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KatDrama

Dapper Dabbler

PostPosted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 6:03 pm


((Sure vazh, that'd be good! And for this exercise then I'll be a student. And War will be a student too, got that War? Now get into your gym clothes, and instruct us where we're going and what we're going to do Vazh-sensei!))

KD jogged out of the girl's locker room. "Ugh, how can you guys stand these tiny shorts." She complained to the girl standing in line next to her as she tried to adjust her Japanese school girl shorts. "And these shirts..." She whined as she tried to move her arms. "Everything in Japan's so tiny." She fumed as they waited in lines for their gym instructor. Her green eyes curiously observed the boys across the school yard as they were doing some stretches.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 6:13 pm


KatDrama
((Sure vazh, that'd be good! And for this exercise then I'll be a student. And War will be a student too, got that War? Now get into your gym clothes, and instruct us where we're going and what we're going to do Vazh-sensei!))

KD jogged out of the girl's locker room. "Ugh, how can you guys stand these tiny shorts." She complained to the girl standing in line next to her as she tried to adjust her Japanese school girl shorts. "And these shirts..." She whined as she tried to move her arms. "Everything in Japan's so tiny." She fumed as they waited in lines for their gym instructor. Her green eyes curiously observed the boys across the school yard as they were doing some stretches.
"Ok now we will hone your Rp fighting skill everyone get a partner to spar."

Tanis Mizu

Dangerous Gekko


KatDrama

Dapper Dabbler

PostPosted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 6:13 pm


((sry guys, gonna have to cut this short. I have to go now. ttyl))
PostPosted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 6:19 pm


"aargh" DWG said aggitated, "Why do they make the neck so tight?"

DaWarGod


Tanis Mizu

Dangerous Gekko

PostPosted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 6:22 pm


DaWarGod
"aargh" DWG said aggitated, "Why do they make the neck so tight?"
"I don't know but get ready."
PostPosted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 3:01 pm


"ok" DWG said as he walks out of the locker room.

DaWarGod


Tanis Mizu

Dangerous Gekko

PostPosted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 3:45 pm


"ok now get ready."
PostPosted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 7:28 pm


"Vazh-sensei!" KD raised her hand, her voice was a pleading, whining tone. "What are we going to spar with?" Her kat tail swished with annoyance.

KatDrama

Dapper Dabbler


Tanis Mizu

Dangerous Gekko

PostPosted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 4:01 pm


KatDrama
"Vazh-sensei!" KD raised her hand, her voice was a pleading, whining tone. "What are we going to spar with?" Her kat tail swished with annoyance.
"Good question first well spar with just of fists and feet then well move on to weapons."
PostPosted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 5:00 pm


((Vazh, a good RP post consists not only of dialouge, but of actions. Your post could've gone better as:

Sensei says:
"Good question!" Vazh laughed slightly at himself for forgetting to mention that important part. "First we'll spar with just fists and feet, then we'll move on to weapons."


It's important to add background, feeling, and action to your posts. If there's not much action going on then try to elaborate. Also notice the grammar changes I made to your sentence.))

"Oh." KD's eyes traveled downwards as her tail wrapped around her legs in a mopey fashion. "Do I really have to?" She complained, digging the toe of her sneaker into the dust, her arms rested behind her in a bashful manner.

KatDrama

Dapper Dabbler


Tanis Mizu

Dangerous Gekko

PostPosted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 5:10 pm


KatDrama
((Vazh, a good RP post consists not only of dialouge, but of actions. Your post could've gone better as:

Sensei says:
"Good question!" Vazh laughed slightly at himself for forgetting to mention that important part. "First we'll spar with just fists and feet, then we'll move on to weapons."


It's important to add background, feeling, and action to your posts. If there's not much action going on then try to elaborate. Also notice the grammar changes I made to your sentence.))

"Oh." KD's eyes traveled downwards as her tail wrapped around her legs in a mopey fashion. "Do I really have to?" She complained, digging the toe of her sneaker into the dust, her arms rested behind her in a bashful manner.
His face went into a seirous look as he looked at KD "Yes we must" he said in a seirous tone but lighetned "Afterwords you will be able to go higher in weapons rank." he looked at the two and sighed and raised his hand "Begin!" HE said bringing his hand down. (Is that better?)
PostPosted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 6:15 pm


((*claps* Good! Good! You're getting better! blaugh Um, well I got a PM from DWG saying that he's switched accounts, and DaWarGod is no more, so whether or not he'll be back to this guild is hard to tell... stare ))

KD blinked in surprise as her teacher gave the starting signal for the fist fights. All around her students broke out into spars. She gazed sadly at the patch of ground before her. "Um..sensei?" She asked hesitantly. "Um...I don't have a partner."

KatDrama

Dapper Dabbler


Tanis Mizu

Dangerous Gekko

PostPosted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 6:21 pm


KatDrama
((*claps* Good! Good! You're getting better! blaugh Um, well I got a PM from DWG saying that he's switched accounts, and DaWarGod is no more, so whether or not he'll be back to this guild is hard to tell... stare ))

KD blinked in surprise as her teacher gave the starting signal for the fist fights. All around her students broke out into spars. She gazed sadly at the patch of ground before her. "Um..sensei?" She asked hesitantly. "Um...I don't have a partner."
"Ya do now." he got into a sparrign stance.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 6:56 pm


KD's eyes bugged out for a moment as an agast look overtook her face. "Sensei! Surely you can't mean for me to spar with you!" She protested.

KatDrama

Dapper Dabbler


Tanis Mizu

Dangerous Gekko

PostPosted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 1:56 pm


"Yes but I won't be rentless." He said still calm
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