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 Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 10:07 am
dragn99 so... too late for me to be in Chapter 2? How bout chapter three? Please? I dont care if I end up being comic relief (hint hint nudge wink) I am already on chapter 4 but i have the perfect place to add you. Meta_Fish xD Everyone wants to be a part of everything! Luckily, me, being such the badass that I am, am the first one to be in everything! Well... probablyjustbecauseImadetheCultbutwhatever.It is a nice to see so many of us making stuff people want to be in. Of Course the badass is always the first one in right?
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 10:16 am
Seaphron Meta_Fish xD Everyone wants to be a part of everything! Luckily, me, being such the badass that I am, am the first one to be in everything! Well... probablyjustbecauseImadetheCultbutwhatever.It is a nice to see so many of us making stuff people want to be in. Of Course the badass is always the first one in right? ^_^ I suppose so.
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 11:04 am
It is nice that we all want to make something to contribute.
But if I were to do something, I want something original.
Hand Drawn humor webcomic?
Maybeh. ninja
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 11:10 am
SWEET!
Thanks Seaphron!
Two tweaks needed...I need to be more agresso yet cool...also...I needs Mum (A clever drink I invented by mixing Rum and Milk! Us nekos loves it! heart )
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 11:17 am
Axl93 It is nice that we all want to make something to contribute. But if I were to do something, I want something original. Hand Drawn humor web comic? Maybeh. ninja I do see your point, but this i s what I am good at so this is what i have come up with. *shrugs* Hero Maul SWEET! Thanks Seaphron! Two tweaks needed...I need to be more agresso yet cool...also...I needs Mum (A clever drink I invented by mixing Rum and Milk! Us nekos loves it! heart ) You do become more aggressive, I guarantee that. Mum? Hmm, I'll think about adding that.
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 11:17 am
I like a good story once in a while. I like it.
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 3:13 pm
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 3:14 pm
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 3:16 pm
Thank you Lavable. So what do you think so far?
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 3:27 pm
Seaphron Thank you Lavable. So what do you think so far? I think it's awsome, and will probably be better as the story moves.
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 3:41 pm
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 3:49 pm
Hahaha, I was thinking "I bet I'll come in at the last second." and BaM! I did. It's awesome, that's for sure Seaphron. But just to make it easier to read, you might want to insert a line break when it goes from one person talking to another person talking.
But it does rock.
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 3:49 pm
Lavableman I think it's awsome, and will probably be better as the story moves. Sweet, I hope everyone feels like that. It was orginally supposed to be bowser but i figured it was to early to have him in the story.
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 3:59 pm
If I might make a suggestion? I think that you should make the instalments shorter. That way, it will be less intimidating and the chapters will come faster.
You should also make a little break in between paragraphs because I can barely keep track of where I am in the story. xd There just some suggestions!
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 4:01 pm
Sherriff of Nowhere If I might make a suggestion? I think that you should make the instalments shorter. That way, it will be less intimidating and the chapters will come faster. You should also make a little break in between paragraphs because I can barely keep track of where I am in the story. xd There just some suggestions! Yeah i am planning on doing the space between paragraphs for some reason when i copied it over from word the spaces went away. I am also going to do the line break suggestion of Fish's. As for shorter installments i was thinking about doing that already. Or splitting bigger chapters into sub chapters.
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