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I larfed at it....here is my "review!" (not that I'm actually qualified or anything...but....)

Overall, a very well done story. It had some very good, funny points, and an interesting plot. The sentence structure needed some work, as did the vocabulary, but you have a knack for creating believable situations. The story could have benifitted from a bit more detail, and the dialouge was a bit confusing at points. Still, it was very good. Nice job!

There's a clip somewhere that has all the names he's ever been called beside the Doctor in, where he's called Theta Sigma by Time Lords he knew and was taught by in the Academy. Also that he can't remember things unless he wants to, ie. his family. *wonders if she can find the link again*

fourtysecondscarf's covered everything I wanted to say except that I'd imagine Rose to tell it in a much more colloquial way - at some points she sounds like a talking book rather than herself. Nice fic though!