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 Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 6:41 pm
Thanks. =3 Actually, Raurhound suggjested it on the idea dump thread. I saw the picture and fell instantly in love with the animal. 3nodding
They said it was okay If I used it... So I did some research and fell even more in love with the animal. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 7:28 pm
I think it works very well, good luck on your quest! (I need it too)
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Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 3:18 pm
=3
Thanks. Best of luck with your quest, too. ^^
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Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 7:06 pm
Looks really interesting good luck!! heart
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 6:06 pm
Thanks wolf. Good luck to your quest as well. ^^
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Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 2:48 pm
So... her plane was a layover flight? Where was she when she got off with motion-sickness?
Also, the meeting with the "stranger" in the cafe seems very... unrealistic. If she missed her flight she could apply for a refund at the airport (or her parents could send her more money). Also, she's quite trusting of this stranger o_O The way you describe her reactions doesn't convince me that it's possible for her to have such blind trust in a guy who's obviously acting supiciously and asking for way too much information for a guy just offering a helpful ride. She practically allowed herself to be abducted! I think that seriously needs some overhauling.
Anyways, that's just how I see it. Cute civet <3
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Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 3:42 pm
Thanks, Jigglypuff.
I agree. I think I need to revamp and tweak it a little.
As far as your questions go, I didnt set a specific location but she'll be along the south-east cost. She was to travel there and board another plane which would take her north, according to the provided air-line tickets which her boss sent her.
As far as refunds go I'll need to tweak that. She isn't very close with her family and hasen't really spoken with them sence she moved out.
I think I went over-board with her trusting guy. She is easily gullable, but as you said I was a little un-realistic.
I'll contemplate this and fix her personality and history. Thankyou for your constructive critisizm, and your compliment. I'll get to it right away.
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Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 3:52 pm
Just a random idea...
What If she had bought the tickets herself? What if she traveled down to the south-east cost to visit her child-hood friend (Non-imidate family and ex-boyfriend work too.) , Guy, and tell him the great news? Guy could act all sweet-like to her and suggjest she get a ride with a close friend. He would betray and decive her and sell her to moreau. Would that work?
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Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 4:55 pm
I revamped it. Is it better?
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Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2006 2:23 pm
Oh yes. I like that.
It might work. <3
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Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2006 4:34 pm
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Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2006 5:01 pm
Hey, good character… you’ve got some good ideas in that head of yours.
And like the animal.
But the whole Mormon thing sorta confused me… o.O
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Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 6:40 am
Yeah.... I'm revamping that part. I am a mormon, and I kinda wanted to get out there that Casey will be following the mormon principles (For the most part)
Your not the only one confused. I'm revamping her personality, and hopefully it will make more sence in a bit.
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Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 6:41 am
The whole feeling out of place thing is important. whee
Its kinda a detailed background which is a secret to my character. If your character can pry it out of Casey then so be it. lol. ^^
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