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Kerii-tan

PostPosted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 10:46 am


Bump-eth XD
PostPosted: Wed May 16, 2007 10:46 am


I just gotta ask this...why are you asking us this when its so obvious that it's really good. Some people draw things that don't even look human and this...this is some of the best fanart I've seen!

If only you could make me want to scan pictures in too...

InuyashasEars


Kankura-chan

PostPosted: Fri May 18, 2007 2:40 pm


It's certainly a start, but I wont lie. I don't think it's all that great at this point, you need to work on your proportions the most. I think you have some real potential though, so if you like drawing as much as I do then you should really give it your all^^

(Please don't be offended by my constructive criticism, I'm just super picky, even when it comes to my own work ^^;;; wink
PostPosted: Fri May 18, 2007 2:53 pm


InuyashasEars
I just gotta ask this...why are you asking us this when its so obvious that it's really good. Some people draw things that don't even look human and this...this is some of the best fanart I've seen!

If only you could make me want to scan pictures in too...


no offense, it is 'ok' artwork if she's a beginer, but in my opinion- it's by no means the best art I've ever seen. Again, I'm not trying to be rude, but you can't really help someone want to try harder at achieving some serious improvements when every one is telling them that they don't need to improve. I think the best thing every one could do is to point out flaws and suggest what they could do to improve.

example: The proportions (I find) are a bit off...in some cases alot...the joints are all pointed..(shoulders, fingers etc...) some parts of the body are too small (chests, shoulders, arms and legs aren't wide or long enough, smetimes they are too long/wide) The eyes a bit too large sometimes. Ears aren't very well aligned to the propper area of the face, (hint, the tip of the ear should always line up with your eyebrows, the earlobe should always line up with the highest point of your jawline)

sorry if I seam really bitchy^^; I really am trying to just give helpful tips and pointers. The drawing style itself seams a bit amateur and beginer, so it's not too bad to work on it and develope it as your own. As for the real problem- proportioning- I suggest you look at Anatomy textbooks and try to draw the basic shapes of some nude (yes, nude XD if you draw clothes on it you may not really see the shape, try to draw the shapes and get use to them-then you can practice with things like creases and wrinkles in clothing...)

Basic overall body shape tips:

The eyes should be centered on the head,(some people don't draw the top of the heads large enough, making it look too flat...and brainless....) lol, the eyes should be centered in the head (from top to bottom of your face, cut it in half going across and that's where the eyes should be.) Lips' corners usually line up with the pupils of your eye going up...

now I'm just ranting XD sorry if it sounded like I was giving a lesson, I'm just kinda bored and am really agrivated since I have no scanner to post my colored works, and my neighbour isn't home for me to go over and use his photoshop XD

Kankura-chan


Xyvan

PostPosted: Fri May 25, 2007 2:56 pm


I HART U.

ShinoZaku is one of my personal favorites, and you did a great job on everything, in my opinion. My art stinks, you're good!
PostPosted: Sat May 26, 2007 12:14 pm


xd I have to agree with `Shino Aburame` on this. 3nodding

streakedrainwolf

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