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 Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 10:52 pm
Most bad guys do believe that what they do is the right thing, and I've tried to incorporate that into the story. I've already started work on the next chapter, which will outline the Zora's being stupid. Ganondorf give unexpected commentary about the whole thing. Its good s**t.
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 8:57 pm
Betman Most bad guys do believe that what they do is the right thing, and I've tried to incorporate that into the story. I've already started work on the next chapter, which will outline the Zora's being stupid. Ganondorf give unexpected commentary about the whole thing. Its good s**t. yeah, but you did a good job of making it sound real. There's a lot of times where I've seen this, and they only manage to make the bad guy sound whiny, or just OOC in general and don't stick with what actually happened.
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 9:09 pm
Thank yah, thank yah. I'm just wishing we could get some other people in here, eh? xd Especially with the shameless plug in my sig.
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 9:29 pm
xd yeah, I did notice that. Give 'em time though. Most of the (active) cult isn't online right now.
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 9:37 pm
Ah well, we can wait for 'em to come now that i'm near the top of the list! COME READ, PEOPLE! DX
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Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 5:48 am
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 11:50 am
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Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 11:54 am
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Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 6:22 pm
Thanks, guys. If you guys have criticism, let me know. I'm really looking for ways to improve.
Chapter two with the zoras will hopefully be up tonight.
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Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 10:09 pm
Nice chapter, but I couldn't give you any critism. I am bad at writing stories.
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 12:12 pm
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 2:29 pm
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 4:00 pm
Thanks, Seaphron. Now we just have to get more loyal readers. >_>
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 4:03 pm
No prob, you can count on me to be a loyal reader I love reading different stories and yours is great as are everyone elses!
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 7:11 pm
xd heh. I love how he has so much faith in the thought that NO ONE ELSE will come to save her.
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