have long hair. I don't know the way you will want to take this, but I thought it might be a bit more important that the culture at the time. This is because, it seems to me, that the stone was contious of events and would have learned that. I don't know if you have something to counter that. At the moment I have only taken a short look at your concept, and don't want to forget to post this latter, so I'm posting it now.





.... Jesus?

Edit: I am not learned in the ways of the bible, this is a guess.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 11:11 am


Thanks for the critique! I do have some thoughts on this subject. My first thought, however, is that many people concerned with this point today use it mainly as a justification for absolute gender differentiation, in retaliation against homosexuality....so it's not a point I'm overly concerned about to begin with!

Also, I understand that while our current visual representation of Jesus is more tradition than truth (I also do not believe Jesus had such pale skin!) Jesus was a special case. There are provisions for the Nazarenes (forgive typos, this isn't my field XD) and others of holy orders in associated cultures, allowing for long hair...however, his hair is not to be considered 'long' by many definitions! In fact, just below the shoulders is considered trimmed, and was an acceptable length.

Many orthidox and clergy from the various associated religious were indeed allowed to wear long hair, as it was considered a connection with god. Also, The Tzohar is said to originate with the first steps of the first man...and I doubt he is susceptible to fads or rule changes. So, in short, I believe his residual self image and socio-theological placement earn him whatever interpretation the artist wishes to give...and the compromise with traditional values will dictate that his hair is not to be drawn much longer than below the shoulders, as pictured in my art post! Down to the mid back, commonly viewed as the length for women's hair, is too long for his character concept.

For more information, these links are available!

http://www.holyspiritinteractive.net/questions/didjesushavelonghair.asp
http://www.elite.net/~ebedyah/PastorsSite/otherareas/longhair.htm

Thanks very much for the insightful comment Rogue, and thanks for your comparison comment Kochi!

[Also, please note, due to the nature of the myth base of this quest, no extended discussions will be taking place. All comments are welcome, but in depth exploration need not occur for everyone's comfort!]

Aki Ana


Aki Ana

PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 11:14 am


heart
PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 11:55 am


*chews on Aki with lurv* heart

Britain


Aki Ana

PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 12:15 pm


heart ! Thanks for stopping in~ <3
PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 12:19 pm


heart I shall read over and comment.

o__O And g'damn at the indepth reply to the hair thing. *golf clap* heart Learn something new EVERYDAY.

Ogre


Aki Ana

PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 12:29 pm


Ogre
heart I shall read over and comment.

o__O And g'damn at the indepth reply to the hair thing. *golf clap* heart Learn something new EVERYDAY.


*kerbow* I could have just pointed to my disclaimer that says 'inspired by' but I'm always happy to chat. XD I appreciate any feedback!

By the way, I loved your theory of physical transformation for the reborn image of Judas. Good take! <3
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