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The Watchtower Vice Captain
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 Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 3:38 am
eek WOW! I envy you people who can write stories like that! I really enjoyed it. I hope it's ok to post here?
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 8:32 am
oh yeah, now that it's done post all you wnat
and thnx whee xd
i had to do a lot of revising, and a lot of adding, it wasn't as long as i wanted it to be though...
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Posted: Mon Aug 28, 2006 11:30 am
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Posted: Mon Aug 28, 2006 12:26 pm
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 8:19 pm
You showed it to me last year. Either during math or theatre.
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 12:40 pm
oh...i did a lot of revision though
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Posted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 9:08 am
I don't go into this subforum often...
That was good, aside from the word "thought" always missing the last "t"
and the other spelling errors, but I don't know why I always see those...
makes you wonder who the other people really were...
You ever stop to think that, though not to the great proximity of the two universes in the story, we could be living in a universe among several universes that we could be viewing in our everyday gaming, reading, and even movie and TV show watching?
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Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 2:22 pm
Red Crosell XIII I don't go into this subforum often... That was good, aside from the word "thought" always missing the last "t" and the other spelling errors, but I don't know why I always see those... makes you wonder who the other people really were... You ever stop to think that, though not to the great proximity of the two universes in the story, we could be living in a universe among several universes that we could be viewing in our everyday gaming, reading, and even movie and TV show watching? Sadly I think about that quite often. Especially when I should be focusing on classwork sweatdrop
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The Watchtower Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 3:08 am
Red Crosell XIII I don't go into this subforum often... That was good, aside from the word "thought" always missing the last "t" and the other spelling errors, but I don't know why I always see those... makes you wonder who the other people really were... You ever stop to think that, though not to the great proximity of the two universes in the story, we could be living in a universe among several universes that we could be viewing in our everyday gaming, reading, and even movie and TV show watching? My head hurts.
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 9:09 am
umikotheblueelf Red Crosell XIII I don't go into this subforum often... That was good, aside from the word "thought" always missing the last "t" and the other spelling errors, but I don't know why I always see those... makes you wonder who the other people really were... You ever stop to think that, though not to the great proximity of the two universes in the story, we could be living in a universe among several universes that we could be viewing in our everyday gaming, reading, and even movie and TV show watching? Sadly I think about that quite often. Especially when I should be focusing on classwork sweatdrop in actuality, that is kind of what i based the story off of, that impossoble possibility of everything Red said
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