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 Posted: Tue Sep 26, 2006 5:08 pm
Scathach13 B.N.A.P.Hime eek O M G. *is at a loss for words* That is so awesome! You have to post this...soon. I love it so much, I keep reading the samples over and over again, I almost have them memorized! Must...have...more. *twitchtwitch* Why are you still online? You have to write more! Go, ima! Write more! Hayaku! These samples are killing me... xp I am, I just have to keep pausing so as not to overload the yaoi-writting part of my brain, and... ...ooooh shiiiiit. Does this break a guild rule...? O_O These samples, I mean? Oh, I hope not. sad Well, you didn't go into major explicit detail, and they're just making out, so...it should be fine...maybe you should put a warning in your forum title, just to be safe. 3nodding Oh, and I was wondering if you had a title for your masterpiece yet?
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Posted: Tue Sep 26, 2006 6:34 pm
*shakes head*
Nope - I've been muling the idea over for about a week or so, and just started writting it two days ago, maybe less... So I haven't actually thought of a title yet. But it's there somewhere in the back of my mind. I'm just waiting for it to show up.
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Posted: Tue Sep 26, 2006 7:38 pm
I see. Well, I wish you the best of luck and I can't wait til you publish it. 3nodding I'm very excited.
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Posted: Tue Sep 26, 2006 7:45 pm
Scathach13 This is actually my first real attempt to write from Riku's perspective. In fact, this is my first none-rp, fully solo fanfiction that I've written of this... genre... heheh... And I'm really glad that everyone likes it so much - I've been practicing for this for ages. Also, I thought to myself - the older Sora... with the younger Riku? ...And then I paused. And then, I began to laugh psychotically. Yes it's a very unique idea. You're really creative, and a damn good writer. 3nodding I'm so jealous. sad
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Posted: Tue Sep 26, 2006 7:50 pm
B.N.A.P.Hime Scathach13 This is actually my first real attempt to write from Riku's perspective. In fact, this is my first none-rp, fully solo fanfiction that I've written of this... genre... heheh... And I'm really glad that everyone likes it so much - I've been practicing for this for ages. Also, I thought to myself - the older Sora... with the younger Riku? ...And then I paused. And then, I began to laugh psychotically. Yes it's a very unique idea. You're really creative, and a damn good writer. 3nodding I'm so jealous. sad ...I've been training myself for the past few years to get to this level. It isn't a natural talent; I got this far through work. It wasn't handed to me on a silver platter, like some lucky people. If you're willing to work hard, and you're really passionate about improving, then chances are that you have a very good chance of doing so. The creativity itself is both a blessing and a curse... ...Like how the other day in mathclass I ended up with a massive metaphysical nosebleed because I randomly thought of my girlfriend as cosplaying as Kuja. Hard to say if that was the former or the latter... rofl
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Posted: Tue Sep 26, 2006 9:15 pm
Darn I wanted to draw a smexy scene...*puffs cheeks*
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 3:33 pm
The "smexy scenes" don't start till at least chapter... something. Pretty far on in. There's a whole lot of angsting and confusion to get through first. But do you think you could draw that scene I just posted? Sora (in his standard KH2 outfit) is essentially pinning Riku (KH1) against the wall of the shed, while standing on the beach - or at least, I think so.. I haven't decided fully yet...
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 7:48 pm
Scathach13 The "smexy scenes" don't start till at least chapter... something. Pretty far on in. There's a whole lot of angsting and confusion to get through first. But do you think you could draw that scene I just posted? Sora (in his standard KH2 outfit) is essentially pinning Riku (KH1) against the wall of the shed, while standing on the beach - or at least, I think so.. I haven't decided fully yet... Ok so, the basic plot line is: *whited out because of potential spoilers* at the end of KH2, when Riku and Sora go through 'the door to light', instead of Sora going home with Riku to Kairi and everyone else, him and Riku get separated and he goes home, but before everything happened? Is that right?
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 8:17 pm
B.N.A.P.Hime Scathach13 The "smexy scenes" don't start till at least chapter... something. Pretty far on in. There's a whole lot of angsting and confusion to get through first. But do you think you could draw that scene I just posted? Sora (in his standard KH2 outfit) is essentially pinning Riku (KH1) against the wall of the shed, while standing on the beach - or at least, I think so.. I haven't decided fully yet... Ok so, the basic plot line is: *whited out because of potential spoilers* at the end of KH2, when Riku and Sora go through 'the door to light', instead of Sora going home with Riku to Kairi and everyone else, him and Riku get separated and he goes home, but before everything happened? Is that right? *nods* That's completely right - but see, the thing is, I haven't quite decided what to do about Riku yet... One possibility is that there'll be a companion story (rather unlikely), or more likely, some chapters that flash to his pov. Hard to say.
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 8:36 pm
Yet another sample! This one from an ENTIRLY DIFFERENT (and earlier) part of the story. Please note that it is entirely unedited - not even spellchecked.
You may notice I wrote it a little differently - that would be because it's from Sora's perspective, instead of third person or Riku's. So it might seem a tad less... "sophisticated"... rolleyes
When Sora opened his eyes, the only thing he was was blackness. Everywhere. Looking down, he was able to see himself... which didn't make a whole lot of sense considering the complete lack of light, but whatever. He'd seen wierder things. He also seemed to be hovering... which was also odd. But then again, that's dark voids for you. He sighed, folding his arms across his chest and pouting slightly.
"Aw crap. I'm dead, aren't I...? Man, when they say 'don't go towards the light' I guess they mean it..."
He glared at nothing in particular, waiting for some random omni-potent voice to speak up or something.
...Several minutes later, it became apparent that no such thing was going to occur.
He let out a curse, crossing his legs and 'sitting' in the... air... or whatever it was, hitting his forehead with the heel of his wrist. Then glaring, he looked up. Nothing. Still. He took a deep breath, uncurled himself, and then...
"HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CAN ANYBODY HERE ME????? HEEEY!!!!!!!!"
His voice didn't even echo. In fact, it sounded almost muted, as if the sound died the minute it left his mouth... No answer. He seemed to wilt at the lack of a responce, looking down, bangs covering his eyes.
This... really, really sucks.
He felt like crying. If he was dead, then Riku should at least be here too, right? He walked through the light as well-- unless of course, he ended up drownding and it wasn't the light that did him in at all... He frowned, remembering seeing what looked like Riku swiming towards him right before he had lost consiouness... And sense Riku was able to do that, then chances were that he was alive. He curled up into a ball, wrapping his arms around his legs, resting his head on his knees.
"I hope Riku's okay..."
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 10:30 pm
Oh! I loved it! You're right, it was different than the other parts you wrote, but I loved the witty, sarcastic humor to it. 3nodding I can't wait til you post this! Oh, and I have an idea for Riku. What if you had him trying to find a way to get Sora back into his own time? (I have no idea how, but I'll let you worry about that wink ) Like, you could flash back and forth from Sora and Riku, and carry on their story lines, and then somehow towards the end, have them intertwine together. You know what I'm saying? It's hard to explain...but it's your story, so you do what you want with it. You're doing great so far! heart
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 10:55 am
B.N.A.P.Hime Oh! I loved it! You're right, it was different than the other parts you wrote, but I loved the witty, sarcastic humor to it. 3nodding I can't wait til you post this! Oh, and I have an idea for Riku. What if you had him trying to find a way to get Sora back into his own time? (I have no idea how, but I'll let you worry about that wink ) Like, you could flash back and forth from Sora and Riku, and carry on their story lines, and then somehow towards the end, have them intertwine together. You know what I'm saying? It's hard to explain...but it's your story, so you do what you want with it. You're doing great so far! heart That's just about it. *nods* You got it. ^^ Still, Sora's... well, what's going on with him, will probably take up at LEAST two thirds of the story. It's kinda funny... I've never written in Riku's POV before, yet a large part of it is written in it... The past one, I mean? So I'm not totally sure if I'm doing it right or not... confused
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 3:17 pm
Scathach13 B.N.A.P.Hime Oh! I loved it! You're right, it was different than the other parts you wrote, but I loved the witty, sarcastic humor to it. 3nodding I can't wait til you post this! Oh, and I have an idea for Riku. What if you had him trying to find a way to get Sora back into his own time? (I have no idea how, but I'll let you worry about that wink ) Like, you could flash back and forth from Sora and Riku, and carry on their story lines, and then somehow towards the end, have them intertwine together. You know what I'm saying? It's hard to explain...but it's your story, so you do what you want with it. You're doing great so far! heart That's just about it. *nods* You got it. ^^ Still, Sora's... well, what's going on with him, will probably take up at LEAST two thirds of the story. It's kinda funny... I've never written in Riku's POV before, yet a large part of it is written in it... The past one, I mean? So I'm not totally sure if I'm doing it right or not... confused Don't worry so much! I'm sure it'll be great! 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 4:57 pm
B.N.A.P.Hime Scathach13 B.N.A.P.Hime Oh! I loved it! You're right, it was different than the other parts you wrote, but I loved the witty, sarcastic humor to it. 3nodding I can't wait til you post this! Oh, and I have an idea for Riku. What if you had him trying to find a way to get Sora back into his own time? (I have no idea how, but I'll let you worry about that wink ) Like, you could flash back and forth from Sora and Riku, and carry on their story lines, and then somehow towards the end, have them intertwine together. You know what I'm saying? It's hard to explain...but it's your story, so you do what you want with it. You're doing great so far! heart That's just about it. *nods* You got it. ^^ Still, Sora's... well, what's going on with him, will probably take up at LEAST two thirds of the story. It's kinda funny... I've never written in Riku's POV before, yet a large part of it is written in it... The past one, I mean? So I'm not totally sure if I'm doing it right or not... confused Don't worry so much! I'm sure it'll be great! 3nodding One thing that I'm looking forward too - Riku going and asking Sora!2 for a sparring match, having NO IDEA... just HOW BADLY... he would lose... And then Sora!2 acts all embarrised and says no... And Riku keeps pressuring him... So he tries to go easy on him, but isn't willing to be bad on purpose, and... Riku has a hissy fit when he loses in about under a minute. Said minute contains Sora mostly blocking and doging with an awkward, embarrissed smile on his face.
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 5:17 pm
Scathach13 B.N.A.P.Hime Scathach13 B.N.A.P.Hime Oh! I loved it! You're right, it was different than the other parts you wrote, but I loved the witty, sarcastic humor to it. 3nodding I can't wait til you post this! Oh, and I have an idea for Riku. What if you had him trying to find a way to get Sora back into his own time? (I have no idea how, but I'll let you worry about that wink ) Like, you could flash back and forth from Sora and Riku, and carry on their story lines, and then somehow towards the end, have them intertwine together. You know what I'm saying? It's hard to explain...but it's your story, so you do what you want with it. You're doing great so far! heart That's just about it. *nods* You got it. ^^ Still, Sora's... well, what's going on with him, will probably take up at LEAST two thirds of the story. It's kinda funny... I've never written in Riku's POV before, yet a large part of it is written in it... The past one, I mean? So I'm not totally sure if I'm doing it right or not... confused Don't worry so much! I'm sure it'll be great! 3nodding One thing that I'm looking forward too - Riku going and asking Sora!2 for a sparring match, having NO IDEA... just HOW BADLY... he would lose... And then Sora!2 acts all embarrised and says no... And Riku keeps pressuring him... So he tries to go easy on him, but isn't willing to be bad on purpose, and... Riku has a hissy fit when he loses in about under a minute. Said minute contains Sora mostly blocking and doging with an awkward, embarrissed smile on his face. That's gonna be great! I'd love to read that, cuz I just started a new game on expert mode, and you know how you can spare Tidus, Wakka, Selphie and Riku in the beginning? Well, I can beat everyone except for Riku! stressed So, reading that will be sweet revenge. xd
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