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 Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 3:17 pm
digi.t.s damn! nice battle, who to choose...saleeria was pretty nice but i gotta give it to mak for the lyrical edge if only slight. with that said mak did feed ever so slightly at the end so, is that legal? Thanks, for the vote, but that is not considered feeding. Take into consideration if I hadn't applied the quotation marks. You probably wouldn't even realize I placed that line there. Any emcee could have used such words, repetition can be coincidental, however I used it to my advantage. I'm not stupid, and I know how much needs to be applied to win, even if by a single point in measure. 3nodding My skill varies depending upon my flow's ability or performance. Remember that...bitches.
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 3:30 pm
Makairo Damn Saleeria..I didn't think you'd get so fancy for this battle. The verse I had prepared wouldn't have given me the win, I was expecting alot less effort. I had to go back and put some work in afterall...I ended up making an entirely new verse. Anyway, here it is folks. This befuddled feminine entity wishes to become an enemy, Honestly advertising endeavors to become severed- Never to put an end to me, I'm infinite and endless - an oasis in the desert, You exist not to create but only to provide many men pleasure- Orally and within: you spew the flesh's sin, I grin as my rim looms over your skin, I allow a final request before penetration - willingly or not, This satisfaction factory widened the entrance showing off the pinkish remnants of her shabby G-Spot, The beast raids her within and rots the opponent outside, When the release of the seed is completed I draw back to see eyes rolled back- and a mouth wide, Vaginal secretions blood shot and dry, Arms once raised to the sky after the rise and fall of a near endless roller coaster ride, Lyrical rape - I've done you in and stained your skin, I've pained your brain and claimed you for the win, I've been in and out - I've seen the rubbish you plan to use to allure- others to accept you with the assumption that you're pure, History's pages of media could never amass your disgustin' acts, Compared to the most major sluts and body perveryors Saleeria ranks above the highest of the most perverted retailers, Luckily this match exists only via text, My level of disrespect has yet to be proximated in full, I've dominated the this filthy animal's pul- pit and ripped open the definition of a b***h, "If you cannot comprehend, I’ll put it simply, you just suck" d**k. You're sho....mean..... xd
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 3:57 pm
Saleeria Makairo Damn Saleeria..I didn't think you'd get so fancy for this battle. The verse I had prepared wouldn't have given me the win, I was expecting alot less effort. I had to go back and put some work in afterall...I ended up making an entirely new verse. Anyway, here it is folks. This befuddled feminine entity wishes to become an enemy, Honestly advertising endeavors to become severed- Never to put an end to me, I'm infinite and endless - an oasis in the desert, You exist not to create but only to provide many men pleasure- Orally and within: you spew the flesh's sin, I grin as my rim looms over your skin, I allow a final request before penetration - willingly or not, This satisfaction factory widened the entrance showing off the pinkish remnants of her shabby G-Spot, The beast raids her within and rots the opponent outside, When the release of the seed is completed I draw back to see eyes rolled back- and a mouth wide, Vaginal secretions blood shot and dry, Arms once raised to the sky after the rise and fall of a near endless roller coaster ride, Lyrical rape - I've done you in and stained your skin, I've pained your brain and claimed you for the win, I've been in and out - I've seen the rubbish you plan to use to allure- others to accept you with the assumption that you're pure, History's pages of media could never amass your disgustin' acts, Compared to the most major sluts and body perveryors Saleeria ranks above the highest of the most perverted retailers, Luckily this match exists only via text, My level of disrespect has yet to be proximated in full, I've dominated the this filthy animal's pul- pit and ripped open the definition of a b***h, "If you cannot comprehend, I’ll put it simply, you just suck" d**k. You're sho....mean..... xd But I did it with love.
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 4:04 pm
Umm... I think Makairo gets this. But i'd hate to toe - to - toe with either of you.
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 5:04 pm
We need definite votes, please.
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 5:05 pm
Makairo gets my vote. But you were both brutal.
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 5:10 pm
Technically that's 3-0, but I want one more solid vote for the definite win.
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 6:00 pm
Saleera. Her punches were better and it was written effectively.
Not to say that it was a bad verse from Mak, I just thought Saleera was better.
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 7:05 pm
Her verse had a good flow, good punchlines and was pretty balanced throughout, however in my opinion it grew weaker towards the end. The beginning and middle were quite strong. I feel as if my entire verse was constant, and that's why I deserve victory.
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 7:07 pm
Makairo digi.t.s damn! nice battle, who to choose...saleeria was pretty nice but i gotta give it to mak for the lyrical edge if only slight. with that said mak did feed ever so slightly at the end so, is that legal? Thanks, for the vote, but that is not considered feeding. Take into consideration if I hadn't applied the quotation marks. You probably wouldn't even realize I placed that line there. Any emcee could have used such words, repetition can be coincidental, however I used it to my advantage. I'm not stupid, and I know how much needs to be applied to win, even if by a single point in measure. 3nodding My skill varies depending upon my flow's ability or performance. Remember that...bitches. Ya lost me...How's it not feeding again
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 7:11 pm
SilverSpyder Makairo digi.t.s damn! nice battle, who to choose...saleeria was pretty nice but i gotta give it to mak for the lyrical edge if only slight. with that said mak did feed ever so slightly at the end so, is that legal? Thanks, for the vote, but that is not considered feeding. Take into consideration if I hadn't applied the quotation marks. You probably wouldn't even realize I placed that line there. Any emcee could have used such words, repetition can be coincidental, however I used it to my advantage. I'm not stupid, and I know how much needs to be applied to win, even if by a single point in measure. 3nodding My skill varies depending upon my flow's ability or performance. Remember that...bitches. Ya lost me...How's it not feeding again It's very simple: When you feed you give a response to a specific quote, segment, line or bar(s) that your opponent used..for example.. Opponent: You look like eggs! Response: Said I look like eggs? ***** can get scrambled with a side of bacon! Understand? I could have left that line without the quotes, but I chose to leave them there as a sign for people to notice that both of our ending lines just so happened to hold identical content. It isn't feeding because I'm not using one of her own lines in a reverse or an insult to her, I'm just using a random line on my own verse.
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 7:17 pm
Ok...ya got off this time domokun
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 7:19 pm
You're bending the rules to point of snapping...
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 7:21 pm
Ugh..why don't you guys get this?
You would not have noticed if not for my quotes.
I'm not stupid enough to highlight something if it would be breaking the rules.
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 7:31 pm
Her performance here seems like such a significant different from her previous battle. If these new people are getting this good I should step up my game..a little.
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