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Jonathan have a big and Strong belief in Saint, More than Other things, he have a Plastic Picture of every one of his Saint in his wallet (With this pictures and Some Candles Jonathan construct an improvised Altar in every place that he is), and use a bracelet with same characteristic.

1.- Saint Expedito: Saint of the Fast Causes: It was a roman militar, who live in the IV Century, Who decided change his life and turning in the Christianism, In that moment the Spirit of the Bad appear to him in form of a raven saying "Cras, Cras, Cras" (Tomorrow, Tomorrow, Tomorrow) That decition do it Tomorrow!!!, Saint Expedito, Angry for the insolence of the devil, kill the crown meanwhile he shout. "TODAY!!!!". Is for this that Saint Expedito is the Father of the Fast Causes. Also represent the Change of Life of Jonathan.

2.- Father Alberto Hurtado: The father Alberto Hurtado was the creator of the Chilean Shelter Called "Christ's House", a Shelter who brings home to homeless people, boys, elders, etc. A men who irradiate love. The ideal of person than Jonathan wants to be for others.

3.- Father Pio: One of the most greath mystic of our century, His learning of incondicional love to the sacred Jesus's Hearth. Know like the Confessor father for his long times that he take for confess to god (like 16 hours/day). When Jonathan do something that disturb his mind the first thing that he do is pray for mercy in a Father Pio's Altar.

4.- Santa Teresa de los Andes: Santa Teresita de los Andes, a Chilean's Saint. A woman who give his life to server to god, One of his most important teaching was "Follow the path of the sacrifice brings Human Balance to our Spirit and opens the doors for the True happiness". A teaching who Jonathan try to remember ever.

5.- The Sacred Jesus's Heart: The origin in the belief of the Sacred Jesus's heart come from Saint Margarita de Alacoque, She was the first person that see the represent of Jesus and his Heart, Is more a protect saint, Jonathan pray for his wisdown and protection every day.

Okey... I'm trying to do the best work in My character, read every day his personality, story, background and trying to add more info that I think that John Need.

But there are a point that you can go if you don't have help, And for that I need Critique. I'm searching for Critique (More Critique) Everyone need Critique, and for that Fact, I'll try to critique every quester that QRP with me. Also have the idea of Add something in the End of every of my owns QRP thread that I make.

Also Add a Poll in the Thread. Well that is All... Thanks.

Hmmm, I can't offer much criticism. I like the character, the personality, the background, the reason for his making it to the island. He's well fleshed out in all areas.

The only thing I can honestly say is that you still need to work on your english a little more. If you wish, I can spellcheck/correct the grammar for you if you'd like.

Besides that, it gets my thumbs up! mrgreen

Hey Chi! ^^ Good character. I like it. You have a very interesting background and personality. I've learned several things about Chile that I never knew before. =D

If your worried about your English grammar and spelling, Microsoft computers usually come with 'Microsoft Word'

Just copy (ctrl + c) and paste (ctrl + v) your text into a blank document. It will put red and green lines under the words and sentances that are incorrect. Just right-click on the words that have that problem and it will bring up a menue. It will provide corrections for your sentances/words. Just click on the one you think looks most correct and it will fix it for you. =3

Thanks for the donations. =3 Good luck on your quest. You should put up a wish-list for all the things you still need. ^^

ops, this is shameful... sweatdrop

and a boost for you ^^