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KuraiGekkou

PostPosted: Sat May 28, 2005 9:13 pm


Violet was moved by Sakura's battle and felt half guilty having to watch through the battle, and put her through it.

"Sa--Sakura?!" He cleared his throat before continuing. "We are dreadfully sorry you had to face such an opponent. as we understood Asura labs seem to be testing out some new Biological weapons. or so i was told.. They seem pretty secretive about this. However we only could judge the first and last part of battle. The Steam made your battle quite difficult to rate and so. Your nerve during the battle was just amazing however. You seem to have had a plan for every move. Just like a true fighter Sakura i congratulate you in impressing me with one of the most best battles i have ever seen!" Violet quickly shut off the Mic before turning his chair around and held his head in dissapointment. "is the gurl ok?" He asked two men standing next to the exit of the room. "Go check on her..."

"Sakura," Pepper took a long pause before continuing. "That ending move was amazing. You really got rid of the opponent. I understand you keep beads with elements trapped inside them? thats what you used right? I love it! Faeries are just absoultly amazing! You studied various martial arts too right? Well that was very evident with your stragedizing attacks and such! nicely done Sakura!"

((Rachel rachel.. Ugg. I really tried.. To find flaws in your post. But your character style was just amazingly in touch. You even saved oxygen during battle! haha that is so not Kurai with his randomn Yelling. You realy had to put Wushu in the post huh? thats awsome too! Releating real-life situations within your Posts of your RP character! now that is just beyond amazing XP. mm i sound like a suck-up. Lets see flaws.. some of the sentances was rather confusing. When Sakura-bot attacked your ankle. that took some time to get. But rather then that. I see no reason why you should not recieve this rating...

8/8
PostPosted: Sat May 28, 2005 9:22 pm


Ying-hua watched the next participant, but as the fight progressed, a scowl appeared on her face. It seemed that Mint had let the claw fight her fight. Regardless of who or what fought, the panda was defeated making Mint the official winner.

"Mint! You need to maintain control of that robotic arm. I was very disappointed to learn that it was not you that defeated the panda, but your claw instead. However, I understand that the claw is still technically yours and therefore making you the official winner."

((ooc~grammer mistakes, spelling mistakes, not a big fan of putting ooc in the middle of rps (but to each their own), nice description of battle between hikari and mint))

6/8

SaKuRaBaBy


Shirou Setari

PostPosted: Sat May 28, 2005 9:32 pm


, Sakura

"You are cute and smart. I doubt that many people could handle battling a replica of themselves, but you handled it quite nicely. I'm sure you were nervous, but you certainly didn't show any nerviosity. Quite and explosive battle and I still haven't quite figured out what happened during that mist, but I'm sorry you were injured. However, I would like to congratulate you on the completion of your test."

Instructor Sugawa

[ooc - there were a couple spelling mistakes and you tend towards monotonous repetition on a few occassions. On the other hand, I was captivated by the action and tension of the scene. It was pretty frikkin good Missy!! Way to go!!]

7/8!! and..and...wangwang!!
PostPosted: Sat May 28, 2005 9:33 pm


"It's nice to see you too," Aili greeted. She had her eyes fixed on the current contestant. She walked towards her seat and sat down, watching the contestant's movements. Movements as in presperation, eye movement, twitching, everything added up in her mind for the final score. Tactics and speed, stealth... this test would rank the student and had to be precise.

Aili's eyes were glued to the testing ring, noting any changes in spiritual pressure of the contestant.

LadyLight
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SaKuRaBaBy

PostPosted: Sat May 28, 2005 9:34 pm


Ying-Hua covered her mouth as she laughed silently behind her hand. Her eyes sparkled with amusement as she watched the fight.

"Kurai, it's always good to keep a fiery attitude during a fight, and you demonstrated exactly that. I'm guessing that necklace of yours is a good luck charm. Well, congratulations!"

((ooc ~ grammer & spelling mistakes, kept in charry v nicely, funniness, uh...okies...sleepy...))

7/8
PostPosted: Sat May 28, 2005 10:02 pm


((sorry for the late posts))

Aili got up from her seat to assist Setari. The venom his opponent had given him was a poison Aili was familiar with. Aili exited the room and found Setari laying down on a medical bed with the medic team drawing out poison and providing the antidote.

"Status?" Aili asked one of the nurses.

"The poison's been removed thanks to your antidote. He should be falling alseep soon. Shouldn't you be judging the other contestants?"

Aili nodded, "Thanks, keep me posted will you?" She took one last look at Setari before heading back to her seat to write her comments for him.

Quote:
Setari,
You displayed excellent observational skills. You have potential to excel in analytical situations. The power in your fighting skills demonstrated your strength in physical combat. I commend you on your sucess.

-Examiner Aili
P.S. I suggest you eat a meal with lots of vitamins. The antidote will drain your vitamin reserves. Contact me if any defiencies occur, I am still improving the antidote that has been given to you.



((Great job Setari. No powerplaying, a bit of grammatical and spelling mistakes, but I make them too. It's what spellcheck is for XP there's no spellcheck so you're excused. Nice length and spacing. And even though I'm not suppose to give scores of 7 or 8, I give you an

8/8 ))

LadyLight
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Rene the Hopeless

PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 1:03 pm


((Kurai asked me to grade some tests. I will rp as Renim.))

"Hahaha." The recorded antics of Kurai Gekkou tickled Renim in a demonic style. She was not one to laugh at such idiotic clumsiness but it was the stupidity of Kurai that somehow gave her joy. Renim smiled with one of her evil grins and folded her hands beneath her chin.
"You are an interesting character Kurai Gekkou. Obviously, you still lack much in your fighting skills. However, the fact that you managed to stay alive with that hot head of yours amuses me."

((You need to learn when to capitalize! Like at the beginning of a sentence. Also you're spelling is a little off but it seems more an issue of your typing skills than knowing how words are spelled. You showed Kurai's attitude and the fact that you used his type of speech in the post is good. 7/ cool )
7/8

****

Renim mechanically scanned through slow-motion recordings. Her robotic mind's eye replayed and rewind assorted moments of the student Sakura's battle. Finally, the last picture drifted away and Renim's dark eyes returned to focus.

"Amazing stealth and thinking on your feet. My only suggestion is to add more of your own style."

((8/8, great post!! Amazing moves and you brought out Sakura's emotions well. The grammar was great and I honestly didn't notice the spelling errors. They weren't wrong enough to notice.))

8/8
PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 1:21 pm


Aili cleared her throat after Sakura's examination. Her rivals had created such beings.... even though doppelgangers did exist, Aili found such creations disgusting.

"Sakura, I applaud you on your excellent performance just now. Very efficient moves and quick decisions. Courage was displayed when you attacked your look alike."

((^-^ I like your writing. You should do fics. Well organized and I didn't catch any mistakes. 8/8 ))

LadyLight
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Aldora_Kou

PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 2:00 pm


Aldora couldn't help but smirk when she was told to enter the testing area. She was in her street gear, comfortable black pants and a light pink summer top. Her hair was in its usually style, straight down and then curving outwards.

'hehe Aili-neesan probably thinks I'm still at the hospital...' Aldora grinned when she entered the metal dome. 'The teachers must be behind those mirrors.

The monotone voice from the speaker announced "Kou, Aldora. Commence examination," as the door opposite the girl opened.

Aldora waited patiently, eyes narrowing, as she tried to locate her opponent. Aldora barely blocked a punch, the sudden increasing air pressure towards her left cheek was the only warning she recieved. Aldora jumped backwards, trying to keep her distance from the invisible opponent.

'Illusions? Invisibility spell?' Aldora's eyes lost thier normal cheer as she scanned the dome for her enemy. Aldora, unable to see or hear her opponent, went down on one knee and huddled forward with her eyes closed.

'When your sense fail you, search for a spiritual prescence. Every thing has an energy signature, living or unliving. That's what neesan said.'

"From below!" Aldora gasped, jumping upwards and away as the floor pieces below her exploded. Aldora made a pulling gesture and shadows swarmed up from the hole, moving quickly to her hands, covering the area like a sheet of darkness. Twisting her hands, the shadows engulfed the area covered and shrank until all was left was an outline of a body.

"Gotcha!" Aldora threw a kick to the head, but missed as the body rolled away. "Wah?!"

The now outlined figure in Aldora's eyes pulled out a blade. To others, Aldora was fighting air. "I see you and now to end this!" Aldora leapt towards the figure and slashed with her own blade. Aldora planted a well packed punch into the solar plexus of the figure and winced slightly as her knuckles bled. Aldora pushed her opponent towards the edge of the room with kicks and slashed.

"You're not human are you?" Aldora's kodachi had made contact with the presumed "skin" of opponent, but the feel was different from cutting real flesh. "This just makes things more interesting," a grin found its way to Aldora's face and she picked up the pace of her attacks. The invisible opponent was now on defence but blocking Aldora's blow pretty well.

Sweat flew from Aldora and her short hair swung around, ladened with perspiration. Aldora was tiring and decided she had to end this soon. 'I still have to work on my endurance. Maybe I should've eaten more beforehand.'

Aldora feinted a high blow and the opponent fell for it. As the opponent attempted to block it, Aldora drove her kodachi through the figure and pulled upwards, efficiently immobilizing her invisible enemy.

Aldora jumped backwards incase the thing might still be alive, but it remained motionless.

"This concludes the test for Kou, Aldora."

Aldora let out a deep sigh of relief and wiped off sweat from her forehead with the back of her hand. She took once last glance at her opponent and waved to the mirrors before heading towards the exit.
PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 3:24 pm


((I guess we are making it 4 people is enough to get stars.. now lets see..))

Mike
Kurai&Mint: 7/8
Sakura: 7/8
Aili: 8/8
Joy: 8/8
Final: 7.5=8

Mint
Setari: 6/8
Sakura: 6/8
Joy: 7/8

Kurai:
Setari: 7/8
Sakura: 7/8
Rene: 7/8
Joy: 7/8
Final: 7/8 (oh joy..)

Sakura:
Kurai&Mint: 8/8
Setari: 7/8
Rene: 8/8
Aili: 8/8
Joy: 8/8
Final: 7.8 = 8

Aldora
Joy: 6/8
Kurai&Mint: 7/8

Poppy
Kurai&Mint: 5/8
Sakura: 3/8
Setari: 4/8

KuraiGekkou


HiddenJoy

PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 3:45 pm


(( My teacher form is Kiky))

Kiky watched from her dorm,she had installed advanced videocameras inside the figthing ring able to pinpoint many different angles of view for Kiky,the red goggles she wore reflected the computers light. All of the testings were amusing, She was amazed by Sakura,her technique,so graceful like a dancer,she had enjoyed her figth very much. She wondered why someone of her skill would even be needed to be tested.

Sakura=8/8..I salute you Pink Lady.

Mint.

Kiky was amazed,she coudl tell that her creator must of been advanced,Mint with her arm looked like more 2 agaisnt 1,she wondered though if the arm controlled the figth more then she did,but she nodded in approval,she was good if he had control over that arm.

Mint=7/8

Kurai.

She was practically laughing her head off,he had to fight an andriod!! Though he took it well and showed his impressive fire skills and combat.Though maybe he would have to save his breath...though she foudn it cute that he had a lucky charm.

Kurai=7/8 heh Kuri ..

Aldora.

She had to adjust her cameras,she had sworn she had seen something black on the girls hands,she lifted up her goggles and looked closely at the computer screen. "hmm..instresting.." She twirled a black strand of hair,it took her a while before she decided this.

Aldora=6/8

Setari.

Spelling mistakes,but yes,I see now why you became a Mod so quickly!! ^0^ Awesome rping skills and fighting incrediable!!

8/8 4laugh
PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 4:30 pm


((*salutes back to Joy* lol))

Ying-Hua caught on almost instantly when she saw nothing enter the testing room when the test began. Her opponent would be invisible making this one of the more interesting fights. Tapping the corners of her eyes, the invisible opponent became visible to her. It had been a clever fight where this student had been required to act on other senses besides sight.

"I'm very impressed, Aldora. It isn't an easy task to take on an invisible opponent, yet you handled it nicely while keeping your poise. Excellent!"

((OOC~haha of course i expected nothink less from the amazink aileen! something isk missing though...not sure if its more description or style...))

7/8

SaKuRaBaBy


HiddenJoy

PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 4:55 pm


Poppy stood infront of the doors,wooden staff in hand,the blue orb which floated in the middle of the cureled end, glittered,sensing the excitement from its Master. Poppy had to leave Bloom back in the hideout,it said she wans't allowed to bring anything with her,except her weapons. Two daggers strapped around her ankels,no pink socks today,she was bare footed . And a few bombs she had made hidden in unknown places.

Poppy walked in as the doors opened,her tail was wagging so it was just a blare of colour of red. She looked up at the glass window,she blinked,and then waved,smiling childishly.

She then turned,noticing the doors on the other side of the room had opened. Out came a robtic red dragon,Poppy tail stopped wagging as the gaint beast entered the ring,its head touching the ceiling. nee waa..

Poppy grinned as she got in a figthing stance,the bell rung,the dragon shooted towards her,for its size it was fast on its feet. Poppy backed fliped,then as she darted to the right her lips moved swiftly,she summoned 3 large eagles,they came shooting out of the blue orb

The dragon stopped,thrashing its long tail as the birds pecked at his eyes breaking the glass and reducing his good eye sight the other brids pecked and scratched at his body.Poppy jumped high into the air,then spun kick in the middle of his four head the dragon stepped back,her small kick had had packed a good punch a dent was made in the shape of her clawed foot.As she landed on his long nose and stabbed down at him,breaking through the fake scales ,then metal,she felt a clawed hand swipe at her,she tried to back flip,to get hit. She flew through the air and hit the wall.

Her eagles stopepd their pecking,long enough to get bashed into the ground by the dragon. Poppys eyes then abalzed as they cried out and whisped back into her blue orb. Poppy stood up,a long cut down her back,her white sweater torn,but luckily stopped to stop any panty shot. The deep wound was bleeding serverly,though Poppy was to absorbed in her rage to feel it.

She held out "Split up!!!" Soon 10 look alieks appeared making a lien fo Poppys,all the same look of anger in their eyes. They darted towards the dragon,then boucned up onto him,the dragon swiped at 2,they just disspared,while the others hit it with their staffs,small giggels here and there. The dragon let otu a frustrated growl as he tried to him them,though they just slipped out of his claws range.

When he opened his mouth and began to form a large fire ball,a small sun,all fo the Poppys stopped and looked,not realaizing the dnager they were in. The dragon then let out the flame,killing off the rest,the last Poppy stood,on his shoulder,she got ready to dart away nibbingly when the dragon jsut opened its mouth and swallowed her whole!!


Poppy slid down hsi throat and into his emtal stomache.she looekd around. "holy s**t..Poppy was eatened!!" She then grinned evily..

tick,tick,tickticktickticktick

BOOM!!!! From the inside Poppy ahd set off one of her bombs,it had completely destroyed the dragon,as the smoke setteled,Poppy stood gripping her staff,her eyes hidden by her red locks,setting a very dramtic end of battle vibe around her. [/]clangg.. The dragons large head,its beady eyes still opened though dead now,hit the floor infront of Poppy. Blood dripping onto the ground from Poppys back.

She looked up,a sweet childish smile on her loveable face,acting as if nothing had happened as her tial wagged 200 km an hour."Poppy is the winner!! Hee hee!!"
PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 5:29 pm


Violet couldn't belive who entered the room. A lovely VIOLET/PURPLE haired Gurl! Violet was instantly in love with the adorable lil gal. he stared at her longly until he noticed that the battle already started. "What manner of battle is this? an invisible opponent!?" Violet leaned forward on his desk trying to see the opponent. he then looked on his nearby computer used to aid in battles and saw she was indeed fighting an invisibile opponent.

The battle ended Violet appluaded over the loudspeaker. "Congrats Aldora. you managed to use your other senses to battle the Monster. I assume it was using the energy signature isn't it? thats why you closed your eyes. However i suggest you train up on your ability to last in battle. You seemed to have used a very desperate attacks near the end."

Pepper Made her mouth with a very happy smile as she leaned foward into the mic. "Aldora! thats your name right!? way to go representin Lil gals that can kick a** X3!!! I am very proud of your battle, such a young kid with so much experience! w00t!"

((Good job Aileen. Thinking up such a creative monster. However i was quite dissapointed in the battle flow. Some movements were hard to comprehend and the begining was rather rough.. Overall I think somone who reads fanfics all day should have done a little better job. But your busy now and then. I have to keep that in mind.))

7/8 ((i really wanted to give a 6 but i took in consideration of you being busy all the time XP ))

KuraiGekkou


KuraiGekkou

PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 5:47 pm


Violet watched blushing slightly from the cute antics of the Inu-human summoner. he then reached for the mic. "Very well played Poppy. As expected from a summoner you would be able to take something as big as a dragon. And as you demostrated you just did so. You got a few cuts here and there but thats typical in a battle. Using a spell to create multiple versions of yourself was a very good idea to avoid such damage from a giant monster such as a dragon. Well played well played, and you left your extra shirts at my Summer house btw.. XP "

Pepper reached for the mic and leaned over onto the table due to her short height. "auu.. why do they have to make the mics so short... Poppy! I love you! your so adorable ^^ you used such simple summoning spells though! I expected you to summmon a very strong monster such as a dragon itself! but you used simple summons such as the birds! It just shows that you know what your doing! Excellent work!"

((Ai-ya... Spelling errors here and Grammer errors all over. It made such a well-planned battle difficult to follow. I strongly reccomend you proof-read your posts now and then to avoid such a mistake. However the battle was very nicely kept in touch with your character. I suppose You will improve later on. Like you did before. You made such a vast improvment since the first time we met Joy ^^ Im proud! ))

5/8
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