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I walked in the door expecting to find him on the sofa nursing a White Russian coolly,...
Maybe "I walked in the door expecting to find him on the sofa,
coolly nursing a White Russian,"
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Micah was here to tell me goodbye and that he was planning to marry some young secretary that had caught his eye at work, and wish me luck in my learning how to not be insane.
Can you get rid of one of the "and". Maybe "Micah was here to tell me goodbye
, that he was planning to marry some young secretary that had caught his eye at work, and wish me luck in my learning how to not be insane."
As usual, very nice
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