Alright, some minor spelling errors that I'm fixing:
Question 2: Changed MARK to AOYAMA-KUN (because Mark is the dub name). Also removed one of the "next time"s from option D to remove repetition.
Question 5: Fixed the spelling of "tambourine" and "castanets"
Question 9: Fixed the spelling of "concerned"
The following I am not fixing but I feel as though I should point out:
Question 8: Pudding's attack is not a boulder. It is also not a trench, regardless of what Alfred Kahn thinks. Here, I'll quote a passage from a fanfiction chapter I'm in the middle of writing to give you an idea of how (at least, from what I understand) it goes:
Quote:
Mew Pudding decided to get its attention in a different way. Leaping into the air, she called out, “Pudding Ring!” and summoned what looked to be a bright yellow tambourine and a brownish ring with a bell. Then, she clapped the two items together twice and, calling out “Ribbon Pudding Ring Inferno!” as she did so, she sent a large glob of pudding hurtling like a boulder directly at the vulture, creating a trench in the ground as it traveled. The purpose of this pudding blob would be to trap the vulture, making it unable to move.
Banners: Lettuce's name is spelled wrong. I can't fix that myself, but I just thought I'd point out that it's spelled wrong.
Other than that, it's a pretty good quiz. Good job!
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